wrote more than 200,000 words, and there have been some ups and downs in my emotions.

As the saying goes: "A mother doesn't think a baby is ugly", but in fact, I know what is the reason why I have written for so long but the results are dismal.

Since it is a storytelling, it must have a storyline to support it, but it has been comparing with itself, compared with other similar novels, it is not cool at all, it does not pretend to be a ** slap in the face, it does not pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, and it does not have the spirit of Wang Ba to cheer up the heroes.

The outline was designed without taking too many details into account, but in the process of writing, I found that I would always struggle with a question: "An ordinary person can travel back and forth through time and space, what will he do?" ”

There are countless answers that vary from person to person.

And I am trapped in the word "reasonable" and can't extricate myself, under this constraint, the protagonist is destined to be lonely, and his attitude towards the world is also passive, so naturally there will be no wonderful storyline - even if the story happens, it is also passive stress, and it has little to do with the protagonist's character and subjective initiative.

Another example is the paleness of the supporting characters. Entangled in the background of "ancient people", Zhao Di can only be a wild girl in her kind, and she transforms into a good girl in front of Zhao Xiang.

Zhaoyan was supposed to be tamed by the protagonist with a wild body, but I drew a circle for her, that is, the master, so she was also bound, and the protagonist was also trapped.

There are many characters in one stroke, if you look carefully, there are actually as many as 40 characters who appear, but they are always compressing the scenes for the development of the "reasonable" plot, and they have become characters without any characteristics.

Chen Chun, the villain in the early stage, can't run to Xiaozhishan every day for the sake of a reasonable plot, because a show talent with a head and face in the local area can't be real with an outsider like the protagonist every day, and it's interesting enough to do some small actions and small conspiracies behind the scenes - so his role in the early stage is almost gone.

What about the Black Bull? His father's hidden identity makes the protagonist dare not trust too much, and if he is guarded by the protagonist, it is impossible to become a brother in distress with the protagonist, so he also becomes a foil.

Other characters are often limited by such things as "vision" and have no outstanding place - what is the vision of the scholars of the Song Dynasty? Anyway, I think it is difficult for Zhao Xiang to make them look at Zhao Xiang's goods in the early stage, so there is an ending where the protagonist takes the machinery that can obviously promote production but is directly ignored. As a result, the character of Gan Zhe will no longer appear in contact with Zhao Xiang in a "taster" style, so far it has directly become a trick.

It is my personal understanding that people's growth background often determines people's personalities, and people's experiences affect people's judgments, and it is precisely because of this that many storylines that could have been developed have been simplified.

The tragedy is that this is just an online article! And I'm not a writer, not even a writer! Originally, I wanted to tell you a story so that everyone would want to read it, and by the way, help everyone and pass the time for themselves......

These are the diseases of this article, and they must be cured.

Every day before going to bed, I lie in bed and read the text I send on my mobile phone, always thinking that I can add something here, there can make the conversation longer, and I can say it more clearly, but when my hand touches the keyboard, I begin to struggle with the problem of "reasonableness" again, so day after day, the characters have their own judgments and choices in the plot, and completely escape my control - this is also a disease, and it must be treated.

I CAN ONLY SAY THAT MY WRITING IS TOO TENDER, AND MY PEN POWER IS NOT ENOUGH TO CONTROL ALL THE PEOPLE, THINGS, AND THINGS THAT APPEAR IN THE STORY, BUT I CAN ADJUST IT LATER, HEHE.

I have made so many excuses for the unremarkable words I wrote, and all of you book friends are definitely true love when you see this, otherwise you are as boring as me, haha.

In the end, because of lack of sleep, I decided to go to bed, and if there is a message I want to say, I will read every one...... As for some of the ones that didn't reply, such as @Vortex Cow who was very pertinent every time he left a message but got to the point, it's really because I'm ashamed...... At the same time, thank you for silently voting for the recommendation, and when you swipe the APP and see that there are recommendation votes, you will be happy.