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First of all, thank you.

It is your support that has made me persist on the road of professional writer.

Everyone knows that my military service started from "The Strongest Army Soul", to be honest, the first military brigade, I don't know how many times I cried because of the plot.

After the three million words were over, I immediately created a second military book, that is, "The Legend of the Strongest Special Forces", which was written about Ye Chen's eldest apprentice, Li Lingtian.

Readers who have read it know that 1.6 million is over, why, because it is very pounced on the street, and it is not enough to support the family.

At that time, I hesitated, and I was under a lot of pressure, and in desperation, I opened the third book of "The Best Special Warfare King", which is said to be a military service, but it is actually a strange ability text.

It's more urban, to be honest, I made some money, but I really don't like it, and I finished writing 2.92 million words.

With some money, I began to get nervous, and I felt that I had to continue to write about my preferences, that is, the military.

So there is this "The Strongest Supreme Soldier King", which was prepared in April 2018 and released in June.

I was full of confidence, but I was slapped hard by reality again, and the editor gave me a lot of good resources, but the results still hit the street.

Very few people read it, so I suddenly lost my confidence, and the editors, including my family and enthusiastic readers, encouraged me.

So I started to prepare a new book, wrote a 180,000-word manuscript, and prepared to come back in the new year.

But after reading it to the editor, he told me that the estimated score of that book should be worse than this one.

I suddenly felt cold again, after all, the child was two years old, and my wife couldn't go to work to take care of the family, and I was the only source of income for the family.

Countless sleepless nights, what am I going to do if I can't support my family?

Just when I was hesitating, my editor-in-charge took four days to talk to me word by word, from morning to night.

To be honest, there are hundreds of people in the military team, just two editors, and no one can find time to spend so much time with one person, and he is also an author who does not produce results, I am really moved.

He first denied my writing method and raised several questions, 1. The dialogue did not advance the plot and was too watery, 2. The plot was not compact enough and too slow, 3. The character characteristics were not obvious and did not give an impression, 4. The supporting characters were not prominent, and the passers-by were in a state of state, 5. The story was too bland and the structure was not right, 6. There were too many waste words "because, so, if, but, already, yes, yes...... And so on more than ten questions.

To be honest, after that, I won't write.

A man in his thirties, looking at the words he had written on the computer, was particularly ashamed.

After summarizing the problem, I worked with the editor to create a new book, focusing on my story structure, using his analysis as the state of revision, from character portrayal to language refinement, a series of changes, 6,000 words, I changed it for four whole days, more than 16 hours a day, physically and mentally exhausted.

Fortunately, I gritted my teeth and changed it, and the editor thought it was good, so I continued to keep it, and I also promised to save the manuscript and prepare for the release of the book after the New Year.

The editor also told me that he had to read every chapter, and he would write it from scratch if he was not qualified.

So I compared it word by word, and the dialogue was written in an oral way, and when I looked back after writing, all the useless plots were deleted.

In this way, I trembled, and in ten days, I wrote a story of 70,000 words.

Just when I was full of confidence, the editor said, if this book is released in early 2018, it may be good, and now at the end of the year, there are too many similar themes, and it is also slightly better than the strongest supreme soldier king, can you imagine, how high is this crit, I was directly blinded again.

Wandering and helpless, the backbone of a family in his thirties with parents and children was twisted like a knife at that moment.

The hardships are not to be described one by one.

It wasn't until the early morning of the 31st, that is, the day when the strongest supreme soldier king ended, that a thought flashed through his mind.

Why do I keep insisting on pure military service? It's because I think Chinese soldiers are worthy of praise, and I like this passionate feeling.

So why can't it be reflected in other ways, so I combined it with the glory of kings who occasionally kill time, and wrote the most popular system article now.

I remember that on the afternoon of the 31st, the editor was on vacation, and I sent him a 6,000-word opening article at 5 a.m., and he actually replied.

It's a good idea, but the opening is still my previous procrastination style, the language is concise but the story is too slow.

So during the three days of his vacation, he wrote 10,000 words a day, deleted six or seven thousand, three times, and wrote a new book.

To be honest, the emperor paid off, and the two editors agreed that this book might be able to surpass all my previous ones.

So I began to save manuscripts with confidence again (readers who read my books know that I save a lot of manuscripts, because I will start writing two or three months in advance, and I will save explosives, which is also a habit to ensure that I will never keep up, and I can occasionally explode, which may also be what the editor likes me)

But on January 3rd, when I saved more than 10,000 words and was still revising the plot repeatedly, the editor said that the book would be issued immediately, and if I waited until the Chinese New Year, the daylily would be cold.

So, in this case, I released a new book "Special Forces: The Strongest King System" without a manuscript, and I was still adapting to the new way of writing, so I changed to a new pen name: Huo Linsen.

Perhaps, this is a new beginning, and it is also a farewell to the former me.

As you read now, God bless you will have a magnificent rebirth.

I can't say how good a book I can write, but I'm really changing.

Concise language is my first goal, to use the most accurate way to express it, so that you can appreciate a new story, and at the same time, it will also open a new era of blood.

With my heart, I write the iron blood of soldiers and the heroes I yearn for.

If you don't give up, see you in our new book "The Strongest King System of Special Forces".

Thank you!