I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry for the subscription of the thirty or so bigwigs who chased me.

The results are just too bad.

In the online literature industry, there is a saying that signing a contract is just a beginner.

I'm just getting started now, and I'm not even hitting the streets.

Because of the real hitting the street, the subscription has at least exceeded 100.

And I'm a newcomer who hasn't even broken a hundred.

This book doesn't work, so I have to continue working on the next one.

Thankfully, I'll make some more summaries.

The definition of this book is that the protagonist is forced by others to become a prince, and his goal, which is the main line of this article, is to conquer the queen and thus achieve freedom in life.

I thought about this main line for a long time before I came up with it.

When I thought about it, I felt like I was awesome.

It's a pity that the results are stretched, and the first recommendation is brushed down.

This book has been conceived since November last year.

Remember, this was not the case at the beginning of the story.

The first chapter at the beginning is not the one that came out.

But when I showed it to my friend, she said she couldn't understand it.

In this way, I quickly changed the first chapter until others could understand it.

And the small goal of conquering the queen was not thought of at the beginning, but it was slowly conceived later, thinking about how to attract people, and then came up with this sassy idea.

The idea is sassy, but what I wrote is very problematic.

The pace in the early stage was too slow, what white as jade, what black-toothed bear, what Longmen Tavern...... Who likes to read it, when you enter this book, isn't it the interaction between men and women?

This plot is simply a big minus.

It was supposed to be a good beginning, but I was killed directly by the next few chapters.

Readers have lowered their sense of expectation, and it's strange not to hit the streets.

This is also one of the points I have summarized - don't write plots that readers don't like, and don't slow down the pace in the early stages.

The heroine, if you can come out as soon as possible, you will come out as soon as possible.

What we want to watch is the interaction between the male and female protagonists, the dog food, and the sao operation.

However, I am still too young to sprout a new one.

The brain knows, the eyes know, the hands don't ......

Ahh......hhh

In addition to the plot, when I narrate, I always like to introduce the specific appearance of the characters and the characteristics of the costumes.

As a result, it is even more difficult to retain people.

The above is my failure at the beginning.

It was my big failure.

While there are pluses, overall, it's a losing start.

After talking about the beginning, I will talk about the plot after entering Handan City.

The description of the city in the early stage, as well as the description of the palace, is really too watery.

I regret it now when I think about it, how did I write such a shit plot.

It can be seen from here that I still haven't polished my plot and my book well.

What a fool.

After entering Handan, the plot of Mingyue is also quite unnatural, and there is always such an embarrassment in my heart.

After seeing Mingyue, he entered the palace and met the first mini-boss of the book, Xuyang Hou Hu Zhe.

Xuyang Hou Hu Zhe is a major poison point of this book.

The plot of the confrontation between the protagonist and Xuyanghou would not have been written like this in the online article ten years ago.

Times have changed, my lord.

No, even if the times haven't changed, this book by adults was a street hit ten years ago.

Therefore, after the start, this series of plots in the public period can only be described in four words.

It was also the fact that I had too little stock in my stomach that led to this situation.

After the content is put on the shelves, I won't say more.

Because, there is nothing to say anymore.

The scrutiny of the plot, the advancement of the plot, the portrayal of the characters, no matter what the point, I did not achieve the passing line.

After criticism, always praise yourself.

Anyway, no matter how bad this book is, I have put a little effort into it.

To sum up, my plus point for this book is the word Sao.

Someone told me that no matter what kind of writing you write, you have to settle down on your own style.

And my style is a sassy word.

In real life, I am a very honest person, but I am really angry in my heart.

In this chapter, there are often swaggers.

Chapter said that he was a talent, and he was talking about an excellent person like me.

Therefore, I established my own writing style early on, which is Sao.

And the style of Sao is also very popular at today's starting point.

However, I'm sassy, but it's still not enough, and the place is not right.

Or maybe it's because I write too little.

The code word thing, the rest is king, I have to practice, read, write and summarize more.

In this article, the beginning was full of commotion, and when it came to the section of Handan City, the commotion dropped very seriously.

What can be said is that in this chapter, I was very angry, but when I wrote it, I couldn't make a commotion.

This is my shortcoming, and I have to overcome it.

I've been so long-winded, thank you again for the readers who have followed it all the way.

I don't know when I'm going to open my next book, and I haven't thought about what the subject will be.

I don't know if I want to write a harem, or if I want to write an essay with a heroine.

Everything needs to wait for me to enter the palace to exercise for a while, and then let's talk about it.

Actually, I'm always figuring out what kind of subject I should write about.

The first book is "Back to Antiquity with the Forum". As my debut novel, it was written blindly at all.

The later "I Want to Be a Detective" and "Da Song Xiaoyaolang" are both about detective themes.

I thought I could find a way out of the detective case, but it obviously didn't work.

As for alternate history, I probably won't write about it in the future, because although I like history, I don't understand many things about history.

The content is written without any sense of history.

In the future, there should be no more touching of history.

History is a high threshold, and it's not something that a budding writer like me can touch.

The next one, it should be urban.

Anyway, thank you for your subscription and tips.

In the next book, I will still inherit the style of Sao, but what to write will be discussed later......

2020/7/5 The wild goose stay in Yandang Mountain

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