Chapter 181: If there is no problem, find out the fault
After reading this poem, Lin Daiyu was surprised. She looked at the words, then at Qin Zhen, and had nothing to say for a while.
It's a very good phrase. Lin Daiyu rummaged through her mind, and she couldn't remember the ancient and modern lyricists, who had ever made such a poem.
Then, this poem is Qin Zhen's original, and there is no doubt about it.
And this poem is a portrayal of the mood of the lyricist's heart. Qin Zhen wrote in the title, this is because he saw his plum blossoms blooming and remembered Lu You's poem, so he made a song and composition.
But the meaning of the word is completely opposite.
Lu You's song is made by remembering the dead, so there is naturally a kind of gloomy charm in it.
But Qin Zhen's song is a down-to-earth atmosphere, which can't be concealed, and it has to be directly revealed on the back of the paper.
The situation of the two of them, although it is low-level and respectful, is very difficult.
Ordinary people, in this situation, and it is worth the heavy snow in the city, how about it, they will be a little depressed in their hearts.
Maybe when you start writing poems, you will be old-fashioned, and when you sigh for the wind, you will show a sense of decay.
But Qin Zhen's word is unconventional, and the atmosphere is awe-inspiring, with a vigorous momentum, rushing to the face.
This shows that the lyricist has a vision for the future, and does not let himself be troubled by the current situation in the slightest.
This Qin Zhen is really not simple!
Lin Daiyu thought to herself.
But......
However, although Lin Daiyu has nothing to say about Qin Zhen's literary talent and mind, but for Qin Zhen, she thinks he is perfect, but it may not be.
Although Qin Zhen's words are well written, his handwriting is really too bad. Dull, I really can't see a little aura.
Even her words can throw Qin Zhen ten streets.
But think about it, forget it, Qin Zhen is just a scholar, and it is normal that the words are poor. You can't blame him too much.
No one is perfect! It's rare to be able to write words so well.
Lin Daiyu was quite appreciative and amazed at Qin Zhen at this time.
The two of them are holding each other here, and the others, of course, pay some attention to them.
However, they were all taking care of their own couplets before, so they didn't pay much attention to Qin Zhen and Lin Daiyu.
At this time, after seeing Lin Daiyu reading Qin Zhen's lyrics, her expression was a little wrong, and Shi Xiangyun also came over and said:
"What a great masterpiece has the lord of Zhenguo done, how can we make our poet Kui sister Lin have nothing to say, is it so powerful? Let me take a look too. ”
As she spoke, she took the poem written by Qin Zhen and went over to read it.
In Shi Xiangyun's sentence, Lin Daiyu was called a poet lady, and that was because Lin Daiyu won the poet in their poetry club several times, so she was famous, so she said that.
And when she took Qin Zhen's words and looked at them, she couldn't help but take a breath, and was silent for a long time, and she was speechless.
With her talent, if she wants to make such words, I'm afraid she can't.
Therefore, she also has nothing to say.
The other Jia Tanchun and Xue Baochai also saw that the situation was different at this time, and the words of Qin Zhen were really so good, so that Shi Xiangyun and Lin Daiyu had nothing to say?
These sisters usually play together, and they probably know each other's level of learning.
Shi Xiangyun, that is also the one who has won the poem a few times. Although not as much as Lin Daiyu.
But now the two of them are surprised by Qin Zhen's poem, so it can be seen that Qin Zhen's poem is really unique.
At that moment, the two people also came to watch, and after inspecting it, it was difficult to say for a while.
This poem is not something they can make, nor is it something they can judge.
They don't have such a mind and talent.
However, it is difficult to say about people's psychology, although they all know the word Qin Zhen and have reached a certain level.
However, if they insist on being unconvinced and nitpicking, in fact, they can still find out the shortcomings of Qin Zhen's poem.
"The ancients wrote words, of course, there were also inscriptions, and many of them are fine works. When it is Qiwen, it is not inferior.
But you're just a small order, but the topic takes up so much space, it's a bit noisy. Bad review! ”
"But if you can use this title in a long tune, it really complements each other. Because your quote is actually quite well written. ”
At this time, Xue Baochai suddenly said.
Roar ......
Qin Zhen looked at Xue Baochai, this fat girl was too observant. It's just picking on his faults, and if there is no problem, he has to say some truth, really, it's infuriating.
"Sister Bao said this, but there is some truth, although it is a little demanding, but the shortcomings are the shortcomings, and people can't help but say it. For example, in this quotation, some words and sentences are not close to the facts, and they are also used incorrectly. Zhen Guogong, don't you say? ”
As soon as Xue Baochai said this, Shi Xiangyun looked at Qin Zhen's poem again on the side, and said at this time.
Where else can people criticize? Qin Zhen carefully looked at the inscription he wrote, looked left and right, and didn't see anything wrong.
Suddenly, his eyes fell on the word "lying alone", and he thought to himself, could it be that Shi Xiangyun said this?
He really didn't sleep alone, but Shi Xiangyun and the others, could they be so dirty? This is also immediately reminiscent?
When I read the book, I always think that these girls in the dream of Red Mansions should be very simple! Thoughts don't get so dirty - uh, it's complicated, I should say.
But now, it doesn't seem to be true!
But someone is right, girls in front of people, show to others, are their virtuous and virtuous side, in private, in fact, there is a little presumptuous, that is a lady is inevitable.
If you blindly treat them as fairies who don't eat the fireworks of the world, you are stupid, but it is not a wise thing.
So Qin Zhen looked at Shi Xiangyun again.
Shi Xiangyun really said him on purpose. Qin Zhen took Diao Chan back, who doesn't know what he thinks in his heart? So at this time, Shi Xiangyun used the excuse to laugh at him.
At this time, seeing Qin Zhen staring at her, she smiled and didn't raise the bar with Qin Zhen. Just said: "Hey, where are we connecting our own sentences, come again!" ”
She's trying to change the subject.
Lin Daiyu said at this time: "It's broken." And then there will be no connection, or, another verse. But that can wait a while. We are all looking at Zhen Guogong's masterpieces now, so we might as well let Zhen Guogong come up with another song!
Otherwise, when we get started, the couplet will not be finished until it gets dark. In this way, isn't it cheaper for Zhenguogong? ”
"Why don't we let Zhenguo Gong offer the treasure first, and then come to our own, how about it?"
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