When the full text is being revised

Because I started to write this novel with the mentality of trying, I didn't have time to think carefully and correct my attitude before publishing it, but I looked back at what I wrote more than a month ago, and there were loopholes, shortcomings, and even short sentences that I didn't understand after reading it, and I couldn't tolerate it even if I was entertaining myself.

It must be thoroughly revised.,Fortunately, there is a chapter modification function.,Otherwise I'm going to cry to death.,Now I've revised part of the content and typos of the first ten chapters.,While the chapters aren't a lot, the full text must be modified!

Please understand the shortcomings of a newcomer who has read this novel, thank you for your support!