About the plot
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Say a little bit about the plot.
First of all, it's only 800,000 words, and I want to be in a hurry to see the finale? Can't do it. Besides, he now has a book of heaven, although the restrictions are large, but it does not prevent him from being invincible.
The protagonist has ten apprentices, and they have to be captured one by one, they are not stupid, they need some means. Cultivation should also increase step by step, even stronger than at the peak.
Second, right now, the worldview is not in motion at all.
Some readers are anxious and want to ascend to the sky in one step, 800,000 words, hurry up and grasp them all, hurry up the ending, it is better to write the word "end" directly more comfortable. The protagonist is directly invincible in the universe, Zhu Honggong, Zhaoyue, Duanmusheng, what else do you want them to do, don't you drag your feet? My level is limited, but I don't believe that the high-level "platinum authors" dare to write such a plot.
In addition, I think the plot should be coherent.
You think that there are small theaters, you jump to the bottom, but in fact there is no foreshadowing above, you look directly at the lower one, you will feel very bored, so you feel water, so the vicious circle, because you directly skip the foreshadowing...... It's just like the 2 chapters that were updated today.,It's not worrying that Shangrong is stepping on the white bones.,How can he cut the lotus seat and ascend to the nine leaves?Directly swing the knife at the Qingyu Altar?Isn't that mentally retarded?Isn't it a normal person to swing a knife to cut himself?Isn't it?Isn't it?After chopping?Seriously injured for no reason to be promoted to the nine leaves?Need something...... So if you haven't read these two chapters, you'll see it directly later.,Wow Second Senior Brother Jiuye...... And then it's cool.,Scolding:That's it?Stupid than the author.,Nine leaves are so simple?
When the second senior brother returned, the reading was very high (writing Shuntianyuan was low, but if there was no Shuntianyuan, the second senior brother had already thought about whether it was good to hang up in the cave), and now I am writing Dawu, and there are many people who don't want to read it, which leads to complaining and abandoning the book, but this ups and downs will definitely have a wave in the future, and they will scold me when writing about the senior brother...... Because they ignore this part of the foreshadowing......
Uncomfortable shiitake mushrooms.
I hope to be more patient, I remember that I used to chase books every day, it has become a habit, and there is something every day that looks good, isn't it?
Finally, an important point, it's best if piracy can support the genuine version, after all, there is no data, there is really no motivation to write it, but it is not forced. Authenticity is the most important thing to support the author to go on. It's only a few cents a day at most, and it's enough to read my books and smoke a cigarette a month, but this is the job I rely on for survival!
It's more than 4 updates every day.,Sometimes it's really 3 more.。 It's not as fast as the big guy, but it's stable and updated. The state of the past two days is poor.,So it's inevitable that the mood is a little affected.,It's obviously not as interesting as before when writing characters (I just want to pull the rhythm and push quickly.,Write what the reader wants to see.,Resulting in the original interesting characters immediately face-painted),If you feel that this chapter testimonials don't look pleasing to the eye.,Just think of this author as a fart.。 I'm sorry.
I also hope that all brothers and sisters will support you a lot, thank you.
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