"The Warrior" was originally a good story, but unfortunately the beginning collapsed, resulting in a very poor grade.

Lao Cha is a professional in Chinese language and literature at Changsha University of Science and Technology, and he is involved in online writing for the first time, and he writes very poorly, mainly because of three points.

First, the protagonist's sense of substitution is insufficient, and the characters of the Li Dynasty and Kyushu countries are repeated in a chronological style in the early stage, resulting in readers having no sense of substitution at all;

second, the protagonist's sense of existence is insufficient, and his demeanor was covered up by Jiang Wangshu in the early stage, and the protagonist is completely a soy sauce existence;

Seventy-three, the language does not have the characteristics of online articles, and Lao Cha used a lot of sentences mixed with white in the early stage, and it was written more orthodox, which led to many readers not liking it very much.

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