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Write it out and revise it again.,It's going to take about five or six hours.,I have to rest in the middle.,Because of the reason for falling out of love.,There's no three or more changes.,The heart is like an egg being crushed and I can't stop writing a book.,I'm a chatter.

The new book must be opened.,It's very tangled.,One is fantasy.,I want to vote for the second dimension.,It's just that I've written a prologue to this book.,But it still doesn't meet my own ideas.,There's also a modern city.,It's still very tangled.,In the end, do you want a system.,After all, the text of the fantasy book is freedom.,That's right.,The theme of the promotion is freedom.,And the modern city is responsibility.,The text eye is responsibility.。

I don't feel good about fantasy.,Because I always feel like there's something missing.,I checked a lot of information.,Including the Odyssey Guild.,The story line in it is farming and exploration.,And it's the protagonist is a god.,It's a bit of a pain.,The setting can't be invincible.,It's not good to be the same big sage as the slime.,In fact, I really want to apply the big sage of the slime directly.,It's just to be different from each other.。

So,Fantasy stories have treatment sorting.,Lack of information and urban.,On the one hand, it's an ordinary line in real life.,On the other hand, it's a mutant world line.,No system.,Non-crossing.。。。

It can be said directly,Modern City that book,The original title of the book was going to call you my hero.,Vote for the second dimension.,But the title doesn't pass.,The outline is there.,It's just not perfect.,You're my hero This book combines the most popular Marvel elements at the moment.,Referring to the Spider-Man movie and the world setting of the X-Men.,And then I think it's still not good.

About the golden three chapters of writing a book, heheda, fake.

The definition of the golden three chapters is correct, the beginning of the book must be attractive, I read the dancing big words in Zhihu, I think it is very useful, for me who has been fooled by the joke of the golden three chapters for so long, the book of Steaming Tang is to use the golden three chapters of the web text routine to take shortcuts!!! It's a big mistake, it's really a big mistake, read the most popular books, study, there's no use for fart, what is your own style, finding your own style is the most important, the subject matter doesn't matter, the ability to tell a story is the most important, white drawing? Isn't it important to draw white, but not to compare metaphors, synaesthesia, and so on? I used to ignore a lot of problems, but now I find out.

I found that those of us who were dead on the street were really made by the marketers and raised fat pigs.

The following is a book that has been written for a long time and even the title is tangled, its beginning,

Prologue: Ron's death

Rain, crazy rain.

The stagnant water surface of the concrete intersection reflects the scene of fire trucks speeding by.

In the old car window was a haggard uncle's face full of stubble, with deep and sharp eyes, an unlit cigarette in his mouth, and a somewhat anxious expression.

The surface of the stagnant water reflects the situation of the rainy day like a mirror, and the torrential rain pours down like a column.

Opposite Ron's face in the car window was a tall building emitting billowing smoke.

And in the black smoke curling in the wind and rain, it seems to construct a strange fuzzy pattern.

The raindrops ticking against the windows never stopped, beating at the rhythm of dreary weather.

Ron's firesuit was ajar, and between his fingers was a small photograph that had been preserved in a special rubber.

There are two smiles printed in the photo, one is the wife's empathetic smile, and the other is the child's innocent smile.

This is his family, and his affectionate eyes show that he loves his family deeply.

Stretching out his finger and stroking the wife and daughter in the photo, the uncle's face was full of warm smiles, making this drowsy time ruined by the weather colorful.

At this time, the team member in the driver's seat spoke, and they began to talk.

"Captain, it's raining a lot today, I always feel weird, there have been frequent fires recently, and there are so many tasks that it's so upsetting that people!"

"Pay attention to the ahead, drive fast, don't get upset, believe in yourself, you have the qualities you should have as a firefighter, and you also have the responsibility and obligation to save people! This time it's the same as usual! ”

Ron put away the photo and said with the tone of a senior teaching a lesson, and the zipper of the fire jacket was tightened.

The car came to an abrupt halt at the site of the fire burning in the rain, an apartment building, with dozens of panicked residents in various costumes standing outside.

Bang dang!

The door opened, and dozens of firefighters, under Ron's command, began their work, and he led the team into the apartment to carry out rescue efforts according to the location described by the residents who had escaped outside.

The sound of electricity sounded, the lights at the staircase flickered restlessly, and Ron rushed to the front, his face basically hidden in the shadow of the gas helmet, barely visible.

Ron and the team member in the driver's seat went to the room, found an old woman with inconvenient legs, installed the oxygen supply for her, and carried it out.

In the empty and hot corridor, his teammates were carrying in front, and Ron was holding the old woman in the back, and when he heard the cry for help of the little girl upstairs, his daughter's naughty face flashed in his mind, and he resolutely chose to stand in place.

"Captain, I'll go!"

Ron reached out to block the team's pleas, completely let go of the old woman, and looked at the young team member with a determined gaze.

"You're still young, I have more experience than you, and besides, this is an order! It's your duty to save this old lady! ”

After saying that, he rushed to the staircase of the upper floor, and the flames rushed down the stairs unexpectedly and enthusiastically, and a strange firework disappeared in front of Ron.

Ron saw a star-like pattern engraved in the crimson rolling flames, and couldn't help but stop his steps.

Behind him came the old man's voice of thanks.

"Thank you! If only I had a son like you."

The old woman excitedly thanked Ron.

Ron nodded and smiled back, but his face was buried in his gas helmet, and he couldn't see clearly.

Without looking back, he rushed straight to the stairs to another floor.

Black smoke was rising from the hallway, the ceiling had been shattered by flames, and Ron looked solemn.

Tongues of fire stretched out from the cracks in the door, very spiritual.

Avoiding the tongue of fire, he began to look for the girl, kicked open several doors, and shouted, hoping for a response.

But there was basically smoke and fire inside, rushing in and rushing out, and I could feel the scorching temperature of the flames through the firefighting suit, and there was no response.

Could it be that I heard it wrong?

Broke down several doors in a row, but did not find the trapped girl calling for help.

In the hallway, Ron's strength dropped, his breath was short, and he was half-bent over and quite tired.

"Help"

The voice came from the room behind him, and Ron kicked open the door of the room with a tongue of fire, rushed into the flames, and picked up a little girl with a ponytail.

Ron rushed out of the room, took off his gas mask, choked on the smoke, coughed a few times, put it on the little girl, and prepared to evacuate towards the staircase.

Airplanes!

The flames were spiritually blocking the path to the staircase, and Ron felt his hair curling and uneasiness spreading in his heart, turned back, looked at the window at the end of the hallway, and hurried away with the little girl in his arms.

Airplanes!

Flames blocked the way again.

Ron was desperate, and was blocked by flames in front and back, what the hell

The little girl seemed to realize something, and looked at the person holding her with a clear gaze.

"Uncle, can't we get out?"

"What's your name?"

"My name is Nana!"

"Nana, believe uncle, I will definitely take you out!"

"Hmm!"

When comforting the little girl, the voice and smile of his daughter kept coming to mind, he became a father, and he has not completely fulfilled his parenting responsibilities, and he must not lose in this kind of place!

The crimson light rose from under his feet, and when he looked down, the round nine-pointed star pattern shimmered, strange runes appeared, and the flames on the left and right were as violent as if they were summoned, and Ron realized that the situation was very bad.

Take off the fire suit and wrap it over the little girl's body, grit her teeth, take a long breath, run in the direction of the window, and rush into the tyrannical fire.

On the other side of the window, a burning man rushed out of the wall of flames and slammed into the window.

Crash!

Ron burst out of the seven-story window, his body burning with flames, and the burning man leaned over and hugged the little girl tightly in his arms.

At this moment, the world fell silent, and Ron felt the end of his life, death.

Boom!

The flames covered with strange runes didn't seem to want to let the two of them go, and they burst through the entire window, like a fire snake chasing after Ron and the little girl together!

Ron vaguely watched the fire snake open its mouth and swallow it, a little helpless and puzzled, this way of dying?! It's really in line with my identity, goodbye

The head of the flame snake disappeared into the mad rain, and Ron and the little girl disappeared into the rain sky together.

A small gel photograph of a strange woman's face and a little girl's face slowly fell and burned in the rain, and finally turned to ashes.

(Finally, Happy Lantern Festival!) ）

(End of chapter)