"We do not prohibit speech, and we will not be convicted for speech. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 info" Zhang Shangying twisted his beard and said, "Zhu Mian and Wang Huang are all orthodox Jinshi and first, how can you cure them?" ”

"Yes, the most hateful thing about my mother is that they do have literary talents, and they write the story so beautifully, and sure enough, the scholars misled the country." Gao Fangping scolded.

As a result, he was sprayed by Zhang Shangying again, saying that he was not allowed to insult the reader.

"Scholars can't move, then there is no way to do it, the first minister to fight, protect the literary world, and save the earth will be handed over to you, if you are caught and killed by them, I will raise your wife, and the little one will go to Yuncheng on duty." After speaking, Gao Fangping planned to slip away.

But he was pulled back by Lao Zhang.

Zhang Shangying said: "When it comes to serial stories, the old man doesn't believe that you are not as cunning as them, usually the best way to crack down on a book is not to arrest readers, nor to burn books and pit Confucianism." It's that if you write a story of the same theme, but it's better than him, then everyone won't go to see him, they will look at you, and after reading it, as they go deeper, they will be influenced by you and change some of people's concepts. Young man, this is the real use of literati, that is, literature to save the country, don't you understand? ”

Gao Fangping shook his head with a snort.

Zhang Shangying said with a smile: "You don't pick a child, the old man admits that their scripts are well integrated, but when it comes to how to tell stories, how to whet your appetite, and how to capture people's hearts, Zhu Mian and Wang Huang's two traitors are worse than you, not so much of a grade, you just don't have much literacy." ”

Gao Fangping's old face was slightly red, but he still shook his head.

Zhang Shangying sat down and said: "Okay, in fact, the old man knows, you are making a show, "Journey to the East" has been circulating for a few days, you can't not pay attention to it, with your treachery, you will definitely deal with it, you just have to wait to get some benefits, did the old man say something wrong, less nonsense, be happy, and put forward conditions." ”

Gao Fangping hugged his fists and said: "Uncle is really the sunrise Dongfang Wencheng martial arts, not a cover." Sure enough, you still know my little high personality best. ”

Zhang Shangying laughed miserably: "Damn, you are really prepared, count you ruthless." ”

"I heard that you will also be one of the chief officials in the palace examination in more than a year?" Gao Fangping Road.

"Nonsense, how can I be without the old man's reputation in the literary world." Zhang Shangying said, "The palace examination ceremony was originally a three-hall examination of the Guozijian, the Ministry of Officials, and the Ministry of Rites, can the old man be absent as a servant of the Ministry of Officials?" ”

Gao Fangping said very recklessly: "You directly said that if I am caught cheating by you, you will not kill me." Anyway, I'm a hooligan, just to cheat, if I'm destined to be killed by you, then I'm not going to do anything now, let Zhu Mian Wang Huang and that group of Taoist priests rise, and you will eventually be caught and killed by them and Cai Jing. ”

Zhang Shangying fell to the ground unconscious, a little nosebleed flowed down his face, and he looked quite miserable.

It's not an exaggeration, as a university scholar, he was really angered by Gao Fang and had a nosebleed, which can be regarded as a kind of vomiting blood.

"Okay, the old man promised that at least he wouldn't hurt you in the palace exam." Zhang Shangying thought for a while and said, "The old man is not pedantic, he reads and takes exams to help the country select talents." And your pork flat's ability to do things has been tested. Literature...... The old man is not considered a personal fraud, after all, the old man is to help the emperor choose people, you can publish "Eternal Happiness", you can write the royal favorite "Big Bad Wolf", if you can still write a book to fight back against the traitorous party, then the old man took the lead and said that you are a rookie in the literary world, who dares not admit it! ”

Now Gao Fangping is relieved, the exam has been completed, with the help of Zhang Shuye, the Chinese scholar, and Zhang Shangying's support, it shouldn't be a big problem.

After YY finished, Gao Fangping said again, "Please give me some advice, how is the kid's Yongyule written?" ”

Zhang Shangying smiled and said: "If you don't come to Mengren, then if the old man you wrote about eats as cooking." But it's okay to write. ”

Gao Fangping said: "Well, it was actually written by Li Qingzhao." ”

When Zhang Shangying heard this, he immediately shook his head and said: "Actually, Yi'an's writing is really average, too childish, and there is a more beautiful way to imitate sentences." On the whole, the passing line is a little worse, and the odd words are not mentioned. ”

This time, Gao Fangping fainted, damn the literati's temperament, don't overestimate it. Maybe Lao Zhang doesn't like Li Qingzhao very much.

Immediately after, Gao Fangping took out a book from his arms and handed it to Zhang Shangying.

Lao Zhang looked at it, and Zhu Mian and others' fine essays, Gao Fangping's little white text is called "Journey to the West", which is just the opposite, talking about the monk who went to the West to learn scriptures and was robbed and harmed by Taoist people along the way.

Gao Fangping also had no details, but generally drew up an outline and route, wrote several main stories, set up eighty-one difficult themes, and wrote more than a dozen events in detail.

Zhang Shangying took a cursory look and fainted to the ground.

Damn's writing is so good-looking, in addition to the writing Xiaobai full of typos, but in terms of storytelling ability, it also exceeded Zhang Shangying's estimate, directly dumped Wang Huang Zhu Mian and others Eight streets, and the brain is bigger, the imagination is wild, there are many categories, but it is not chaotic, the setting is strict, the logic is clear, and the layers are advanced.

Zhang Shangying swore that he never thought that there would be such a story and setting, so wonderful and gripping, in terms of novel skills, Pork Ping in the Great Song Dynasty is already a great existence.

In fact, Gao Fangping used the blueprint of "Journey to the West", but strictly speaking, Journey to the West itself is only meaningful, the story is not very good-looking, and the logic does not match, the Xiaobaiwen of the Ming Dynasty is really weak, there is no clear level and force system at all, the overall mess is chaotic, the front can beat the Tiangong to the ground, but even the children of the Tiangong can't beat the back, but there is no reasonable self-justifying explanation, the real Journey to the West is poor in these places.

Not to mention the literary, only in terms of plot and storytelling ability, Tomato Chendong of the starting point network in later generations can beat ten Wu Chengen, so Gao Fangping used the blueprint for Journey to the West, the theme and events remain the same, but it is "quoting and borrowing" a lot of Tomato Chendong's techniques and storytelling methods, etc.

As a result, Lao Zhang Hu was really stunned, and he was reluctant to put it down for two hours, and asked him to eat hot pot, but he didn't come.

In the evening, Zhang Shangying finally finished reading it, and sighed: "The writing is very good, you will win, but the writing is too brief, and the writing skills are too poor." ”

Gao Fangping said: "I originally wrote just the main line, polish and fill, rearrange the clever words, this is of course your task, pay attention to a few points, can not use classical Chinese, can not be criticized by the young but so that the people can understand, your rhetoric skills are perfect, deliberately you can do it." Then, the setting and the main line direction, style, resolutely cannot be changed, otherwise it will hit the street. ”

Zhang Shangying nodded and said: "Of course it's easy to do this, but as soon as you come out, you are beating the Taoist priest to death, it doesn't matter if you hit the Taoist priest, but will there be a suspicion of lifting the Buddhist family?" The old man always believes that religion can exist but cannot participate in interference! ”

Gao Fangping said: "This is no way, for the time being, the enemy of the enemy is a friend, Buddhism is too pressed by the Taoist, and the Taoist priest of my dynasty is too good, even if the Zhang Huaisu incident is still a cow, the news from the south of the Yangtze River, Zhu Mian and others colluded with Lin Lingsu to build the Shenxiao Wanshou Palace, absorbing a large number of believers, and the momentum is so appalling that the Taoist can't sit still, and he is going to make trouble when he writes "Southeast Policy". ”

Zhang Shangying thought for a while and said helplessly: "Okay, it's only like this first, if the bald donkey becomes bigger, I think you will be a crazy little traitor who will clean them up, with you pulling hatred in front, the old man and the emperor don't have to worry about it." All in all, this time you pork flat used a pen to solve the problem, instead of taking the Yongle army to cut people everywhere, you have made a lot of progress, this is called Wenchen. In the future, you will play less hooligans. ”

"Uncle is mighty." Gao Fangping slapped him again.

Zhang Shangying turned to say: "However, while you are fighting Taoism, you added some black material of Manichaeism, what the hell is it?" Isn't that messy enough? As far as the old man knew, Manichaeism was barely mild. ”

Gao Fangping muttered: "Wen Buwen said, I will specialize in Manichaeism when I have the opportunity, but no matter what, Manichaeism has become big in Jiangnan, and there is a discussion in the southeast policy of the Taoist Sect, and there are more than 200,000 believers in the sect, and the unnoticeable thing is that it is only concentrated in the southeast generation and Taoism. If it's okay elsewhere, but the people in the southeast are now struggling to make a living, and they are controlled by the Cai Party, this situation is the soil used by religion, because the common people will think about other things as soon as they don't have anything to eat, and they will be taken advantage of, so the kid asserted that if it is not controlled, something will inevitably happen in Jiangnan within ten years. I hope that this time, you and I, two text hooligans, can properly remind some people in the world through the story, then there is one less member of the Manichaean sect, and the dynasty will be a little more stable, if a balance can be maintained, as long as there is no chaos, one day I will go to the southeast to teach them to be people, and cut off this tumor, then the serious illness of the dynasty will basically go. ”

Zhang Shangying said with a smile: "They will be influenced by you, because they will love to read your story, the old man will polish it, and give you a few days off, don't leave for the time being, and wait for the old man to dispatch at any time, this time we are going to fight a hard battle with those traitors on the text battlefield." ”

……

"Hmm...... Since then, in order to protect the homeland and the safety of the baby monkeys, the little monkey born from heaven and earth has resolutely embarked on a simple bamboo raft across the ocean, vowing not to return to Huaguo Mountain if he does not learn magical powers. ”

A Xiucai took the existing "Journey to the West" chapters and told stories to children in a courtyard.

In the end, Xiucai shook his head and added: "The little monkey is sitting on a simple bamboo raft, only one year old when he crosses the ocean and goes away, what awaits him is the barrier of thousands of mountains and rivers and nine deaths, if you want to know what will happen next, whether the stone monkey can survive, please wait for the next decomposition." ”

A group of stupid little children were boiling, and they had never heard such an interesting story. They all ran over and grabbed Xiucai's clothes and didn't let them leave, jumping and shouting, "What happened?" ”

"How do I know, this one is gone." Xiucai spread his hands.

So the children spontaneously started a discussion:

"The stone monkey is so powerful, it is so smart when it is less than a year old, and I thought of learning the skills to protect the baby monkeys."

"This kind of thinking of defending the family and the country is worth advocating."

"Do you think the stone monkeys will run out of power when they cross the sea? I've heard adults say that the sea is very dangerous, there is a kind of big fish that can easily knock over a big boat, and monkeys only have bamboo rafts, which is too dangerous. ”

"It's not dangerous, he has the power of the wilderness." A three-year-old girl said.

"It's going to run out." A boy said.

"What will be exhausted is not called the power of the wilderness." The little girl said stubbornly.

"If it is strength, it will be exhausted, and the sea has ten desolation powers." The little boy said.

The little girl said, "The sea has no power to flood. ”

The boy said angrily, "How do you know! ”

"Only monkeys have the power of the wilderness, I know." The little girl said.

"Believe it or not, beat you to tears, despite arguing with me?" The boy said...... (To be continued.) )