Cheng Yanjin, who had experienced a hundred battles, was a little nervous at this time, and thought for a while before replying: "There is a bumper harvest of rice, and Your Majesty will hold a banquet to celebrate the whole country." ”

Wang Haoran thought for a while before saying: "Very good, the poem is to put it simply, Lu Guogong, try to reduce what you just said." ”

Cheng Yanjin muttered what he had just said again, and replied, "Rice...... Bumper harvest...... Celebrate the whole country? ”

"There are eight words here, at least to be reduced to five words, only less, not more, and if it is less, you can also think about what words to add to modify it."

"Harvest celebrations?" Cheng was not sure if such a reduction would be feasible.

"But you can, but the word Tongqing doesn't show the lively scene of the whole country celebrating together, and you can think about whether there is any other way to reduce it. Lu Guogong is a general who has experienced a hundred battles, and he should show a brave and decisive side when he reduces his words. Wang Haoran had already thought of the first sentence and guided Cheng Yanjin to revise it in that direction.

Cheng Yanjin fell into deep thought again, and replied for a long time: "Bumper harvest, National Day? ”

"National Day, that's a good word!" Wang Haoran praised, "Harvest National Day, now there are only four words left, and there is still one word missing, so just add another word at the back, which word does Lu Guogong think is good to add?" ”

Cheng Yanjin was a little energetic, and hurriedly said: "This is easy to do, just add a day word, harvest National Day, how about it?" ”

"Of course you can, but Your Majesty is saying that the subject is the scene in front of me, and if I add a Japanese character, I always think of the hot sun during the day."

"This is easy to do, then change it to Harvest National Day, it's always okay now, right?" Cheng Yanjin has figured out Wang Haoran's routine this time.

"It's so good that those literati like to add things like the wind and snow to the poems to make the poems look more elegant." Wang Haoran breathed a sigh of relief, but he could be regarded as leading Cheng Yanjin to the point, "Then the first sentence is the harvest National Day, so the second sentence should always write down the scene here, right?" So what did Lu Guogong see when he sat here? ”

"People are crowded." Cheng Yanjin simply made a long story short, saving minus and subtracting.

"......" Wang Haoran was speechless for a while, Cheng Yanjin was too handy at cutting corners, right? Forget it, anyway, the meaning of the first two sentences is not so important, people are crowded, people are crowded, "It's only three words, so how do you think you should add words?" ”

"Crowded...... This doesn't seem to be easy to add words later? Can you add it to the front? Cheng Yanjin asked.

"Of course you can, as long as you can make up five words, you can add anywhere."

"Crowded...... Then you should always explain where the crowds are, right? Suzaku Street is crowded? But there are too many words, why don't you take a four-character name for this Suzaku Street? If I only took a two-word name, I would be much easier to do now......" Cheng Yanjin muttered to himself.

The longer he stayed with Cheng Yanjin, the more Wang Haoran felt that Cheng Yanjin was a wonder, and the idea of constipation was to blame the small gravity of the earth!

"Lu Guogong can shrink Suzaku Street into two words like he just reduced the celebration of the whole country!" Wang Haoran proposed.

"Crowded? Isn't that right? But no one calls Suzaku Street that! Cheng Yanjin hesitated.

"There's nothing bad about it, it's like the titles of various court officials, if they are all read out, wouldn't it be very troublesome? Everything has a first time, not to mention that Lu Guogong, as the prince of the country, referred to Suzaku Street as Bird Street, who would disagree? That's the privilege of celebrities! So be it for the first two sentences, now for the last two sentences. The last two sentences are quite important, and the most commonly used point in writing scenes is to touch the scene. Lu Guogong has been riding all his life, and now he sees the vision in front of him, how do you feel? It's a matter of thinking about it, preferably something that resonates with other people. The so-called finishing touch, the level of this poem, depends on how well the last two sentences are made. ”

Cheng Yanjin suddenly became serious, as if he was facing a great enemy.

"Haha...... Lu Guogong doesn't need to be like this, Lu Guogong, you have experienced a hundred battles, and now you see the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty, you must have a lot of feelings in your heart, just relax and feel it, you can find the natural feeling, and this feeling must be the most sincere and resonant feeling of others. ”

Cheng Yanjin listened to Wang Haoran's words, took a deep breath, relaxed his mood, and said after a long time: "Now that I can see the carefree life of Datang, I think it is worth it for us soldiers to fight for many years!" ”

"Lu Guogong is righteous!" Wang Haoran bowed to Cheng Biting Jin, although Cheng Biting Jin's words did not have heroic rhetoric, but the simple words could move people's hearts more, and Wang Haoran could feel a fluctuation in his heart.

"Since Lu Guogong just said two sentences, it can just be used as the last two sentences of the poem, and Lu Guogong will try to shorten it sentence by sentence."

"What did the old man just say?" Cheng Yanjin was a little touched just now, and when he returned to the matter of composing poetry, he suddenly forgot what he had just said, but he quickly remembered, "Oh...... By the way, it is to see that the people are carefree, and the soldiers have been fighting for many years. ”

"Seeing that the people are carefree...... The people are carefree...... One more word...... The people are carefree...... Yes, yes, Haoran, what do you think of the third sentence being changed to the people worry-free? Cheng Yanjin is already a little proficient in Wang Haoran's routines.

"Yes. So how can the last sentence be shortened? ”

Cheng Yanjin became excited, and immediately had his own poems!

"Soldiers have been fighting for many years...... Soldier Battle Value! Haoran, what is the value of the soldiers? Cheng Yanjin asked urgently.

"But you can, but the word conquest can't reflect the situation of the soldiers who have been fighting for many years, so let's look at it in another word."

"Then change it to a hundred battle points." Just now, Wang Haoran praised Cheng Biting Jin for being through a hundred battles, Cheng Biting Jin was very useful, and he remembered it clearly, so as soon as Wang Haoran said that he had changed the battle, he thought of the word Hundred Battles.

"That's a good word."

"Hey...... The old man's poem is out. On the eve of the National Day, Bird Street is crowded; The people are worry-free, and the soldiers are worth a hundred battles. After Cheng Biting Jin finished reading, he frowned and said, "Haoran, why does the old man always feel that this poem is a little awkward to read?" ”

That's true, but it's easy to read, as long as the pronunciation of the last word in the second and fourth sentences is similar, it won't be awkward to read. The last two sentences are the finishing touches, if it is changed, it involves a lot, then change the second sentence. ”

"Is that easy? The old man doesn't know many words, where can I find any words with similar pronunciations? ”