This weekend, I have time to talk to you about the way to write about war. I've been thinking about this for a long time, because there is more than one reader who has complained about it.

To restore the war to the real and make it look reasonable and not child's play, it is necessary to describe the battlefield, terrain, armaments, materials and specific details of the war.

People feel the real through their five senses, such as sight, touch, smell and hearing, and feel the world through these tactile senses.

So, in order to write about the war realistically and plausibly, I had to lay out a lot of detail, including the color of the cup in the general's hand, and its name in ancient times (by the way, do you have the patience to read it?). Buckle 1 has, buckle 2 doesn't).

You can take a look at the new book (The Long Night Embers) of the squid that the platinum god loves to dive, which has a lot of descriptions of the five senses, and you will see that the five senses that appear the most are colors. This is the author's use of the five senses to make the reader feel the truth, to help the reader substitute into the wasteland world (of course, no offense, please correct if you say something wrong, forgive me, the great god should not see... ）。

But then the pace will be slow. It is not a problem for the great gods, because the previous works have proven their strength, and the reader believes that the delicacy is worth the wait. But it's not good for a little budding new person like me.,First, I don't have the pen power of platinum to portray.,War is my weakness this is admitted.,But it's more about whether to write like this.,Seeing blood or dead people.,It will make people feel heavy.,It's contrary to light-hearted humor.。 Second, this will be a long foreshadowing and length, and most readers of this book are here for light-heartedness and fun, as can be seen from the subscription. If I write in this way, people will read it, but some readers will ...... You get the idea.

Humor and seriousness are conflicting, you feel humor at the same time, you must not feel serious, these are two kinds of conflicting feelings, whether the author wants to convey humor with words, or convey seriousness, it all depends on what the reader wants to see, the book was initially positioned as light.

I haven't thought of a better way to resolve this conflict, and I may occasionally switch to writing in the future, and I'm not sure, I said before that I'm doing my own writing skills system, which is actually summarizing these things.

If sometimes it's true, I hope that I want to see a light-hearted and humorous book friend, and the patience will pass, and the pain is just that. If you see child's play, please forgive me if you want to see the real restoration, just slide a few times and pass, hold on~

Finally, ask for a vote~ Everyone can vote for it, happy weekend, bow~