Han Jiang listened to Ouyang Xiu's words, and he was all happy.

Day by day, this kid refuses to stop at all.

Han Jiang told Ouyang Xiu about Su Xiu's book cover, and also showed him the "Book of Rites" that Ouyang Xiu was responsible for.

"Look, this is the book he read when you were lecturing, he is not very old, but he has a lot of ideas!"

Ouyang Xiu took the unique "Book of Rites" and looked at it, and he was also happy.

He flipped through the book and scanned a few pages, and found that many of Su Lu's comments were written on it.

Don't say it, the comments are quite sharp, not that this paragraph is particularly cliché or that the writing of that paragraph is not good.

In short, every few paragraphs, you can see this kid pointing out the country, and he didn't even let go of the occasional interspersed obscene-lyric songs, this song is vulgar, that song is rotten, and at the end there is a sentence "tasteless" and "tasteless"!

If the person who wrote the book sees these comments, the person who wants to face should close the pen in place!

Ouyang Xiu said: "I ask him questions on weekdays, but I don't see that he can't answer." ”

"That's why it's infuriating."

Han Jiang said firmly.

"He must be fishing in troubled waters at ordinary times, and he clearly has spare time to learn, but he just deserts all day long."

Ouyang Xiule said: "It's quite annoying. ”

Han Jiang said: "I specially gave him three questions yesterday, just to touch his bottom, and you can also come to see how much he has learned." ”

Han Jiang divided two articles for Ouyang Xiu to read, and left the next two articles for himself.

Before it was time to go to Zishantang to give a lecture, Ouyang Xiu sat down in his robe and read Su Yan's two articles with Han Jiang.

Su's handwriting is still ugly, but it has improved slightly compared to before.

Look at the problem again, and it is quite accurate.

For test-taking essays, not going off topic is half the battle.

All that's left is to look at the content.

Su Lu's article is undoubtedly immature, both the point of view and the overall framework reveal a new breath of novices on the road.

But it is the recklessness of this newborn calf who is not afraid of tigers that makes his whole article refreshing.

Many of the ideas in it seem whimsical at first glance, but at first glance they seem promising!

If this kid is polished and polished well, it may not be a piece of beautiful jade.

Ouyang Xiu couldn't help but boast: "The Meishan Su family is not simple!" ”

Han Jiang also finished reading the two articles at hand, and he gave the beautifully written article to Ouyang Xiu.

"Look at this again, the kid said it was written by his friend. I see that this article is carefully written, and the writing is much higher than this kid. ”

Ouyang Xiu took the article handed by Han Jiang and read it again, only to feel that the handwriting was more than delicate, but it was a little less powerful.

Looking at the content of the article again, Xu is because the other party is still young, and many views are more one-sided.

There is a sense of innocence between the lines.

Ouyang Xiu said: "It's really good, but there are some things that can be changed." ”

As soon as the two discussed, they picked up a red pen and wrote their comments on the four articles.

They all tacitly criticized Su Lu's three articles, and the remaining one only gave serious opinions.

There's no way, this kid is already stealing and playing tricks now, why don't you praise him a few more words?

He was afraid that he would not study directly, thinking that his half bucket of water could go directly to the imperial examination!

This kind of bastard kid who can be so energetic because he is a little clever has to be beaten and beaten a lot.

When Ouyang Xiu went to give a lecture, he returned the article to Su Yan for Han Jiang by the way.

Su Lu got the essay that was sent, and looked at the red-circulated large number of revisions on it, and was a little skeptical of life.

He felt that he wrote quite well, why did he become red in the hands of Ouyang Xiu and them?

has his daughter-in-law's article on the side, and the red criticism on his three articles is too dazzling!

Su Lu was not very convinced, but after carefully reading all the red batches, he had nothing to say.

The big guy deserves to be the big guy, the problems pointed out are very accurate, the direction of revision given is also very useful, and every comment is targeted.

So, he wasn't targeted, but really wrote rubbish.

Su Lu was devastated and was very depressed when he returned home.

It wasn't until Yun Niang served him a bowl of fish belly soup that he came back to life.

The fish belly soup is thick, and the belly of the fish rolls in the pepper, which is tender and has a hint of spiciness.

In the twilight of spring, which is warm and cold, it is the season when the fish are plump, and such a bowl of fish belly soup is warm, and there are no worries.

Su Lu can do it again.

He took the article to the little lady of the Zhang family and shared with her the comments written by Ouyang Xiu and the others.

The little lady of the Zhang family originally thought that Su Lu wanted to keep the manuscript for herself, but she didn't expect that he would also enter the palace with her article and present it to Ouyang Xiu and Han Jiang.

She loves to read, not only love to read all kinds of classics, but also love to read those current texts collected by Zhang Fangping.

But she also knows that in front of the real literary giants, she can't get into their eyes as a woman.

For most men, women should be married and taught at home, and it would be good for them to understand the things in the back house, what does this kind of thing have to do with women?

Even if it is an existence like Ouyang Xiu and Han Jiang, I am afraid it will not be an exception.

The little lady of the Zhang family was full of surprise, and her tone was full of disbelief: "Really, Mr. Ouyang, the comments they gave?" ”

Su Lu said: "Will I still lie to you?" I didn't say that you wrote it, I just said that it was written by my friend, and they gave a review by the way! ”

Speaking of reviews, Su Lu was unhappy again.

"I'll tell you, I suspect they're all targeting me, look at your comments over there, and then look at my comments on my side, it's so hateful, I'm about to be scolded to death by them!"

The little lady of the Zhang family was so complained by him, and couldn't help but take Su Yan's three articles and look at Ouyang Xiu and Han Jiang's comments.

After reading it, the little lady of the Zhang family found that it made sense.

She said hesitantly: "If you follow their opinions, the article will definitely go to the next level." ”

"I know that too."

Su Lu was depressed when he understood this.

"I thought I was writing pretty well, but after their comments, I realized that I was writing so badly!"

The little lady of the Zhang family didn't say the sentence "You are not yet ten years old".

She knew that Ouyang Xiu and they must be optimistic about Su Liu, so they took this effort to beat him.

Since Su Lu didn't realize that he didn't have to worry about whether the article was written well or badly at his age, she naturally wouldn't remind Su Lu.

The little lady of the Zhang family smiled: "Whether they are targeting you or not, aren't we earning it when we receive good opinions?" What we learn is our own. ”

When Su Lu heard this, he felt reasonable.

can get the comments of the big guys, it is true that they have made a lot of money, and others do not have such a good opportunity.

Or is his daughter-in-law smart!

Su Lu's eyes lit up.

"I decided that I would often write some articles to ask them for advice in the future, and then bind these comments into a book as an heirloom!"

Su Lu said as he rubbed his hands.

"It is said that the building near the water gets the moon first, it is rare for me to be so close to Mr. Ouyang and them, I must seize the opportunity."

The plan to ask for the big guy's authentic handiwork has been in Su Yan's heart for a long time, but it is not popular to sign this year, so he can't rashly take a small book and ask the big guy one by one.

Now his daughter-in-law has inspired him!

If you could get a comment, wouldn't it be much more meaningful than a signature?

At least then their children and grandchildren can learn to write essays on these reviews!

Their heirloom has both room for appreciation and practical value, right!

Su Lu said to the little lady of the Zhang family with great interest: "It's better to do this, in the future, we will take turns to write questions and write articles together, and then I will be responsible for giving Mr. Ouyang their comments!" Such a good gentleman, no need to be in vain! ”

The little lady of the Zhang family was stunned when she heard Su Lu talk about the heirloom just now, and when she heard Su Lu want to take her with her, her heart was even more sour.

Her father and brother are also open-minded, but they won't be as indifferent as Su Lu, she loves to read and write more articles than to be a female celebrity.

He even went out of his way to support her in learning things that girls don't use at all.

How can there be such a person as Su Lu in the world?

I'm afraid there will only be such a Su Lu in the world, right?

"Okay."

The little lady of the Zhang family should take a bite.

She raised her eyes and looked at Su Lu, and said casually: "My name is Wan Rou, the grass is Wan Rou, the spear is Soft, and the wood is soft, taken from the poem 300 miles of 'Wan Bi Sang Rou'. If I want to sign the article in the future, what do you think should be the best name? ”

The two have known each other for almost two years, and Su Lu only knows that the little lady of the Zhang family ranks seventh in the Zhang family, because the Ma family and they all call her Qiniang.

This is the first time Su Lu has heard her name.

It turns out that her name is Yunrou.

However, compared with paying attention to Zhang Yunrou's girlfriend name, it is still the vest name that makes Su Lu more energetic.

Is there anything more exciting than putting on a vest and secretly rubbing things around?

No, non-existent!

Su Lu excitedly gave a suggestion: "I remember that it refers to lush grass and trees, and there is a word called 'Maolin Xiuzhu', so it is better for you to sign it as 'Zhang Xiumao', and no one can think of you!" ”

Zhang Yunrou bent her eyebrows and smiled: "Okay." ”