(This summary is free)

As the testimonial on the shelves says, I'm a big hitter, and I haven't been able to support myself since I wrote books.

Fortunately, this score is okay, barely enough to eat.

Lao Mou is very grateful for the encouragement and subscription of all book friends, as well as various rewards.

Today, March 15, which is also my birthday, take the opportunity to summarize:

My style of writing,It's a loss.,It's all digging holes first.,Patch later.,Resulting in a look.,It's too special BUG and maybe even poisonous.,Or it's too unsolvable.,It's like a dead end.,Readers preconceived that the author can't spray away...... emmm...... I have been a eunuch twice since the beginning of this book, and I can't count how many people have said that it must not be written for long and that it will hit the streets......

But I persevered.

Some readers often compare me with the author of platinum and even the gods, and then step on me and say how bad the writing is (there are also sincere suggestions, I replied seriously and thank you), in fact, this is to promote me,,I really don't have the strength to compare with them,I know how much I know,I just want to make money to support my family。 Try to learn from the great gods, maybe I can catch up with them in the future? I still have to have dreams, maybe I will come true......

Let's make a few points:

1. The pit dug: 1. Why did the apprentices betray and accept it, 2. The life span is limited, 3. The missing memory, 4. The upper limit of cultivation, and 5. The three volumes of the Book of Heaven. These are big pits, and I've already figured out how to bury them. Some other small pits, such as the tenth apprentice or something, have also been arranged, and the others will remind you more.

2, the protagonist is designed. It's really not clear enough. But I have to say two things, one, I didn't plan to make him so high from the beginning, he is a master, and he wants to teach his disciples to cultivate and be a master, so he has to be a little like Hong Qigong (I have seen the Demon Emperor of the Flying Eagle Boss, and I don't think I can be too cold and arrogant like Sect Leader Chen. Coupled with the lack of flying eagle's pen power, he retreated to the next best thing and created a less arrogant protagonist).

What's more embarrassing is that at present, the eldest brother and the second senior brother seem to be more successful than the protagonist.

Embarrassed......

3, Ye Tianxin, everything I wrote can actually find the original. This is a reference to Huang Yaoshi and Mei Chaofeng, and I won't explain what the result is.

4. Identity (race), these are references to the Classic of Mountains and Seas...... For example, Bai Min, such as the three pages, such as Bai Ze, most of them are from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, but I didn't make it up blindly. And I have already expressed the identities of other disciples very vaguely. Taoist Shitong comes from Taoist classics, various Indian formations, etc., because I want to write the plot smoothly, I didn't write it into the style of the book, and it is more in line with my capable style (reader: dry and dry, you are embarrassed to say that it is capable?)

5. Main card. Because the strength has not recovered, you can only use the card.,In fact, there are supernatural powers;Secondly,When I wrote it in the middle, I was in my hometown.,There are too many clues.,The environment and inspiration are also poor.,Resulting in a bit fragmented writing.,It seems that the protagonist has no sense of purpose.,Like a passive trigger...... It has something to do with my writing style, I didn't let the protagonist shout out, and the hole I dug was actually the goal. For example, the problem of finding lifespan, it has been buried since the time when Bai Min was written, riding Huang to live two thousand years old, etc., but the protagonist has a card, which makes it useless for the protagonist to have a lifespan, but think about it, what about the apprentices? They will die of old age sooner or later...... And why hasn't anyone broken through the nine leaves?

The problem of the goal, after the battle with Gong Yuandu, will be clear. The battle between the two of them...... E, hahaha, I wonder if no one would have guessed.

6. World view, this has not been revealed. Because I'm too lazy to explain what the cultivation realm is, the map, plus the writing is relatively concise, and the foreshadowing rhythm is short and brisk, I didn't write those things, otherwise the current plot would be two million words.

7. Brush merit. Actually, I didn't write it explicitly.,This can't.,That can't.,Instead, it's been said to be all kinds of bugs.,The protagonist has a low IQ.。 In fact, in many places, it is implicitly expressed that merit cannot be brushed, for example, Ming Shiyin said that he did not know how to do good deeds at all, for example, there was no merit for the second bow of the Ci family, and for example, he did not touch ordinary people (ordinary people have no merit) and later became a low-level cultivator with no merit. There are a lot of problems like this, and I blame myself for not writing carefully enough, and I strive to improve. After all, I write new and work hard to improve it in the future.

8, the lack of pen power, I admit. For example, the fights are not written as if they were turn-based, and some of them may be okay because I feel good about myself. Secondly, the settings of some games are more inconsistent (most of this has actually been changed), and many details have not been taken care of. Strive for the follow-up to be story-centric, dilute the data, if you have any opinions, just mention it, give me a chance to copy the book review......

PS: Halfway through the writing, I saw the league leader's reward, thank you for the reward of "Yanlong Forget the Dust", ah, I seem to owe 6 more...... Ahhhh