On my way to work, I went back to the first volume where I had corrected a typo. I didn't expect many of the authors to comment and talk about it in the background, most of these comments are inclusive and encouraging, among them, there is a book friend of "Zhenju", who has been reading since the first chapter was released, and someone dubbed Xiu'er, which really flattered me.

Writing a book is not an easy task, the relationship between the characters and the plot twists before and after the first few volumes are a little abrupt, and some are not detailed enough, I will add them in the front in the future.

Here I'm going to review, I'm blind! I didn't see so many typos, which can't be an excuse for me to use my mobile phone codeword, I can only say that I am not careful.

We sincerely apologize and ask for your forgiveness. Try not to make mistakes in the future, and proofread it after writing.

In addition, many book lovers get it wrong. The protagonist has two younger sisters, one is a beggar girl who appears at the beginning of the relationship, Xiu'er.

There is also a girl from the Guo family, Guo Lian'er, after meeting the Guo family brothers.

It is Lian'er who is damaged by the fragrance and jade, not Xiu'er.

This book will be released on August 1st, so stay tuned.

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"Fifth brother, it's over!"

It is better to say that it is a secret passage than a tunnel, I don't know how long it took to run, anyway, when Zhu Wu and Lan Yu were exhausted, there was no road ahead.

There was only one ladder, which hung abruptly on the wall.

"Climb up!" Zhu Wu gasped and said, "It should be the exit above!" ”

Lan Yu climbed up, the end of the ladder was the top, and hit it with his fist a few times.

"Empty?"

Then, with all his might, an exit appeared on it that could only be passed by one person.

The night breeze blows, the fresh air rushes in, and the spirit is immediately uplifted.

"Fifth brother, come up!" Sapphire climbed out first.

Outside is really a forest, there is a small courtyard in the forest, and when two people climb out, there is a violent dog barking in the courtyard.

"Wang ........."

This is probably what Zhu Chongba said, where there are horses, the two of them got closer, and the smell of the stable was first smelled in their noses, followed by the snorting of horses.

"Zhang Tianyou, this old boy, didn't use his brain in the right place." Zhu Wu sneered in his heart, "Releasing people and raising horses here is clearly to facilitate the escape one day!" ”

It's just that he did all the tricks, and he didn't expect that the first person to run out of this secret passage would be Zhu Wu.

"Wang ........."

The dog barked louder and louder, and the chain made a sound of breaking free.

"What's howling in the middle of the night? What the hell are you? ”

Suddenly, there was a dim light in the house in the small courtyard, and then a man poked his head out of it with a lamp, looking left and right.

"Dad, come back quickly, the dog barks so badly, is someone coming?"

The words of the woman in the house did not make the man vigilant, but looked back at the house, "Where did the people from this place come here......

Open!

Before he finished speaking, the man fell straight down.

"Ahh

The woman in the room screamed, but after only half screaming, Lan Yu, who rushed in, stabbed her several times and lost her life.

In the blink of an eye, there were two lives, but Zhu Wu didn't blink his eyes, if he had been before, he might have felt that Lan Yu was too ruthless. But now, I didn't even move my eyelids.

The owner died, and the dog did not dare to bark. Zhu Wu squinted and walked to the front of the kennel, and a fat big dog inside whimpered twice, and immediately clamped his tail and didn't dare to bark again.

"Good fellows! Fifth brother, there are actually six horses! Lan Yu said while putting on a horse.

Zhu Wu stared at the dog with his head buried in his paws, "It just so happens that the two of us have two horses, hurry!" ”

………

After dodging a team of soldiers patrolling the night, Zhu Chongba and Xu Da, after going around the city for many times, they quietly returned to their residence.

"Brother Chong, as soon as this incident comes out today, do we have to find a chance to go back to Sizhou."

Xu Da walked in front of Zhu Chongba with a smile, and just pushed the door open, "I'm a good girl!" ”

After screaming, Xu Da then scolded, "Why don't you keep silent in the house, light a lamp, and look at a big bald head as soon as you open the door, so you can't scare me out!" ”

Zhu Chong pulled out half of it, glanced inside, and scolded with a smile, "Giving birth to a child doesn't mean giving birth to a child, it's scary!" What are you doing in our room in the middle of the night, chanting scriptures or practices? ”

At this time, Xu Da lit the lamp, and the person sitting in the room was none other than Daoyan monk Yao Guangxiao.

"Brother Chong, where did you go?" Dao Yan's eyes lit up and asked.

"It's okay, go out for a walk!" Zhu Chongba snorted haha.

"No, it smells of blood!" Dao Yan had a dog's nose, and then said, "If you don't want to say it, forget it, anyway, the truth will be revealed after dawn!" ”

Zhu Chongba changed his clothes, thought about it and said, "We didn't mean to hide it from you, but ......... about this?" Saying that, look at Xu Da, he is not hiding it, he has hidden the part where Ma Xiuying wears the letter, and the others are told the truth.

The more Dao Yan listened, the more strange he became, and when he heard it, he was stunned in the end, sitting down, looking like a living person, but his nose and eyes didn't move.

Syllable!

After a while, Dao Yan patted his bald head, "Brother Chong, you shouldn't save Ah!" ”

"Huh?" Zhu Chongba's eyes were instantly cold.

But Dao Yan didn't see it, and said to himself, "Guo Dashuai is alive and well, can he do this kind of thing?" But I can't say it's good, it's sooner or later? ”

"Brother Chong found out no, in fact, Zhu Wujianjun has been guarding against others from the beginning, and there were more than 700 people in the left army at the beginning, and he killed a lot! From top to bottom, it's all his old brothers. ”

"After Dingyuan and then Hezhou, if Zhu Wu hadn't guarded against Guo Dashuai, it stands to reason that he should have asked Dashuai to review it a long time ago, even if Dashuai didn't go, he would have asked Dashuai to send him a few deputies. Just like Brother Chong is in Sizhou, this is the relationship between the upper and lower subordinates in the army. ”

"But over there, except for Zhu Wu, who recognizes the handsome, who else recognizes? The soldiers were recruited by himself, the officers were recruited by him, and the quartermaster Sima, the official in charge of civil affairs, was also appointed by himself. ”

"If it goes on like this, it's no wonder if nothing happens! If Guo Dashuai doesn't kill him, those people under him will have to instigate him to kill Guo Dashuai! ”

"What does it have to do with whether we can save him or not?" Xu Da said with a smile on the side.

"Naturally!" Dao Yan drank half a bowl of water in one go, and then said, "Have you ever wondered, why did Zhu Wu's soldiers listen to him so much? The veterans under his command are all from Haozhou! ”

"We are also from Haozhou!" Xu Da smiled, "What's this?" ”

"Don't interrupt, listen to him!"

Zhu Chongba listened carefully, and Dao Yan was even more pretentious, "There are few people in Zhu Wujun who call him by his official name, they all call him Fifth Brother, and even people who are a few years older than him also call him Fifth Brother. ”

"In the hearts of those soldiers, Zhu Wu is the leader of the Huaixi boys, everyone gets ahead, if you want to survive in the troubled times, follow Zhu Wu!"

"That's why his soldiers only listen to him, so the talents under him are uniquely cohesive."

Dao Yan poured another sip of water, "Zhu Wu's ability to connect the two cities is because his subordinates are united. ”

"Guo Dashuai dared to kill Zhu Wu, dared to kill Zhu Wu's old brother, he dared to kill all the veterans of the Dingyuan Army?

He could swallow Dingyuanjun, but he couldn't chew it. Without Zhu Wu and the others, although the Dingyuan army has no leader, no one can bring it, and it can't be used.

At that time, the heavy starling brother invited Ying, there was a handsome order, and the heavy starling stayed in Zhu Wuzhong again. ”

"The most important!" Dao Yan smiled, "You are also from Haozhou!" Gentlemen of Haozhou! Without Zhu Wu, as well as Zhu Chongba, knot and kindness, these Huaixi soldiers are not all for you! ”

Zhu Chongba pondered for a long time and chuckled, "We understand what you mean, you mean that we shouldn't save people."

After Xiao Wu is killed, no one can control his soldiers and horses, we can rely on the identity of Haozhou townspeople, old men of the left army, to annex his soldiers and horses......"

Bang!

Zhu Chongba suddenly became angry and knocked over the table with one punch, "We Zhu Chongba have our own siblings, why should we worry about others?"

For the sake of some benefits, we will not save ourselves, and use other people's lives to fill our own ambitions

Dao Yan, we Zhu Chongba is like this in your eyes, just bury it like this? ”

"Little Monk ......"

One thing descends one thing, Daoyan monk is not afraid of heaven and earth, but Zhu Chongba has been getting along these days, and he is afraid that he will be angry.

This monk is not even in awe of heaven and earth, but when Zhu Chongba was angry, he didn't dare to breathe.

"You're a good monk, but you always like to use this sneaky trick, and you still say that you are not poisonous and not a husband!

How can a man be a husband if he is not upright and has a clear conscience?

If we are like what you said, what is the difference between us and Guo Dashuai, who is good or bad?

We want the future, and we want to be rich. But we can only take it directly, not in the bend.

We Zhu Chongba are not heroes, but we know heroes and respect heroes, and take the sages of the past dynasties as an example.

Let's not do it! ”

When he finished his fire, Dao Yan dared to whisper, "That'...... Zhu Wu escaped from the sky, and he will definitely fight with Haozhou in the future, how can Brother Chong deal with himself? ”

"Whatever, when we go back to Sizhou, we will be far away!" Zhu Chongba said in a sullen voice, "No wonder, people call us thieves who rebel, they are all short-sighted thieves!" ”

"I'm afraid you won't be able to leave!" Dao Yan sighed and said, "Brother Chong has ever thought that after Zhu Wu's rebellion, Guo Dashuai will definitely seize the military power in his hands.

I'm afraid that soon, without waiting for the official army to fight, Hehao and Hao will attack each other. ”

Zhu Chongba, Jiujiu was silent.

"Brother Chong, sleep, it's almost dawn!"

Xu Da's words made Zhu Chongba raise his head, and his deep eyes looked at the sky outside the window.

Suddenly, Zhu Chongba smiled.

It's dawn, and the show is about to begin.

Knock knock!

The war drums of Haozhou sounded.

Guo Dashuai was promoted.

………

Drive!

Zhu Wu kicked the horse's belly fiercely, and the light of dawn made his eyes brighter and brighter.

At this moment, his mood was as if he had just woken up from a nightmare, and a tear slipped from the corner of his eye.

Goodbye, heavy eight.

Goodbye, so-young.

Goodbye, Little Five.........

"Fifth brother!"

In the sound of rumbling horses' hooves, Lan Yu pulled his neck and shouted, "When will we avenge this revenge?" Dog's day, follow our dozens of brothers, and die in vain! ”

"Report it immediately, if you have a grudge, you won't stay overnight!" Zhu Wuda roared loudly, "Lao Tzu wants to use the head of the Guo family to pay tribute to the dead brothers and Lian'er sisters!" ”