A few words written at the end of the first volume (important!) )
1. Opening thanks
The first volume was finally written.,It took forty days to create.,"Liangzhou Ci" is currently more than 2,000 collections and recommendations.,How to say it.,The results are not good.,But when I remember the initial creation.,Every day I vote for my own works.,Now there is such an achievement.,Xiaoxin is still very happy.,Thank you to all the book friends who have been enthusiastically supporting.,Thank you also to the July god of "Warring States Bright Moon" and the author of "Conquering the Top" Erlang. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info
In view of some of the current situations encountered in "Liangzhou Ci", at the end of the first volume, although Xiaoxin wants to spend more time on consulting information, conceiving plots, and working hard to code words, but the three of them have become tigers, and under the surging public opinion, they have to spare most of their time to write the content of this chapter, the content is very long, and some book friends may be impatient and unwilling to read it, but Xiaoxin still hopes that everyone can calm down and take a look.
Second, the original intention of writing
The story has to start from the place where the dream started, and the reason why Xiaoxin started writing is also because he had a dream of writing an unusual Three Kingdoms novel a long time ago. Of course, the biggest difference between dreams and reality is that reality will force you to keep your head down and do things, but dreams will only rot in your heart as you grow older. What made Xiaoxin choose to practice his dreams instead of letting them rot was because of two books.
One is "The Most Merry of the Three Kingdoms", and the other is "Spring and Autumn I am the King", Lao Zhao provided Xiaoxin with an idea of creating unusual Three Kingdoms, and July used his talent to give his book friends a vivid and interesting Spring and Autumn history lesson, in the process of reading, Xiaoxin gained a lot and felt a lot. Therefore, when he dreamed back at midnight, full of feelings and a little thinking about reality, Xiaoxin began to make up his mind and start writing.
3. The structure of the novel and the plot in the early stage
Xiaoxin told you before in "Xiaoxin Answers Questions from Book Friends" that "Liangzhou Ci" takes the general trend of the world in the four years of Zhongping as a starting point, and focuses on historical facts and the overall situation of a novel of the Three Kingdoms in the late Han Dynasty, maybe everyone hasn't paid much attention to it when they read it, but Xiaoxin feels that it is still necessary to talk about it at this time.
The grand view of history emphasizes the connection and causal relationship between the background and the many causes of the occurrence of events, and we generally know that the occurrence of events is the result of the accumulation of many causes. But they can't dissect it and give satisfactory correct answers and ways to understand it. Therefore, Xiaoxin hopes to focus on historical facts and the overall situation in the novel, and takes the assassination of Geng Contempt against the rebels in Liangzhou in the fourth year of Zhongping as the starting point of the story.
On the macro level, Xiaoxin tried to connect the Liangzhou turmoil again and the subsequent rebellion of the Xiongnu Tu in Bingzhou, the emperor of Youzhou Zhangju, the rise of the Qingxu Yellow Turban in the east, the Yellow Turban Son of Heaven in Yizhou, and the Baibo Army in Hedong, so that everyone can see the ups and downs of the Han Empire at the end of the novel, for which the Han court restored the state pastor externally, and set up the Xiyuan New Army internally, Liu Yan, Tao Qian, Dong Zhuo, and Gongsun Zan began to make contributions to the rebellion in various states, and new talents such as Yuan Shao and Cao Cao gradually occupied an important corner of the court. The rebellion of the Quartet seemed to have quieted down, but these measures laid the crux of the outbreak of many major events in the future, and the entire Han Empire fell into a dangerous calm that was about to come.
Microscopically, the plot of the protagonist Yan Xing is like the title of the first volume. You may not have noticed that the word "ups and downs" in "ups and downs in troubled times", one floating and one sinking, is a portrayal of the great joint strength of the Liangzhou coalition forces and the weakness of internal strife, and it is also the fate of Yan Xing, who rose from the trend. The first volume of the book, the reborn protagonist Yan Xing's plot line is to have great ambitions - with the army to the east - defeated and fleeing - the mountains and fields - such a process of spiritual redemption, Xiaoxin wants to show you is not an illusory character who blindly dominates the world, but a flesh-and-blood, true temperament of the hero, many people just see him as a fierce general who rushed out of the sea of corpses and blood, but Xiaoxin also wants to tell everyone that such a character, he is also a reborn with deep forbearance, He has too many burdens on him, and he has accumulated too much anger. There are two mentions of Yan Xing's anger in the text, once by Yan Shi's recitation of "Peng Niao Fu", and once by the kindness and sincerity of the girl, and the two characters created are not without consideration. Let's take the girl Xiaolu as an example, her innocence and kindness are particularly important to Yan Xing, who is deep in forbearance, just like the relationship between Ji Kui and Chong'er, Empress Zhang and Zhu Wen in history.
The second volume is called "Wandering Alone Under the Fence", which is a concentrated outbreak of major events in the late Han Dynasty from a macro perspective, and Yan Xing witnessed in another capacity how the second Liangzhou Group, which was heavily insider, stirred up the big chess game of the world at the end of the Han Dynasty after Dong Zhuo entered Beijing.
From a microscopic point of view, Yan Xing will reunite with his former subordinates, overcome many difficulties, become a member of the Dong army, go to the side of first-class strategists and first-class generals, take advantage of the momentum, appreciate the demeanor of the strategists and fierce generals in this troubled era, and strengthen his strength. Under the combination of history and art, Li Ru and Xu Rong, who are unknown in history, can have a fuller side to show in front of everyone, and Dong Zhuo, Niu Fu, Hu Zhen, Lu Bu, Li Dao, Guo Yan These characters will also take turns to appear, and the excitement continues.
Fourth, the choice between foreshadowing and a sense of gain and coolness
1, in the ambush pen, Xiaoxin buried a lot of foreshadowing in the first volume, such as the movements of the third uncle Yan Li, the boy who met by chance in Chang'an, the beautiful woman who gave the horse, the wrench of the marksman, the knot that looks like a god, and the strict master and the deer after leaving. The second volume will also bury a lot of foreshadowing, creating a few little people who are trying to survive in troubled times, or greedy for money and lustful, or compromised······ These seemingly useless trivialities will also be an opportunity to set off plot waves in the future.
2. In the choice of the sense of acquisition and pleasure of reading, Xiaoxin still adheres to his original intention, hoping that in addition to bringing book friends a wonderful journey of the Three Kingdoms at the end of the Han Dynasty, there are also historical insights interspersed in the plot, celebrity anecdotes of the two Han Dynasty, inspiring rhetoric, poetry and Han Fu, and some theories that discuss the ancient rich country and strong army and the struggle for domination of the world, and at the same time, if possible, some stories of various dynasties after artistic processing will also be added. The story of Zhou Wenyu of the Southern Dynasty, Timur of Central Asia, and Nian Qianyao of the Qing Dynasty has been processed in the text, and book friends may not have discovered it.
If there is time in the future, Xiaoxin will slowly sort it out from the article. Book lovers who don't like it may find it very wordy and boring, but Xiaoxin wants to say that the things accumulated over the years of reading are actually one of the essences of this novel. In addition to recommending, collecting, and subscribing to the standard of a novel, after it is completed, it can allow readers who have read it to read, feel it, and get the precipitated knowledge, so that more book friends like history and the essence of some traditional Chinese culture, which is also an encouragement and spiritual comfort for Xiaoxin, who is silently coded by words.
5. Some replies from the book review area:
The following points will answer some doubts or controversial questions of book friends,Xiaoxin in the book review area will basically read it twice a day, morning and evening,Some of these questions,Not only to Xiaoxin to bring some trouble,It will also make Xiaoxin a little crying and laughing,Just make a general answer here,The content is not aimed at any of the book friends who put forward opinions。
1. Delete a statement: Fighting for hegemony in the world does not necessarily mean that you can only write about Jin Ge Iron Horse, farming and training, the overall situation of the world and the various states of life in troubled times, tough guys and tenderness, are not contradictory. For book lovers who have been pushed all the way and have a strong path dependence on the stallion harem, this "Liangzhou Ci" is a slow-burning book, Xiaoxin will not write fast food articles, nor will he go against his original intention in order to pursue cool points and novel achievements, and delete the plot of defeat and flight in the book.
2. Talk about love: After the protagonist escaped and was injured, he needed to replenish horses and food, and came to Oxtail. Got along with the girl who had a misunderstanding for a short time.,There's a fate for a while.,There's nothing wrong with that.。 After the defeat, he has been bitter and does not approach people, which does not conform to the image of Yan Xing created earlier, nor does he seem to be a protagonist who can dominate the world. In the article, Yan Xing did not take the initiative to fall in love, but the girl who also experienced the escape in the back had a little sympathy and admiration for Yan Xing, who was brave and brave, this mountain and forest settlement did not have so much red tape, and there were no tender women in the mountains and wilderness, so it was no problem to dare to love and hate.
3. The harvest of defeat: The lessons learned after the defeat This is a very abstract thing, which can only be expressed from the plot later, and it is meaningless to directly list what you have learned.
4. Unprepared and illogical: Before the war, Yan Xing had a premonition that the coalition army might be defeated, so he asked Ganling to retreat to the back to prevent any eventuality, which can be regarded as a precautionary preparation. It can't be said that before retreating, in the case of heavy snow blocking the road, first kill Wang Fan who patrolled with iron horses, and then take the road and run wildly, rush back to Liangzhou, and take advantage of the opportunity of other soldiers and horses to stay in Sanfu, sweep away all families, unify Liangzhou, and wait for Zhao'an to be logical.
5. The military order prohibits it: This question is a good question. The difference between the trilogy and the guests mentioned in the previous article, and then when Li Biao and Zhao Hong were in the camp of Yan Xing, it was not that they removed the soldiers on duty, but that Yan Shun listened to the opinions of Gan Ling and others and died down. If you want to dig deeper, it is related to the way generals lead the troops, treat each other with martial arts and kindness, and control them with the power of military law, this is a completely different method. The former are such as Li Guang and Wei Shang, and the latter are such as Wei Qing and Gongsun He. In addition, it is also related to the rectification of military law and military discipline and the allocation of generals' powers, which is already the foreshadowing at the end of the second volume, so I won't go into detail here.
In the end, Xiaoxin still hopes that book friends who like this book can vigorously support "Liangzhou Ci", and Xiaoxin doesn't like to say at the end that "Xiaoxin must stick to this book, even if it is against the sky, it must win the sky and half a son". There will definitely be difficulties and setbacks, and one problem with the fast word count is that there is no recommended list that can accommodate "Liangzhou Ci", but Xiaoxin will also try his best to write this story of the Three Kingdoms at the end of the Han Dynasty. So, book friends, don't be stingy with your recommendations and collections, and support Xiaoxin with your hands, and we'll see you in the second volume! Welcome to join the Liangzhou Ci of the Three Kingdoms, group number: 632956492.