Chapter 04: The Last Bullet Left for Me
Creating a classic military novel, and it has to be linked to sales, which suddenly makes Lin Dong feel a little difficult!
Because, since it is the first book created (copycat) in his name, the quality naturally cannot be too bad. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
The quality is too poor, and Lin Dong himself is a little unable to take it!
However, since it is the first novel, the quality cannot be too good.
Because the first part was done too well, it may not be able to play later, and it is said that Jiang Lang is exhausted!
At that time, if the system comes up with another task of cheating, Lin Dong will not have to die?
"! That's it! ”
Sitting in front of the military computer in the class that was not connected to the Internet, Lin Dong, who had been entangled for half an hour, turned his heart sideways, and knocked down the words "The last bullet is left for me" on the newly built document with both hands.
Choosing the book "The Last Bullet Left for Me", Lin Dong was actually deliberate.
The first point is that "The Last Bullet Left for Me" is the first military novel in the previous life that was on fire on both the Internet and the entity, and the number of words is not very large, only about five or six hundred thousand.
The second point is that the original owner's life experience is actually a little similar to the original Liu Meng. Both of them are engaged in art, and they were also born in the directing department of the Central Academy of Drama.
The third point is the military craze that this book set off in the previous life, and the subsequent success of this book.
The fourth point is that this book is not a pure military novel in the strict sense, the essence of this book is actually a Qiong Yao-style romance and military theme, which is suitable for newcomers to use as a pioneering work.
Based on the above four points, Lin Dong felt that his first novel was suitable for him to choose!
Because after he checked the results of the military novels of this time and space, he found that the column of the air force brigade novels at this time was blank!
Of course, the blank mentioned here naturally does not mean that no one writes novels with military themes. The blank here refers to the China of this time and space, and there is no military novel that is well known to the general public in the real sense, and has become a real fire, making people want to join the army and fight with guns after reading it.
From the point of view of Lin Dong, a real soldier, the last bullet left to me actually belongs to the category of YY, and its essence is nothing more than an emotional novel dressed in military clothing.
And this emotional category is still Qiong Yao-style!
Yes, whether it is the love between Xiaozhuang and Xiaoying, or the comradeship and brotherhood written in the article, they are actually just the products of a senior student in a rental room!
In the original book, Liu Meng was called "Young Marshal with Wolf Teeth", but most people don't know whether he served in the army or not.
But as far as the military career written in his book is concerned, there are indeed too many discrepancies with reality.
However, these are not what Lin Dong should consider now, the only thing he should think about now is how to write five or six hundred thousand words in a month.
Without further ado, after deciding on the title of the book to create, Lin Dong's ten sleeve-length fingers danced quickly on the keyboard like winged elves.
Title: "The Last Bullet Left for Me"
Author: Lin Dong
Introduction: If the motherland needs, please bury me in a distant hill, let my body grow an invisible barrier, and my comrades-in-arms will shed tears for me; If the motherland needs it, please let me hold the hot steel gun tightly, let my hands hold a round of vicissitudes of red sun, the cold earth will soothe my wounds; If the motherland needs, please go to the battlefield to kill the enemy, let your heart and mine beat in the blue sky, and compose an eternal and immortal movement! ”
Lin Dong did not directly copy the introduction of the work "The Last Bullet Left for Me", but excerpted a dialogue between Chen Pai on the hospital bed and persuading Xiaozhuang to stay in the special forces.
In Lin Dong's opinion, the introduction of the book in the original book is too ordinary and has no characteristics.
So he abandoned the introduction of the original book and replaced it with this dialogue that I felt burning just by reading the text.
"Chapter 1 refinement
Section I
Where to start?
At the end of 2002, I ended a career as a drifter in the crew, and I had just settled down in a city. At that time, I changed several girlfriends one after another, and there was no sense of stability in my life. The so-called stability is nothing more than renting a one-bedroom apartment of less than 40 square meters in the family area of a university in the west of the city.
I often sit in the small courtyard in a daze with a beer in my hand on days when I don't have a job. The good thing about the first floor is that there is a small courtyard, and it is already the snow season, but I don't feel the cold. When I was in the army, I once spent half a month in the northeastern mountains of minus 30 degrees, which was the so-called cold survival training, and I have long been accustomed to the cold. When I was filming in Tibet, I often got up shirtless in the morning and ran in the white-haired wind, which was regarded as a neurotic ...... by my colleagues."
The book "The Last Bullet Left for Me" is written in the first person, with a kind of documentary and autobiographical flavor, while the mode of writing adopts backwards and recollections, which is different from the current third-person and step-by-step mode.
Some people say that the first-person writing technique is mostly used by newcomers and rookies, because the story is simple and handy to write in the first person.
Not really!
It's easy to write in the first person, but it's hard to tell the story well in the first person, and to write about the kind of flavor that the author has actually experienced!
If it weren't for the fact that the book "The Last Bullet Left for Me" in his previous life had been tested by the baptism of artillery fire and the people, Lin Dong would really not dare to joke with his own life.
"What else do I see?
A lonely figure.
A lonely log.
A lonely face.
He was wearing a faded camouflage uniform, a pair of shabby camouflage military boots, and he was bareheaded, and the snowflakes melted when they fell above his head, turning into a cloud of white gas and rising into the sky. Unlike the camouflage uniform worn by other migrant workers, his camouflage uniform was tucked into his trousers, tied with a wide green nylon belt and black metal buckles; The colors are not very different, the material is very thick, and there are a few patches on it, embroidered with fine stitches; The cuffs of the trousers were neatly tucked into the light military boots of the shabby camouflage canvas, and the laces were neatly tied......
He's shouting a trumpet and moving a log! ”
I don't know if it's the reason for the crossing or the problem of the system, Lin Dong found that his memory was so good that it couldn't be better.
Before he started to code, Lin Dong only had scattered fragments of the first few chapters of the book "The Last Bullet Left for Me" in his mind. But after he actually started to code words, the original scattered fragments all formed words in his mind since they "boomed".
So the result now is that Lin Dong only needs to code it out with the keyboard according to the words that pop up in his head.
Half an hour.
It's only half an hour!
Lin Dong wrote a whole chapter, 2,000 words.
"Haha! Now don't worry about the end of the month code incomplete book, and be wiped out by the pit daddy's system. ”
Moved his somewhat sour fingers, and Lin Dong, who was originally worried that he would not be able to finish the whole book at the end of the month, suddenly narrowed his smiling eyes.