At the end of the first volume, looking back, there are many regrets. The pen %fun %Pavilion www.biquge.info wanted to write the Red Mansion fandom through the way of writing ordinary novels, using a slightly faster rhythm to drive the story, cutting out some so-called branches, so that the main line always runs through the protagonist's business line, but it turned out to be wrong.

Now that I think about it, the Red Mansion Doujin still needs some charm. This charm does not refer to the taste of the text of the Red Mansion, the text of the Red Mansion naturally has its charm, and it is quite unique, but it is meaningless to simply imitate it after all, it seems that the female frequency author is willing to do this, from the general narrative language to the dialogue, all imitate, it may also be a kind of idiot. In fact, it is precisely because of its uniqueness that it is not advisable to imitate, otherwise the words written will have no soul of their own at all and lose their spiritual side.

This charm is not the charm of the other, and the charm of the text is different from the charm of the content of the work after all.

If you only write the story and extract the story itself, there will be nothing left, and there will be no connotation. Therefore, there must always be something other than the story, and it does not have to be intentional, some of the artistic conceptions and perceptions created by the work through the characters themselves can be touched or tasted by the reader, in short, the content that can be touched or tasted and chewed can be stopped for a moment, and there will be charm in it.

This requires slowing down the pace and shifting from a monotonous stylistic to a slightly more complex stylistic expression, the story is still the same story, but the way of expression changes, such as the layers of smudging in ink paintings, and the natural charm comes out.

What is lacking in the first volume is this charm. While I'm happy with some of the chapters, overall, there's something missing. So at the end of the first volume, I have made some conscious adjustments. By the second volume, it had been completely reversed.

Maybe you can modify it, but before you put it on the shelf, you can throw out new chapters while modifying it, so that you can see more free chapters.

After saying that, let's end this testimonial, I think I have become a testimonial maniac, more than 100,000 words, I wrote two testimonials inexplicably.

Finally, let's talk about it.,It's a naked run this week.,After all, it's a newcomer.,Or keep a good attitude.,Recommend it.,Although the ups and downs of the collection of something.,Now basically don't look at it.,The most important thing to write well.。 ^_^