Volume 3 Spring and Autumn Chapter 346 Chu Mingxuan who fled in the wilderness
Empathize with the scene, write mourning with music, write music with mourning scenes, and multiply its sorrow! Lu Xiaofeng shook his head and commented, and other talents also agreed and nodded their heads in praise.
"The name of the upper que is contrasted with the empty city, the spring breeze is ten miles against the green buckwheat and green, and the lower que is contrasted with the prosperity of Du Lang Junxing, cardamom word work, Qinglou dream, etc. Duan Xinde also brushed open his "Eight Talents" fan, and said with sincere admiration.
"Make good use of the poetry of the predecessors into the words, with the method of virtualization, a wave is not flat, a wave rises again, not only empty, but also elegant, the aftermath of the reading is lingering, and the aftertaste is not endless......" This is Gong Qizheng's evaluation, not so exaggerated, but also praises Cao Yi.
The first eight sentences, with a clumsy pen and ink, point out the prosperity of Weiyang, 'over the spring breeze', suddenly folded into the desolate scene of Huayang's five chaotic Huayangzhou, the police are abnormal, and the grass and trees are still very much, not to mention the human feelings, 'gradual dusk' two sentences, and then point out the cold corner of the empty city, especially feel very lonely. When I arrived at Xiaque, I frequently used the Dian Du Mu, singing about the past and the past, and I didn't have a good time. To the back of the 'Ancient Country Divine Travel' layer, 'Difficult to give affection' another layer, 'Twenty-four' two sentences, with the past scene of the allegorical, words and sentences cooking, vibrating the whole text. The last sentence is concluded, and it also contains infinite sorrow, rhyme and victory, feeling nostalgic for the family and country, and winning Bao to join the army "Wucheng Fu". Wang Honghua made a summary evaluation of the most popular.
Only he and Lu Xiaofeng are qualified to comment like this, but Wang Honghua's evaluation of Cao Yi is much more detailed than Chu Mingxuan's previous evaluation, on the one hand, it is true that Wang Honghua's heart is more towards Cao Yi, of course, some highlights in Cao Yi's lyrics should be commented on one by one, on the other hand, Cao Yi's "Yangzhou Slow" is really much better than Chu Mingxuan's "Yangzhou Slow".
Sometimes some things are not compared, it is difficult to deeply perceive the gap between the two, for example, when Chu Mingxuan's "Yangzhou Slow" was written before, everyone thought that this article was the best one written by local talents this year, and everyone praised it, even Lu Xiaofeng and Wang Honghua were full of appreciation, but after Cao Yi wrote this article, well, there was nothing wrong with Chu Mingxuan.
Cao Yi's "Yangzhou Slow" is too glorious, completely covering Chu Mingxuan's song, this is Chu Mingxuan's sorrow, who is not good to choose, he has to challenge Cao Yi, even if he asks for a good song from his teacher that should be praised by everyone, it is so sparse. If you change the time period, it will definitely be a masterpiece worthy of praise in the whole city.
After everyone praised him, Cao Yi looked at Chu Mingxuan with a smile, and said seriously: "Chu Dacaizi, what about the "Yangzhou Slow" you wrote, it is really good, but I am also telling the truth, there is still a lot of room for improvement, I hope you will quit impatience and impatience in the future, you need to know that there are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the sky, you see that I didn't want to compete with you at the beginning, because I think you are still a manufacturable material, and I don't want to hit your self-confidence, but you want to compete with me very sincerely, I have no choice but to reluctantly agree to you, after all, I am a kind-hearted person. ”
Cao Yi saw that Chu Mingxuan didn't react, so he paced towards Chu Mingxuan and said: "But, I'm a person, if you want me to release water, write a very bad word, just narrowly beat you, I won't do it, once my level is here, even if I deliberately play abnormally, I can't write anything too bad, the second one, if I deliberately release water, wouldn't it be disrespectful to you, so I still go all out for you, you see that even if I go all out, I can only write words of this level, So although there is a gap between me and you, at least you can see the gap in the middle, as long as you change your mind, study hard, and go up every day, there will be a very small probability of catching up with me in theory. ”
At the end of the speech, Cao Yi patted Chu Mingxuan's shoulder, and said to Chu Mingxuan in the tone of an elder: "As the saying goes, as long as the kung fu is deep, the iron pestle is sharpened into a needle, read a hundred years of books, catch up with Cao Zhaozheng, come on!" Oh no, it's reluctant! ”
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Everyone looked at Cao Yi dumbfounded, they had seen shameless, but they really hadn't seen such shamelessness, let's see if this is talking about human words?
What is called "Write a very bad word, narrowly beat you!" Affection means that I write the worst word, and it's better than you. He also said, "The level is here, even if you play abnormally, you can't write too bad words!" "Is this a consolation or a blow?
Listen to this again, "There is a gap between you and me, but you can still see the gap in the middle", doesn't this imply that Chu Mingxuan, if you don't work hard, the gap will be so big that you won't be able to see the gap in the future? Heart-piercing!
There is also this sentence, "In theory, there is still a very small probability of catching up with me", which is a theory and a very small probability, and then pierce!
The last sentence is also, "Study hard for a hundred years and catch up with Cao Zhaozheng!" "Who can read for a hundred years? Even if a child prodigy starts reading and reading at the age of four or five, even if he lives a hundred years, he can't read a book for a hundred years, this is not a typical example, that is, even if you read until death, you don't want to surpass me, okay, pierced thoroughly!
Chu Mingxuan's heart is definitely full of holes now, and it is miserable.
Yu Youwei also unconsciously left Cao Yi half a step away, and thought to herself: "Childe is good, but sometimes...... The skin is a little thick, even if you are so proud in your heart, but you have to pretend to be modest, now it's okay, everyone has to think that the son is arrogant......"
Chu Mingxuan's eyes were still closed at this time, but from his constantly shaking body and his right eye, which had been twitching, he knew that he was not at peace at the moment, because Cao Yi's words were finished, so everyone was quiet at this moment, and everyone looked at Chu Mingxuan together, although everyone did not open their mouths to comment on which song "Yangzhou Slow" was better, but the reason why they didn't say it was to save some face for Chu Mingxuan.
But at this time, the quiet environment made Chu Mingxuan feel even more uncomfortable, although it had been noisy before, Chu Mingxuan still felt that he was integrated into this environment, and everyone did not pay attention to him as much as they did now.
But now that it was quiet, and everyone didn't speak, he felt even more embarrassed, although he couldn't see everyone when he closed his eyes, but he always felt that others were looking at him with contempt and ridicule at this time, and he already felt the gaze of everyone on him, which made him feel that the part of his body that was being watched by others was very hot and extremely stinging, which also made his body tremble and tremble all the time.
"Ahh......h Left, knowing that there was no shadow in sight!
"Uh......" Cao Yi suddenly felt that his throat and eyes were a little dry, and he made a sound unconsciously.
The rest of the people in the painting boat were also staring at each other at this time, and after a while, Fu Wan'er also walked back, just now Chu Mingxuan shouted and ran out, Fu Wan'er was worried that something would happen to Chu Mingxuan, so she also chased out, but where could she catch up with a weak woman, just ran to the deck, Chu Mingxuan's carriage had already galloped away. She had no choice but to come back, but she also wanted to leave, worried that something would happen to Chu Mingxuan. It's just that she agreed to a condition because she lost the competition with Yu Youwei before, and said that she told her at the end of today's event, so she had to stay.
"Uh......" Fu Wan'er looked at Cao Yi in embarrassment, and wanted to apologize or say something for Chu Mingxuan, but she didn't know what to say when the words came to her mouth, she was silent for a moment, and then said: "Gongzi Cao, I apologize to you for Gongzi Chu, maybe he can't face the reality because he can't bear the reason for failure, so he will go back to be quiet first, maybe after a while, he will come back to Cao Gongzi You will honor the bet you tried before." ”
Fu Wan'er said sincerely, with a look of embarrassment on her face.
"Well, this matter has nothing to do with you, Miss Wan'er doesn't need to say anything, you take a rest here, I have something to tell you later." Cao Yi looked at Fu Wan'er, and in turn comforted her not to think too much, with his experience in his previous life, he had never seen any strange people and strange things, even if he had not seen it in the real world, there were still many such people in those film and television works and works, so it was no longer strange, it was nothing more than Chu Mingxuan couldn't accept the reality that he was defeated again.
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