657 changed the script

Xu Fei's posture of not giving up until he reached his goal made Chen Beiming have a little headache, so he had to answer, okay, then I'll try.

However, he quickly added: "But I'm a slow person to help people write songs, I have to understand the characteristics of the other person, and then create a specific creation, but you know, it takes time." ”

"Brother Xiaoshan, I have time." Xu Fei said immediately.

Chen Beiming originally had a stomach full of things to say, mainly to discourage and kill Xu Fei's enthusiasm, but now looking at her like this-well, let's not talk about it.

He then withdrew his gaze and drove quietly.

After opening a paragraph, he said, "Where do you live, I'll send you back first." I'll contact you after I've written the song, what do you think? ”

If she comes to the door every day and waits, it is not a solution, so it is best to treat it cold, after a long time, maybe she will not have this enthusiasm.

"Then you can take me to North Song, and I'll get off there." Xu Fei was not polite at all.

"North Pine?" Chen Beiming was stunned. He's going to be there, too. But he didn't say anything, he just sent Xu Fei to his destination, then went around, parked the car, and then went to where he was going.

"I'm back." Chen Beiming pushed open the door and walked in, but the smile froze on his face, and Xu Fei was sitting inside muttering to Zhang Yu.

Seeing Chen Beiming, she was stunned: "Brother Xiaoshan! You're here too? I knew we were coming in together! ”

Chen Beiming was a little embarrassed for a while, so he had to sit down quickly, change the topic, and said, "Zhang Yu, why hasn't your friend come yet?" ”

Zhang Yu has a best friend, who is a director, and he is ambitious to make a movie, but unfortunately the box office is a mess, so Tuo Zhangyu found Chen Beiming and wanted to ask Chen Beiming to help her analyze and analyze it, see where the reason is, and then revise the script, package it into a new home and reshoot it.

But until now, no one has come.

Zhang Yu heard this, and hurriedly said: "She has already come, seeing that you are not there, and there is a friend of hers next to her, she will go over there to say hello first, and I will call her." ”

She took out her phone to call the director, and a moment later, a skinny thirty-year-old woman trotted in.

"Mr. Xiaoshan, I'm sorry, I'm really embarrassed, I asked you to wait for me!" The other party hurriedly apologized.

"It's fine." Chen Beiming smiled, and then said, "What about your script, did you bring it?" ”

"Bring it, Mr. Xiaoshan, give!" The other party hurriedly took out a script from his bag and handed it to Chen Beiming respectfully.

Chen Beiming didn't talk nonsense, picked up the script and read it, and after reading the script, he nodded: "This script is good!" ”

The director named Huang Ying said: "Yes, Mr. Xiaoshan, the script is good, and the actors are good, but in the end, the box office is yellow, so I'm in a hurry, Mr. Xiaoshan, you can say whatever you want, don't care about my face, what I want to hear most now is the truth, the truth, I also asked a lot of friends after the box office of the movie turned yellow, but they always take care of other things, so ...... Mr. Xiaoshan, you must help me. ”

Chen Beiming nodded: "I'll try my best." ”

Because he is Zhang Yu's good friend and best friend, he will help with this favor, but as for whether people listen to it or not, it is not his business.

After reading the script, he opened his laptop again to look at the DVD of the movie.

This is almost two hours - although the movie is not two hours, but some details seem to have been watched a few times, so it takes a bit of time.

After reading it, he said bluntly: "The script is a good script, but it's a pity that you made it bad, and your directing has a problem." ”

Huang Ying's face turned red, a little embarrassed, but he quickly corrected his attitude: "Teacher Xiaoshan, I know that this must be my problem, so if I do something wrong, you just say it, don't worry, I will accept it with an open mind." ”

Chen Beiming nodded: "First, your positioning is not clear. ”

Yes?

Huang Ying's mouth opened wide.

"Your script is obviously a literary film, but you keep adding elements of commercial films in the process of filming, so in the end, literary films are not considered literary films, and commercial films are not considered commercial films."

"Teacher Xiaoshan, I ......," Huang Ying opened her mouth to speak.

Chen Beiming interrupted: "I'll just ask you a question, are the audience of commercial films and the audience of art films the same kind of people?" Or to put it another way, which director in the world today has made films that have not only been highly affirmed by literary audiences, but also achieved a very considerable box office? Tens of billions of dollars of the kind - is there one? ”

Huang Ying opened her mouth, and finally hung her head in frustration and stopped talking.

Chen Beiming continued to analyze sharply.

He really didn't save any face for the other party, and he saw blood in every word, and finally said that Huang Ying was about to cry.

At this time, Chen Beiming said: "Xiao Huang, in fact, your idea is right, you are a newcomer, you want to be famous, the best shortcut is to start with literary films, the cost of literary films should be smaller, the controllability should be higher, it is not difficult to find investment, and because you have just entered the industry, there are not too many things in terms and conditions, the thinking is very active, and there are very innovative ideas, it is actually really good to make literary films at this time, but you have to understand one thing, since you want to make literary films, then shoot well, don't add too many commercial elements, business is a beast, If you don't control it well, it will ruin your movie. ”

Huang Ying lowered her head in shame.

It wasn't until Huang Ying's last bit of luck was completely shattered that Chen Beiming said with a smile: "Xiao Huang, in fact, your lens language is used quite well, and your grasp of color is also very good, and you also have your own understanding, so if you are willing to make a good literary film, I can help you revise the script slightly, as long as you change a few places, it can become a new book!" ”

When Huang Ying heard this, she was overjoyed: "Really? Mr. Xiaoshan,What kind of book is it?,Can you tell me? ”

"The beautiful legend of Sicily." Chen Beiming: "As long as you change your script a few times, you can turn it into a new script, and I call this script "The Beautiful Legend of Sicily". ”

"The beautiful legend of Sicily?" Huang Ying was stunned: "It's also a military theme?" ”

"The Beautiful Legend of Sicily" is a film directed by Giuseppe Tornatore and starring Monica Bellucci, Guisseppe Surfaro and others.

The film tells the story of a 13-year-old boy Reinado who fell in love with a local boy much older than him during World War II. Marina, her husband went to the front, and her beauty attracted the envy and rejection of the local women.

The film caused a lot of sensation after its release, especially in China, and received a lot of praise.

Chen Beiming told the relevant details, plot, setting, and some other things of "The Beautiful Legend of Sicily" one by one, and before he finished speaking, Huang Ying exclaimed excitedly: "God, Mr. Xiaoshan, you are too powerful, you really just changed a few places, but the movie has completely changed, I dare to guarantee that this movie will definitely cause a sensation after its release!" ”

The people next to him were also dumbfounded: "This Chen Beiming is really amazing!" This ability to create scripts is simply amazing! ”

After a moment, Huang Ying said: "Teacher Xiaoshan, I want to make this movie, I really want to make it, can you shoot it for me?" I promise I'll shoot it well this time! ”

Zhang Yu also said: "Xiaoshan, what do you think I will play the heroine?" Is it appropriate? ”