Overhaul announcement (this chapter is free of charge, be sure to read it)
The overhaul is as follows:
1: The humble position was replaced by the lower official, because the humble position was only found in the [Chen Shu] at the earliest, and the lower official was recorded in the [Han Shu].
2: Modified the relationship between Qiao Xuan, Huangfu Gui and Zhang Huan. Originally, it was a subordinate and superior, but now it has been corrected to a friend.
3: Your word is canceled or replaced by Jun, because there was no such word as you during the Han Dynasty, and they were all addressed by Jun or directly replaced by words.
4: The description of Li Yan's wife Yan Yun is Li Yan's beloved wife, because only the wives of the princes can be called Mrs
5: Yes changed to promise
6: The girl was replaced by a woman, the title of woman has appeared since the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and the girl has not been found
7: The daughter-in-law is replaced by the son-in-law
8: Plague and plague are reversed, according to the superficial research conducted again, the word plague has been used in the Jin Dynasty, and it should be the same name in the late Han Dynasty, which is a general term for various epidemic acute infectious diseases. The great plague is the epidemic of plague, which has been recorded in the [LΓΌ's Spring and Autumn Period].
9: In the chapter where Diao Chan is taken away, the title of Diao Chan changes from maiden to girl. Tsk,I don't know why it was written as a girl.,Maybe it's because I didn't think of the word girl at all.,I just didn't care about writing the words LoriγYoung girl.γ
10: The word "adult" is replaced, and in the Han Dynasty, the lord specifically refers to the princes and nobles, that is, the princes, kings, three dukes, and liehous can be called adults, and the county guards are replaced by the princes, and the assassins or state pastors are the envoys.
11: Zhang Jiao's title for the protagonist has been changed from Zunjia to Li Jun
12: Cancel the title of Aiqing, change it to an official name or call her by her name. Aiqing was first from the Southern Song Dynasty, and by the way, during the Song Dynasty, Aiqing was the name of the Qinglou woman. Such as [Pan Fang's gift to prostitutes]. The other three princes and liehous replaced (partially) with Qingqing, which somewhat ruined the three views.
13: Cai Yan's title for the protagonist was changed to gentleman, "Poem, Zhaonan, Grass Worm": "I haven't seen a gentleman, I'm worried." "The Book of the Later Han Dynasty, the Biography of the Daughters, Uncle Cao Shi's Wife": "Increase the shame of parents and return the tiredness of a gentleman." Li Xian's note: "A gentleman, a husband." β
14: According to the superficial research conducted again, it is determined that slaves and slaves and slaves are two different things, and slaves and maids are indeed slaves of the Han Dynasty, and they are generally referred to as men and women. Although most of the slaves and maids live no different from slaves and maids after being attached to the landlord, they are still different in terms of title.
"The Book of the Later Han Dynasty: The Biography of Zhongchang": "The room of the wealthy is hundreds of buildings, the fields are full of fields, there are thousands of slaves and maids, and there are thousands of plans. Note: "Disciples, all also; Attached, pro also. β
Now the self-proclaimed unity is changed to servant, the same for men and women.
15: I've fixed a few typos, but to be honest, I really can't read every line and word one by one, so I can only change it by the way when I revise it. So if you see a typo, please send a comment to tell me which word in which chapter I used the wrong word, so I can find it.
16: I didn't know how to say the word "well". Well~ How do you say it? Maybe it's influenced by the anime of the island country, right? Actually, when the protagonist was a child, I wanted to use a prefix like "Ahh
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To be honest, I always feel that when I send out this chapter, there will be a lot of relatives to say.
"I thought it was an update......
"With this kung fu, it's all out in a chapter."
Well...... How so? In fact, if you don't do this, maybe all three chapters will come out, because this overhaul has been done from more than 7 o'clock in the morning to more than 7 o'clock in the evening. And to be honest, it takes a lot of effort but it doesn't necessarily please anyone.
After all, this book is already on the shelves, and the people who can read it next have already accepted the previous settings, and there are even many relatives who have argued with me and others about these settings, and now, they have been overturned all at once...... But even so, those who left because of the previous setting are unlikely to come back, isn't that the case with online articles? Not to mention the category of the Three Kingdoms.
But how to say it? History~ Although maybe my writing is very poor, the plot, characters and anything are not much better, and from the perspective of style, it is not an orthodox historical text, but at least, I still hope to make it a little better. Even if it's just a look, even if it's just some of the most common names.
Is it okay for a gentleman to change to a husband? Naturally, it can be, after all, the protagonist is the head of the family, and it seems that he can call his wife and concubine whatever he wants, as long as he doesn't commit taboos. But...... Maybe it's because I'm a Virgo? Well...... It's really a good constellation~ Yes, it's not that I want to waste my time doing this kind of thankless thing, but that there is a Virgo interfering in everything!
Ahem......
In short, that's all for this overhaul, after all, maybe I've written such a book of the Three Kingdoms in my life, and I still hope to improve it as much as possible. Ha~ There's a lot more I want to write~ And the last Japanese Warring States was not so satisfied, I originally wanted to be close to the historical facts, but I finally gave up because it was too troublesome. Now, I don't want to do it a second time.
At last...... Hawkers,There's nothing to end it up with~ If you feel that what is written in this article is not quite right, you are welcome to correct it, but it's still the same as I said before. Refuse to scold the street, point out the problem, and then post it elegantly.
Finally, at the end of the day, I hope that those relatives who were led out by my post will stop complaining about me, although it seems that in the chapter I posted today, I just promised that I would never dare to do this kind of thing again. But I promise, this really is the last time.