Answering the comment of the book friend 'The Reed Who Loves to Think'
After receiving a book review of the reed that loves to think, let's make a small interpretation, and by the way, I will share this book with you.
Thinking Reeds:
If it is not excessively funny, the strategy is ingenious, and the enemy is not treated as a pig, it is a qualified novel, and if the characters are vivid, the plot twists and turns, and the complexity of human nature, it is an excellent novel. Since this book takes the route of fighting wit, it must be so that bookworms can't find any major faults.
First of all, I would like to thank Lu Wei for his comments and suggestions, which shows that he has read and thought about them carefully, and his opinions and suggestions have many merits.
As for what Lu Wei said, I will give an answer, as for whether it is true or not, it is to be confirmed and pointed out by all scholars.
1. About being funny. Reed thinks this book is funny, but there are also book friends who think it's not funny, and I personally tend to be at an intermediate level.
Secondly, comedy is a style, but also my own character and language habits, I think every book should have its own style, and this style represents the author's own language value orientation;
Funny does not mean that the cruelty of the war is not enough, such as the death of the little flower girl, the death of the brothers of the fire team, and half of the right front army was killed in the tiger's mouth, and several main generals were seriously injured, etc.; I don't want to write too heavy.
Funny doesn't mean that the rigor is not enough, 140,000 words, you found a few typos (I will check it before uploading), have you found obvious logical loopholes or there are holes that are not filled in or are particularly unreasonable, if there is, I hope you will leave me a message.
2. On the question of strategy. The author is not self-explanatory, this book actually consumes my brain cells, and so far, this book shares more than 20 strategies and strategies:
Tired enemy, harassment, detour, interspersed, ambush, surprise attack, encirclement and reinforcement, encirclement of Wei to save Zhao, robbery while the fire is fired, anti-guest-oriented, Li Dai Taozhuang, Lianwu and Wei, inseparable, watching the fire from the other side, anti-plotting, hiding from the sky and crossing the sea, golden cicada shelling, borrowing a knife to kill, driving the tiger and devouring the wolf, fighting against the water, the name is in the dark, urgent and slow points, and a series of games.
We've all heard of these schemes, but it takes a lot of thought to fit them into the book.
As for the ingenuity of the strategy, I have done my best, and if there are any deficiencies, please correct them; Lou Typhoon humbly accepts.
3. On the question that the enemy is like a pig.
I think my settings for my opponents are actually very high, such as Ling Kun, Zhou Wanqing, Xue Zhongyi and others, as long as you carefully read their analysis of the battle situation, you can actually see that these people have brains. I won't go into detail here; But maybe I didn't describe it deeply, so that it caused this misunderstanding (thanks to Reed for bringing it up)
4. Regarding the plot twists, I think this point is very good.
I focused on analysis in the description of the battle, and the process was a little rough, so that the twists and turns of the war were not obvious; But the growth of the protagonist and the story are twists and turns.
5. About the character of the character.
Personally, I think there is a description, but it may not be deep enough.
Chen Wenzhou's wisdom, stability, and narcissism, Li Siye's bravery, righteousness, and stability, Guo Chen's coldness, beauty, and firmness, Ling Kun's prudence, Gao Xiuyan's brutality, Guo Ziyi's generosity, kindness, Hao Tingyu's righteousness, and roughness, Fang Sizhe's cunning, ruthlessness, jealousy, etc.
The embodiment of the complexity of the characters is a long and tortuous process, which requires the plot as a foil, and the author will describe it accordingly in the later stage, at present, this article is still in the beginning stage, basically a military war description, relatively single, so there is not enough plot to portray the characters;
I have been writing for nearly a month, and I myself have been thinking about it a lot, and we are also communicating with book friends in the group. If there is something unsatisfactory, I will do my best to make it better.
Finally, I would like to thank my book friends who have supported me all the way, making me more confident to grow. (Special thanks:There's a set.、Ouchi Guard Commander、littlepiggy、Zeed、mikegu1018、160522231406050、Earth Samurai、Wounded Champion、Morning and Night、Qishan Passerby)
The book is not exhaustive, slightly outdated, and the pen is galloping, and it is served here
Respectfully to Lou Typhoon!