What to write about?

Chi Fei pondered this question.

First of all, what is not in this era cannot be written, because no one will believe it.

Who would believe that in a few hundred years, Terrans will be able to fly in the sky, sneak in the deep sea, and move quickly on land in an iron box?

No one will believe it, others will only treat you as a whimsical fool.

Second, you can't write anything that violates common sense in society, because it violates the ethics and morals of this era.

Just like Cinderella's story, why should he change his face beyond recognition to tell it to others?

is because Cinderella is originally a Western fairy tale, and the background and customs in it are different from the ethics of this society.

A girl from a good family not only shows her face, but also dances and kisses with a strange man. What's the difference between this and a dusty woman?

This kind of behavior may still be acceptable in Western society, but in this traditional Chinese society, it will definitely be spurned by others, and people will be scolded when you write it.

Third, you can't write about politics, especially things related to the imperial court and imperial power.

Chi Fei doesn't know how open the rulers of this dynasty are to the people's right to speak, but it's always right to be careful.

You don't see the Ming and Qing dynasties, and the literal prison is the most exaggerated, and millions of people are implicated. That's going to kill you.

Fourth, you can't write about what you do.

Although colored scripts are popular, the authors who write these kinds of works usually don't have a good reputation.

Readers also watch secretly, not daring to let others know.

If you write too much, you may be banned.

Chi Fei borrowed all the scripts from Zhang Quanshui and them, and after reading them all quickly, he summarized several types of popular scripts in this era.

The first is the martial arts forbidden class, the second is the talented and beautiful people, the third is the supernatural ghost class, and the fourth is the world alert class.

Among them, martial arts and talented beauties are the most popular among current readers.

Chi Fei thought about it for a long time, and finally decided to write a traditional story that became a household name in his world.

This story is Liang Zhu.

Liang Zhu is a classic love story passed down by word of mouth, since the beginning of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, it has been circulated in the folk for more than 1,700 years, it can be described as a household name, spread far-reaching, and is known as the swan song of love through the ages.

The earliest record of Liang Zhu in history began in the early Tang Dynasty, according to the record of "Ten Dao Si Fan Zhi": "The righteous woman Zhu Yingtai and Liang Shanbo are in the same grave, that is, their affairs."

Subsequently, various dynasties also had various records about Liang Zhu.

There are actually many versions of Liang Zhu's story in history, including Fengqiu version, Runan version, Shangyu version, Hangzhou version, Yixing version, Weishan version, and Zhucheng version.

Each version is different, but the Shandong Zhucheng version is the most widely circulated and the most popular version.

The content of the story is: In Liangshantun Village, Xiangzhou Town, in the north of Zhucheng, there is a family surnamed Liang, which is Liang Shanbo's home.

The Liang family was wealthy in the early years, and Uncle Shan's father also ran a school, but unfortunately he became ill from hard work, and he left the West in his thirties, leaving Uncle Shan's mother and son to rely on each other, and his life gradually declined.

Liang Shanbo's milk name is Bo Child, who has been frail and sick since he was a child, and his family only relies on his mother to hire short-term workers to manage a few acres of thin land for a living.

When Shanbo was 16 years old, his mother was afraid that she would miss the child's future, so she saved money and saved some savings, and sent Liang Shanbo to study in Xiaoliangshan, three miles northwest of the village.

Because the teacher was a good friend of Liang Shanbo's father, Shanbo was taken care of by the master everywhere in the school, and his academic performance was very good.

The heroine of the story, Zhu Yingtai, was born in Zhujialou Village, west of Shiqiaozi Town, Zhucheng, and her father is a member of the village, known as Zhuyuanwai.

There are four branches of the Zhu family, living in the four corners of the village of Zhujialou, the fourth floor corresponds, and the northeast building of the home is outside the Zhuyuan.

At that time, the heirs of the Zhu family were in the ranks, and Yingtai was nine in the women's middle school, and her nickname was Jiuhong'er.

Because Zhu Yuan had no children under his knees, he couldn't help Yingtai's hard request, so he agreed to Yingtai women dressing up as men to go to Xiaoliangshan to study.

It was here that Liang Shanbo got acquainted with Zhu Yingtai, who came to study in disguised as a man, and the two lived in the same room, and the brothers were commensurate and had deep feelings.

Three years passed, until the completion of his studies and when he went down the mountain, Shanbo did not realize the true identity of Yingtai, and insisted on sending a gift to Zhu Xiandi.

The two chatted while walking, talked about friendship, and traveled all the way west, all the way to the small stone bridge in the north of Shiqiaozi Town, Zhucheng City.

On this small stone bridge, Yingtai faced Brother Liang, who had been with him for three years, and it was difficult to control his love, so he proposed to match Shanbo for his little ninth sister, and told Shanbo to go to Zhu's house as soon as possible. After seeing Shanbo's promise, the two said goodbye.

When Shanbo returned to the mountain to bid farewell to his master, he learned from his wife that Yingtai was the little ninth sister, and hurriedly went to Zhu's house to propose marriage.

Unexpectedly, Zhu Yuanwai had already married Yingtai Xu to Ma Wencai.

When Liang Shanbo knew that Zhu Yuanwai had forcibly married Yingtai to Ma Wencai, he was expelled from the door without even seeing Yingtai, and when he returned home, he regretted and resented it, became sick, coughed all day long, did not eat soup, and could not afford to be sick.

When Shanbo was terminally ill, he instructed his mother: "After I die, don't go elsewhere to bury me, just bury me on the north bank of the Lizhang River." ”

Because he knew that Ma Wencai's home was in Majiazhuangzi Village, Guanzhuang Town, Anqiu City, Yingtai had to pass through here to get married, and he wanted to see Yingtai again after his death.

After saying that, Shanbo died and was only nineteen years old.

Liang's mother really followed her son's instructions and buried Shan Boyuan on the north bank of the Qu River in the north of Lizhang Village, Shiqiaozi Town.

After Zhu Yingtai returned home, he knew that his father had promised a marriage for himself, and learned that Shanbo had come to propose marriage but was rejected by his father, so he washed his face with tears all day long.

Within a few days, Yingtai learned that Shanbo had died of martyrdom and was buried on the north bank of the Lizhang River, and he was even more grief-stricken.

After that, he did not eat for three days, and he was entangled in every possible way about the dowry in order to delay the marriage.

On the day of the wedding of Yingtai, the wind and the sun are beautiful, the sedan chair has just arrived on the ancient road in the west of the mound, suddenly the wind is rising, Yingtai is asking to get off the sedan chair, go to worship the soul of Brother Liang, to the tomb, Yingtai looked at the stone tablet of Brother Liang, grief-stricken, tears fell, after counting the affection of Brother Liang, he died by hitting the monument, and the family buried Yingtai here.

Later, two butterflies were seen suddenly flying out of the tomb and then fluttering away.

The whole Liang Zhu story is probably like this.

What is Tragedy?

Tragedy is the destruction of good things for others to see.

This view is not very agreeable.

Since Liang Zhu's story itself is a tragedy, it should be retained as it was.

Therefore, Chi Fei does not intend to tamper with the content in it, let alone modify the ending, but to carry out in-depth processing to bring the tragic color of the story to the extreme.

How can we maximize Liang Zhu's tragic color?

It's simple, just magnify the good places.

The best part of Liang Zhu is that the two lived together in the same room on Xiaoliang Mountain, and the happy time of studying all the time, and the eighteen miles when the two went down the mountain later.

What Chi Fei has to do is to describe the best part of this, especially the scene of reading and living together, as detailed as possible.

As long as these two parts are well and meticulously described, the reader will be moved when the tragedy comes.

The more beautiful and pure a thing is, the more heart-wrenching it is when it is destroyed.

……………………

After sorting out his thoughts, Chi Fei began to write an outline of the story, and the part where the two lived together was the focus.

This part is actually equivalent to the ancient version of the youth campus story.

First of all, in terms of personality, Liang Shanbo should be a good boy who is serious and diligent, and he is also very honest and honest, otherwise he would not have lived together for three years without finding out that his roommate was a girl.

As for Zhu Yingtai, from the fact that she dared to dress up as a man alone to study in a private school full of boys, it can be seen that she is a bold and assertive girl.

But Yingtai is a girl after all, and she just came to a place full of boys, and she had to live in the same room with a strange man, so she inevitably felt nervous and scared.

Fortunately, Liang Shanbo is a warm-hearted and good student, and he thought that this new roommate felt nervous because he was studying abroad for the first time, so he took care of her very much.

The opening and closing of the mouth are all "Brother Zhu Xian, let's go to dinner." ”

"Brother Zhu Xian, if you don't understand anything, you can ask me at any time, you're welcome."

"Brother Zhu Xian, your handwriting is really beautiful, a bit like a girl. Ah, don't get me wrong, I didn't really say you look like a girl, it's just that the words are a bit similar, don't be angry. ”

"Brother Zhu Xian, don't be afraid, it's just a bug, I've already driven it away."

"Brother Zhu Xian, do you sleep without changing your clothes?"

"Brother Zhu Xian, don't you wipe your body? Do you want me to fetch water for you? I'm afraid you won't be able to bring it up. ”

"Brother Zhu Xian, why do you eat so little every time? You're so thin, you should eat more. ”

Yingtai finally stopped feeling nervous and uneasy under the call of "Brother Zhu Xian" one by one, and began to slowly adapt to the life of the private school.

Even she didn't notice it herself, in fact, she was getting more and more used to this stupid melon appearing around her. When she's around, she naturally feels at ease.

One night, when she secretly went outside the house to relieve herself, she suddenly saw a lot of fireflies flying around in the yard, which was very beautiful.

This made Yingtai very excited, and without thinking about it, he quickly ran back to the house and pulled Shanbo, who was about to fall asleep, up to watch the fireflies.

It was the first time she had seen so many fireflies.

Shanbo was helpless, so he had to accompany her while rubbing his eyes sleepily.

This is not enough, Yingtai suddenly had a whim, and wanted to catch some fireflies and put them in the house to raise. This way, you can sleep and watch the fireflies fly around the house.

So she immediately asked Shanbo to help her catch fireflies, and Shanbo was usually used to being called by her, so he had to accompany her to catch them.

The two of them caught fireflies very late, so they couldn't help but doze off together during class the next day, so Mr. saw it.

The gentleman was very angry and told the two of them to go to the gate and go to the penalty station.

"Let's see if you can catch fireflies in the future." Samber glared at her.

"It's my mistake, don't be angry, okay?" Yingtai shook his sleeve and apologized.

"Okay, okay, I'm not angry, you stop." Samber was a little embarrassed by her little girl-like actions, but he didn't hate it.

The two live together every day, their ears and temples are grinding, and their relationship is getting better and better.

But there are times when they have awkwardness.

Once, the mother of a classmate came to visit her son, and she was accompanied by the classmate's sister, a girl of twelve or thirteen.

When the mother came to the door of the private school, it was inconvenient for her to go in directly, so she wanted to ask someone else to call her son out.

Just as Shanbo and Yingtai passed by, they were stopped by the mother.

After listening to the request of the classmate's mother, the warm-hearted Shanbo immediately agreed to call someone.

After the person called out, the mother thanked Shanbo very warmly, and Yingtai sensitively found that the girl peeked at Shanbo from time to time, which made Yingtai very uncomfortable.

After returning to the courtyard, Yingtai deliberately pretended to ask him casually what he thought of the girl just now.

Samber didn't think too much about it, and casually replied, "It's beautiful."

These words made Yingtai very angry, and he returned to the room with a cold face.

Sambo didn't understand why she was angry, so he could only stand there confused.

In the next few days, Yingtai ignored him, completely as if he was transparent.

Shanbo showed favor many times, but Yingtai still ignored him.

was snubbed again and again, and Shanbo, who has always been good-tempered, finally got angry and ignored her with a straight face.

Yingtai saw him with a straight face, and couldn't help crying anymore.

When Shanbo saw her crying, he immediately lied and quickly apologized to her.

Yingtai, who was already full of grievances in his heart, cried even more.

Shanbo saw that the more he persuaded Yingtai, the more he cried, and he didn't know what to do, so he could only keep apologizing and hurriedly helping her wipe her tears.

Yingtai, who was originally crying a lot, finally couldn't help laughing when he saw his clumsy appearance.

Seeing her smile, Shanbo couldn't help but breathe a sigh of relief, and continued to coax her like a child, telling her not to cry, not to cry.

Yingtai burst into laughter, and an awkward moment passed without danger.

Afterwards, Shanbo never understood why Yingtai suddenly got angry and ignored him, and why he suddenly cried non-stop, and the more he thought about it, the more confused he became.

Another time, Yingtai accidentally contracted a cold disease.

Shanbo was very worried, and came back to see her every day after class, and also helped her with food and notes.

It's just that when Shanbo offered to help her wash her clothes, Yingtai refused to agree, and buried his face on the pillow to prevent him from looking.

There are many similar bits and pieces in the three years they have lived together.

Whenever Chi Fei thinks of some interesting plots, he will immediately add them to the outline.

Strive to write the true and pure feelings between boys and girls, with almost no impurities, beautiful and meticulous.

Soon, three years are approaching, separation is imminent, and the two will end their studies and go down the mountain.

The two walked and chatted, all the way west, until they were sent to the small stone bridge in the north of the town, and they were persuaded by Yingtai, which is the famous eighteen miles to send off.

Here, too, is another climax of the whole story.

What needs to be portrayed is the reluctance and sadness of the two who want to talk about it.

At this time, although Shanbo was not aware of Yingtai's true identity, he was no longer just an ordinary classmate and friend relationship with Yingtai, but also mixed with a trace of complicated feelings that even he couldn't understand and couldn't explain, otherwise there would be no scene of sending off eighteen people.

And the British and Taiwanese side have long been unconsciously secretly promising to Shan Bofang, and their love is deep-rooted, but they have never said it.

Although Shanbo is reluctant to Yingtai, how can Yingtai be willing to live with him for three years but can't notice anything.

Seeing that the road ahead is about to end, it is likely that the two will never see each other on this day.

Yingtai finally couldn't restrain the stirring emotions in his heart, and said in a voice as calm as possible: "Brother Shan, I have a younger sister, the ninth in the family, who looks very similar to me. I want to be a matchmaker for you and marry her to you, I wonder if Brother Shan is willing? ”

After saying that, her heart was beating like a drum, her face was hot, and she lowered her head and waited for him to answer.

By doing so, she was undoubtedly confessing to him. It's just that this idiot doesn't know.

It seemed that after a long time, she finally heard the voice of the dumb melon, "Does your sister really look like you?" ”

"Yes, it's exactly the same." Yingtai finally said it. The heart is sour and sweet.

"Okay, when I go back, I'll ask my mother to send someone to the door to propose marriage. Please wait for me. ”

"It's a deal."

"It's a deal."

It wasn't until Yingtai walked to the point where he couldn't see the figure at all, and Shanbo reluctantly turned back.

Next, there's the tragic part.

Chi Fei feels that the outline is almost written here, and there are not many places that can be added and changed in the tragic part, as long as the atmosphere is properly rendered.

After writing the outline, Chi Fei realized that it was too late.

He had been in this world for so long, and it was the first time he had stayed up late.

But even so, his spirits were still high. He had an urge to get the outline out as soon as possible.

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