Anyway, when I read this book, I didn't like this tone very much.

If I hadn't read Sang Ge and Sansheng first, I would have given up the article.

First of all, I have to complain.,I don't know why.,The name of the heroine makes me all kinds of unhappy.,ybe I'm too entangled with the word.。

And when I look at it, Cangxiao looks at it and thinks it's Xuanxiao- -

All right. I'm too much of a convulsive bird...

said that when I read the text, one of the styles I hate the most is that the male and female protagonists are separated because of the so-called misunderstanding.

Nima was obviously still heartbroken before, and then everything was whitewashed!!

It is said that this is the author's first article, well, probably the style at that time was all kinds of misunderstandings.

I am glad that this misunderstanding has occurred once in this article.

I want to declare that I'm targeting this style, not the author of this article~ ^_^

Even if I die, even if you die, let me accept incompetence

And I think the final Liang Yingzhu's formation is very buggy.。。

The heroine went back two hundred years ago.

And that formation looks like the otherworldly blood of the heroine is very important.

Liang Ying's master envoy did not know the prophet. That god Ma Jumang God also brought the heroine back for Mao.。。。

The heroine's divine power only makes me feel like a mobile blood bank.

Witches can see that the heroine is insulated, and the physique is hairy, and a god can't see it.

Where did Nima's last sky come from with the confidence to let the heroine go underground alone?

Also, if you become a god, you will be indifferent.

But people remember it.

For Mao, for Mao, to alienate the heroine?

Afraid of dying? He didn't do anything in the end, did he?

The ending made me the most depressed, and I chased it to the modern era!!

It's too much...

It's so distracting from fame and fortune. The king does not be a fox, nor a god, nor does ... (549 words)

70 chapters, finally over, still my favorite number 7.

I'm a passer-by who likes to flip through reviews.

Some comments said that the beginning was very tiring and messy, but in fact, it was just because this article did not follow the crowd.

What does it mean to be not thunderous and not chaotic?

Does it have to start with a passing, how to pass it on, where to wear it, how to wear it, Xianxia must chase after it, and say that although your style is like whom, who's what kind of text, but I still give you 2 points, you want to cherish the blessing and have more fine points?

Whoever raises whose appetite is spoiled.

The characters at the beginning of this article are plump, as if I am a creature who suddenly woke up after sleeping for thousands of years on Youdu Mountain, I looked at the love and hatred of these people, and experienced Yan Ruoyi's life.

If I were Yan Ruoyi, I wouldn't silently cut my own blood to raise creatures that seem to be rivals in love (it's actually the male protagonist's sister, I spoiled it).

If I were Yan Ruoyi, I would like to cut my flesh with blood, and I would definitely let others share three points.

I can't help it, I'm a creature that hurts a thousand people and hurts eight hundred careful eyes.

When you fall in love with someone, you can easily lose yourself.

As soon as Yan Ruoyi fell in love with Cangxiao, she became inferior, sensitive, frightened, and uncertain, just because in that area, with Yan Ruoyi's weakness of her own strength, it contrasted with the strength of Cangxiao.

If I were Yan Ruoyi, I would say a word to Cangxiao, don't you just rely on me to like you and love you, if I don't love you, what can you do with me.

If you rely on Yan Ruoyi to like you, you can rescue your sister's spiritual object. I really want to say, do you owe half a cent to your clan for the heart of Xunchi and Yan Ruoyi's blood? Not owed. So, how do you open your mouth, just because she loves you or just because you are strong, she has to be like this.

If you want to make a twin seal, you will knot, if you want to become a demon, you will become a demon, if you want to become a god, you can throw away the clear soup noodles, and you can do whatever you want.

If Mo Mo can't take Yan Ruoyi away again and again, if Yan Ruoyi really falls down from Youdu Mountain, the bones are gone, and the soul is scattered, if Yan Ruoyi doesn't set foot on the land of Kyushu again, if Mo Mo comes half a minute late...... You haven't thought about what if, what do you think it should be, and who owes you anything.

I'm going to see the abuse of this dead fox. En. Don't forget the pit of rice wine and realgar wine. (662 words)

Commenting on "A Few Soul Dreams" by Orange Sauce

Because the place where the author needs a special comment is the plot, I'll go straight to the point. First of all, I would like to explain to the author that the following is only a reader's opinion, absolutely subjective, the author laughed at it, and did not have to think about it.

A large part of the front is describing the war in Kyushu and the entanglement between the male and female protagonists. Because the protagonist never expresses his intentions and obstacles, the author abuses back and forth, interspersed with a number of supporting character stories. Speaking of obstacles between the two, Zitan has to be mentioned. The impact of Zitan lasted for a long time, and at first I guessed that Zitan was a very important person, but I didn't guess that it was the result of such a bloody dog. I feel that when Zitan's identity is revealed, the author seems to be deliberately removing all obstacles, and the previous entanglements will be resolved in a single conversation. This certainly makes readers who read JQ very happy.,After all, I was served meat dishes soon after.,But I'm disappointed that I've been watching the hero and heroine entangled.。 Although it doesn't need to be a complicated plot, I personally feel that this kind of treatment is not only cliché, but also a little too urgent. And there doesn't seem to be any hint in front of me, I just know that Zitan is very important, and the bloodline plot suddenly exists, as abrupt as Ji Zixuan is their family. I don't know if the author did it on purpose or on a whim. Personally, I think that this plot is understandable, or a lot of hints can dilute the abrupt feeling.

As for other abuses, I personally think that they are not as good as between the supporting characters. Because they are the protagonists, the author tries to describe the things between them in detail, and many things are not as profound as a fairy and demon love. When writing this paragraph, the author didn't write much, the ending between them came quickly, but it left a little room for reverie, and the word "different way" alone was deeply helpless, and the drug, imprint, and peer between the protagonists seemed to be a little too focused, but it made the plot very monotonous, and then the mystery of Zitan was revealed, and the general process plus the muffled ending was matched.

And then there's Momo and the demons. What I like more is Ji Zixuan and Momo, in fact, the stories between them are just as common, but their respective personalities add a lot of color. I have to mention that when I saw the back, the only feeling I had was that the hero and heroine were very monotonous. Yan Ruoyi seems to be attached to this relationship, except for being too stupid in love, there are not many descriptions of other characteristics, and it is not as eye-catching as Mo Mo, who is nervous and has little energy. And the male protagonist Cangxiao, domineering and arrogant, the point is the same infatuation, and he has always been attached to this relationship, even the demon is a derivative, a branch, anyway, it is ultimately attributed to the emotional line. I think that it doesn't have to be just for a woman, it can have other influences, such as ambition, such as family affection. Of course, if the author focuses on romance, this paragraph is my nonsense. As for the smoke pool,The type is too ordinary.,Cannon fodder once I have a hunch that there will be a second time.,Ignore it directly.,Personally, I think it's a pity that it's pure and pure.,In fact, it's just a tool to help the heroine and create contradictions.。

Later, I couldn't control the demonic energy.,The heroine went to save me and made me completely defeated.,This kind of plot is too common.,I can automatically make up for the development of the brain when I see the word "into the devil.,When it really appears and becomes the main plot.,I can't help but be irritable.。 I beg your pardon, I only see this.

About the plot of personal feeling is like this.,The author actually writes very delicately.,Cleverly combine common plots.,Put JQ and put fights all fine.,Such a huge background makes the simplicity of the plot more obvious.,There should be a place where you can stretch and excavate.。

The above belongs to the feeling after reading, if there is something wrong with the orange here, I apologize here, and I wish the author to write better and better. (1146 words)

I'm sorry that the agreed long review came late. It was already written, but later I overturned the long review I wrote.

I'm a sane person by and large. Writing a long review always starts with the structure of the story and the world view, and then comments on the arrangement of the plot, and ends with the character.

After writing a long review in a free way, I looked at it and felt that I was in a magic barrier. Maybe these plots and characters are very important to an article, but they are not the most important.

An article that makes people feel something, no matter how bad the characters are and how bad the plot is, it is a success. What's more, success must be brilliant in terms of plot and character design.

After reading this soul dream, I thought that maybe it was time to write a long emotional review.

Actually, I don't particularly like to read abusive texts, it's too tear-jerking. After reading the preface of the soul dream a few times, I was teary-eyed.

At the beginning, I wanted to say that the preface heroine was a little weak, unlike the character she showed in her essay.

But I reversed my long comments. How about weakness? I have to admit that we are all sick when we are in love.

Love is a miracle, it always intrudes into our lives with a reckless and irrational attitude, it is unpredictable, beyond consciousness, and has nothing to do with reason.

No matter how much the heroine's previous personality was with the characteristics of modern people's autonomy and strength. The heroine's heart is extremely confused, and she takes the trouble to ask, trying to figure out her position in the male protagonist's mind.

This act of constantly asking the male protagonist to prove his love to the female protagonist proves the female protagonist's love for the male protagonist in itself.

I don't think anyone will question that, because once upon a time or in the future, there will always be someone who can make us confused, distracted, and leave everything behind, just to let him prove his love for us.

This kind of feeling is very substitutional. Maybe yesterday, maybe today, maybe in the future, we will also have this kind of love, resentment, and humble struggle.

I also wanted to say that the male protagonist's sullenness really doesn't look like a vixen.。 Fortunately, I refuted this remark.

Whether it's a fox spirit or a pipa spirit, in this soul dream, he's just a man. A man with very low emotional intelligence.

Many plots are two in the hearts of those of us who are discerning. Why not? Why not fight? If he says I like you, Yan Ruoyi.

Isn't there not so much bumpy and tragic stuff afterwards? But he is a man with a low EQ, just like the various EQ low men we see in reality, toddler and clumsy in love.

It is precisely this clumsiness that involves the distress of those of us who read books. In the preface, I feel sorry for the love that the heroine can't ask for, and in the text, I feel sorry for the love that the male protagonist can't say.

Maybe be more honest, and happiness will come between the two of them. But as, because of their insincerity, the storyline is too ups and downs and involves people's hearts.

In this article, the love of many people is interspersed. Sometimes it's just a sentence, but it's also emotional.

It seems that the author has written many kinds of undesirable love in reality into this article. Ah, I really want to sigh that this is the story of a group of bitter rape flowers.

Haha, that's a joke. Although there are few emotional scenes in others, the author's writing skills are very sufficient, and he can still feel it and like it very much.

All in all, this is an essay that may not be very sophisticated in terms of writing, but it can be used to convey the reader's feelings.

I personally like it. I hope that the more the author writes, the more brilliant it becomes. (1075 words)

"A Few Soul Dreams" uses a four-chapter first-person dream as a preface, telling the story of a woman who travels to the alternate world of Kyushu, falls in love with a powerful nine-tailed fox demon, and finally jumps back to the modern dream because of sadness. The sense of first-person substitution is well used here, making full use of the advantages of the strong sense of substitution in the first person to bring people into the world of the heroine. That's a good and commendable one.

As far as I understand, the four chapters of the preface set up several clues throughout the whole text.

1. Main line: "I" is the emotional entanglement between the heroine Yan Ruoyi and Cangxiao;

2. Supporting role: What happened after Zitan came back to life and whether the Empty Mulberry Spirit Smoke Pool could be brought back to life;

3. Opposing camps: The appearance of the man in black led to another opposing camp.

In the preface of the four chapters, the clues are all foreshadowed, and the flowers are praised. However, it should be noted that when narrating in the first person, due to the limitation of the visual angle, it is inevitable that the explanation of events will be superficial, not deep enough, and it is easy to fall into a situation of self-talk. This is especially evident in chapters 1 and 2, where too many psychological descriptions and memories are piled up.

For the preface, in addition to sprinkling flowers, I want to mention a small bug that can be fixed, there is a paragraph in the first chapter: "When I first arrived in Guibao Land, I couldn't because I was too stimulated to seek death, and finally I was forced to go to Liangshan like a hundred and eight generals in the Water Margin." "Precious land should be an honorific title for the area where the other person is located when talking to people, and should not be used as a first-person narration. It may be that I was entangled, and when I first read this, it made me react for a long time, and the words were a little less thoughtful, and the sentences were unreasonable. There are still some minor problems with the use of words in the text, such as the "deaf and deaf" that appears more than once, which according to the encyclopedia means: the sound is so loud that the deaf can also hear it. The parable uses words to awaken the confused and numb and sober them. Taken literally, this idiom would be inappropriate if it were to be used only to describe a loud voice.

Later, in the second volume, Jiulu chose to switch the name to the third person. With more than 1,000 words in half a chapter, the transformation of time and space is realized again, and the two years of modern times are summarized with a concise narrative, and two years after the heroine returns to modern times, she is pulled back to Kyushu again. After returning to Kyushu, it was already two hundred years later, and Jiulu made good use of what happened in the past two hundred years to create another small high tide, that is, why did Kyushu become as devastated as it is now? But he is also well aware of the truth that he can't fish for too long, revealing a small part of the mystery every other paragraph, and those characters who are supporting roles begin to appear one after another at this time. In the process of solving the mystery, he got closer to the truth little by little, and also let the feelings of the male and female protagonists thaw from the edge of ice a little bit. Jiulu has done a good job in terms of fishing people's appetite, and often a small event has not completely ended, and the next suspense is thrown. From Yan Ruoyi's eyes blackened when she returned to Kyushu again to Cangxiao's awakening for her after demonization, and then went to Yingliang alone to find the medicine to unseal the seal, Cangxiao turned into black clothes to follow, interspersed with the stories of Qiansu and Yunzhu, Momo and Ji Zixuan's little JQ, the plot arrangement is reasonable, ups and downs, and it is very attractive. Whenever I think there is no follow-up to the story, there are always surprises. As of the date of writing the review, the two of them arrived at Yan Ruoyi's dream to relive the past of Kongsang Mountain, which was just a few strokes in the preface, and looked forward to Jiulu bringing us the next surprise.

After the flowers are scattered, let's talk about a small problem: character setting. The male protagonist, as a powerful nine-tailed fox demon. To paraphrase a sentence in the big text: "Fox charm, natural things can't be erased", not to mention that the male protagonist is still the king of the fox clan, but this male protagonist is not charming at all in the current plot progress, and he is a sullen man who loves you in his heart, and he doesn't look like a fox demon at all.

The heroine appeared as a bitter infatuated woman at the beginning, but there are always amazing performances in the narrative that follows. Scolding "fucking", kicking people "critical", etc., has a big jump from the previous image of a bitter woman. In the subsequent text, it can be seen that the heroine of Jiulu should be a woman who dares to say and do, but the entanglement in the face of feelings is really inconsistent with the performance when getting along with people on weekdays, so people can't understand whether this heroine dares to love and hate. I still love you in my heart, and I am □ entangled.

Final summary: The text is a good article, a good story, a good plot, I hope Jiulu can be more careful in the use of words, come on!

Finally, PS: Jiulu's copywriting makes me want to cry, I have written three reviews before and after. After each review is written, come and see: the copywriting has changed, so the evaluation is changed. Let's see again: changed again, continue to change the evaluation. The spirit of striving for the best is commendable, at least at the moment, this version is better than the previous one, but is it really good to change the copywriting so frequently?

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Commented: "A Few Soul Dreams"

I saw you say that Mu has a long comment, so Leng Jian and I came over to write a long comment for you, who knows, there is obviously a long comment, thousands of words are not called long reviews, girl, you still have to tens of thousands of words? But since I'm here, I'm definitely not going to make soy sauce.

The cover is very sensitive, the font is like splashing ink, with the vast smoky peaks, and there is a realm like a fairy and a demon. I was listening to □ music when I watched this, and it was an interlude of "The Desire of the Golden Branch", the one where the female voice sang and the flute music intertwined, which happened to be your background music.

Miss Jiulu, your psychological description is very outstanding, even if the name Cangxiao is repeated five or six times, you still have feelings. In the process of writing the essay in a decent way, some jokes are added just right, which makes people not have much psychological burden. What, I used to like to listen to the song "Let Go", hehe, seeing you write this, I think we still have a little bit of fate, maybe we passed by several times in our last life. 'Lori', 'Pit Dad', 'Character Explosion' These new words appear in it.,It's also a highlight of the laughter.,Anyway, I can't learn it... That, I like the two names of Qiansu Yunzhu, another woman who appeared in their quarrel, has a vigorous personality, and her temperament is amazing, and I like this description very much.

Every relationship in the seems to be ruthless, but in fact, it always turns around when people sigh regretfully, as if a woman rejected a man's show of love, but when she left, she looked back and smiled, which warmed people's hearts. It's like leaving one by one, and the sky is sad. I think Cang Xiao should have been a man with a cold appearance and a thin heart, and when he met the person he cared about, he didn't want to be understood by the other party, so he desperately pretended not to care, which made people angry and felt sorry for him at the same time.

Actually, when I saw Zili, I guessed that he was Zitan's younger brother or elder brother or senior brother, but I didn't expect you to say later: Zili is the sky.

Wow, I've finished reading it, and it's still attractive, especially when people calm down and watch it carefully, I really think it's pretty good. Whether it is Yiyi or Cangxiao, whether it is Qiansu or Yuehuang, whether it is Momo or Ji Zixuan, everyone describes it vividly.

However, there are some typos, and I have found several, this is one.

Second, the plot is not tight enough, and the people who wear it are slightly dizzy. There is also a character who has not set a good position, a person with a black belly can be ruthless, or he can be funny at the same time as cold, but pay attention, his funny must be different from ordinary people, no matter how funny he is, he must have a black belly, otherwise he will be a person who has changed alive.

Besides, the characters are slowly increasing, and there are a lot of them coming out at once, which makes me remember how hard it is!

Finally, the complex is not clear enough, which has something to do with the fact that the complex is not tight. Ding Ling's black-clothed man obviously existed, but after Yuehuang appeared, this person disappeared out of thin air. It's like a story about a little squirrel looking for food, but it was written that on the way to find food, he met a little pig, and the little pig was running away from the hunter, and the hunter chased after him and was caught in the foot, and then he was rescued by the villagers, and then, the hunter's foot injury recovered. You see, this is indeed a complete story, but every time a new thing appears, you look at the new thing, but I don't know, what I really want to see is the mysterious man! Here in the nine-headed monster, you should be the same as before, explain it, and only need to spend one sentence: After a few people have calmed down, Yan Ruoyi found that there was no trace of the mysterious person at the scene!

But I know that this mysterious silver-haired man will appear later, and I know that the Nine Heron girls will keep losing my appetite like this a few times before revealing who this Ding Ling is who this person is, I guess it's an immortal cultivator, right? Could it be Ji Zixuan's people? Well, it's just a guess.

In short, this is a very beautiful article, come on, Jiulu!

【Invincible Pumping Review Shop】Cold Sword Review

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The demon text is scarce.,I went to BS and received a few articles under 10.,When I poked it in, I clicked on the first chapter as always.,Uh...... The preface at the beginning is that Yan Ruoyi thinks that wishful love, and despair of the sky, and the existence of another woman, Zitan, who is just lying there quietly, makes the reader indignant.

To tell the truth, the demon is very happy to see in the abuse! I even really shed tears, that sentence, the sky! I wish you a fucking happy birthday and shouted so much that people's hearts were sour, the sentence I don't want you anymore was so resolute, but on that cold jade peak, I also wanted him to look back, didn't he? Otherwise, how could she be completely desperate, the moment she slapped his hand away, the demon almost applauded, good! Just do it, but he will regret it!

Immediately after that, the heroine returned to modern times, like a dream, a dream that I can't forget.

Soon the heroine is back again, embarrassed, this is a crossing in the crossing!

Anyway, the demon began to be wordy again, I thought this was a small abuse of the heroine at the beginning, a big abuse of the male protagonist in the process, and the text of the ending of HE, but I don't know why, after seeing the heroine return to Kyushu, I actually felt that I had been very worried, and the demon had to say, this Zitan is a female partner, why didn't she have a little ambiguity with Cangxiao? Why, why, why do you make our heroines so sad, but she is so innocent!

The demon really thought that Cangxiao and Zitan had something to do with the past, but obviously, their relationship was not what they imagined, so why was Cangxiao so ambiguous, and he really wanted to shoot them to death together! In this way, there is an illusion.,Big.,It seems that the heroine's suffering is self-inflicted! She's looking for abuse by herself!

Also, the demon actually prefers to have amnesia after coming back, so you just make me nervous, and I don't remember you...... Hehe, don't be afraid of others saying that this is like Sansheng, Sansheng has also been said by others, in fact, this kind of plot is very common, who calls readers like it, but obviously you put Ah Yan back, Cangxiao is nervous, the heroine is not easy to master, if she is indifferent to him, it is to say that this love is inexplicable, if she still remembers the previous relationship, then how does the story develop, can it be tortuous and moving, and it is not abusive, it is obviously difficult, so in other words, I think Cangxiao is the male protagonist, isn't he?

As the heroine said, she didn't expect that until now, at such a life-and-death juncture, all she could think of was his name. It was like a vine that was wound in her blood, piercing into her internal organs, and becoming a habit that she couldn't get rid of.

Feelings are not said to be able to let go, I personally think that the way to let go easily is to lose memory and lose all the memories about him, so that you can easily go all the way forward.

This article is now less than 10 words.,JJ's,The general ones are 25 words.,To 40 words.,The demon is looking forward to how to develop next.,But there's one point.,Don't be entangled.,Now it's popular and cheerful.,It's good to be more relaxed at worst.。

Seeing the end, the heroine is going to leave again, she dares to think big, and the demon admires it very much!

After reading this article, I praised it again and again, and I always wanted to make a comment for the big one, but it turned out to be a big one, and I'm sorry that the demon was late, because there were too many articles in my favorites, embarrassment, because I forgot the name, so I had to finish the list, and after opening a new article, I looked at them one by one, and I found them one by one! Don't come over to rub it over?

(1062 words)

After parting, memories meet

At the beginning of the article, the tone of the bitter love drama is the same. To be honest, I almost felt the urge to fork it off. I feel that the author's description is general, and the abuse is not very in-depth. The play is very bitter, and I always feel that I haven't been abused to the real place where I should be abused, but ......

But! Thank you for not letting me click the little red cross. The second chapter is obviously much more fascinating.,Actually, I think the author might as well change the first chapter.,Remove some modifiers that have too many functions.,Describe a little more detail.,,Let's not talk about this.,From the second chapter onwards,,The details are also a little more complete.,I think the author's character setting is quite good.,Especially Zitan.,And the setting of the two characters of the smoke pool makes me quite interested.。 Is this a feeling of "you have one outside, don't be afraid, I also have one outside"...... Of course, I think it's okay to make him jealous if you want to abuse Nanzhu, but it's better not to go too far, otherwise you'll be bloody

As for Zitan,When I read the preface, I really thought she had an ulterior JQ with the male owner.,But,Seeing it now.,I'm completely relieved.,There's no spark at all in the communication between her and the male owner.。 Zitan's personality is a little embarrassing, is she black-bellied? Is it really black-bellied?

I think she's black-bellied!

Speaking of personality, one of my favorite characters in the article is the witch Momo, domineering enough, cute enough, especially at that time, tsk, he is really a model for my generation! Looking at the author's writing ideas, do you want to arrange Momo and Ji Zixuan in a bunch? I don't think this smiling tiger Ji Zixuan is worthy of Momo, and after doing it with her, he still thinks about calculating...... Simply the author waved his pen and let Momo and Fuchi be together. The villain has the least resistance to the gentle man, and what he is most afraid of in his life is the injured expression of the gentle man. The author asked the bold Momo to give the smoke pool a cure.

cough,Back to the topic,Judging from the current text,The author's plot is still in the foreshadowing stage.,The article hasn't been developed very much.,For example, the relationship between this Zitan and the male owner.,The relationship between the male owner and the female owner.,The relationship between the female owner and the smoke pool.,And the past two hundred years ago.,How the male owner got into the devil, etc., etc., etc., have not been explained clearly.,And in terms of the number of supporting characters arranged in the article,I think it's a huge story structure.。 From the mysterious old man who sent the heroine back to this era at the beginning, to Jiuyan, Wu Luo, and the infant Liang master mentioned above, and the mysterious masked man (I really don't think he is the male protagonist, the author is actually inducing us...... There are also Yunzhu of the Ordinary Palace, Tilting Moon, Taifeng, yes, and one of the four generals has not yet been explained. In short, there are so many supporting roles, and the roles of each supporting role are arranged, and the relationship is interspersed...... The author must take the trouble to think about it. After all, as a reader, you don't want to see a good beginning followed by a bad ending......

Anyway, so far, I'm still very satisfied with the villain. It's just a little bit that the next few chapters are a bit procrastinating, and it can be seen that the author is also trying his best to dare to move the plot forward, but it is precisely because of this rush to dare the plot that it makes the reader feel like a running account. I hope the author will think carefully about this.

There is nothing else to say, so a long review is dedicated to my dear great.

May you insist on changing every day, two more a day, preferably three times a day as if you started! I wish you a speedy day!!

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So I finished reading it. We saw the shadow of the girl in front of the text in BS.,But the text is still very good.,Except for some similar details.,Of course, the plot has nothing to say about the original creator's girl's writing skills.,But it's a bit of a god's perspective.,This may need to be modified.。

For example, when the heroine's psychological activities suddenly appear, you can add one appropriately

"If you think so," etc., to avoid the appearance of God's perspective. The storyline is still too big to unfold, but it is attractive enough to continue watching, and the suspense is spread out enough, revolving around what has happened in the past two hundred years and what will happen next, as well as the relationship between Zitan and the male protagonist, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, etc., enough for the girl to create a complete and moving plot.

However, as the first article, in JJ, cold is inevitable, not to mention praised

"There is no coldest, only colder" Xianxia (...... Girl, please be prepared to see it, but as far as the article is concerned, I believe that as long as you click on it in the future, there will be more and more people who like it Finally, girl, please come on, contribute a collection, we will chase it down, I hope you can also finish writing it (354 words)