Words written at the end of the volume: I, Nanming, and Yongli four years
Last night, when I wrote the seven words "Volume 1, Traverser, End", the author's heart was relieved.
Since I decided to write a novel in the summer of 2014, I have spent a year researching materials, choosing the time and place to appear, conceiving the outline, and designing the plot.
For more than a year, through consulting materials, the author has also gained a lot of understanding of the knowledge of military history that was only half-understood before, and finally chose the most difficult hell mode as a copy of the wilderness among three different story outlines, and did not dare to write until the plot of the first volume was fully designed.
It's just that after I started writing, problems also followed.
First of all, it's the speed of code words, the author once wrote a novel in 06 years, 50,000 words directly eunuch, because when the author wrote there, he suddenly found that he didn't know what he wrote, improvised writing, no outline, no main line, the plot of the story was written and forgotten, and then I haven't touched the pen in these years, at most I write some long or short book reviews for the novels I like, that's all.
Now it seems that the author is very fortunate to have that part of my life, not only to learn from the failures, but also to like to go to forums or chat in the writers' group at that time. At that time, the high-rise god who was writing "Zombie Doctor" once told the author that the speed of writing online code words is the most important, and it is not terrible to hit the street, 10,000 words a day, write for a year, and many feelings will come out, and the mistakes made during this period will also be revealed, so as to be avoided in the later writing.
Since the beginning of writing, the author has set tasks for himself every day, starting with 1,000 words a day, 15,000, 2,000, 2,500...... And so on, until now the task has reached the 7,500-word task line in the case of a day without anything, although it has never been completed, but the speed is also much faster than at the beginning of the writing, at least at the beginning of the day to go to the new unit to complete the pre-job training, and then take an hour or two to go home can barely guarantee the update, well, barely guarantee the update (the late one should also be updated).
It's just that, since I started writing in August, the author's social activities are getting less and less, and the degree of home is getting higher and higher, and the gathering of friends can be pushed, and if you can't push it, you can go late and leave early, and for many years you finally have a heart-warming sister paper and no time to further understand the pursuit, and the things that the family urges the object to marry are all ignored, and even the alcohol is basically quit (want to quit drinking, write online articles, OY).
Even so, the author is still not satisfied with the words written, at least not far from expectations. It was the first time to write such a long novel, and many things were also written while learning, and the first volume was written in 400,000 words, and the author once doubted it, after all, until now the grades have been very poor.
However, since the author has said that as long as there is one reader, the author will finish writing this story, and he will definitely finish it. People don't stand without faith, although the author is often late for meetings, but this matter can still be stable.
The speed can barely keep up with the update.,The second problem also arises.,That is, the roughness of the choice of words and sentences.,The author decided to shamelessly find a reason for himself.,That is, writing such a long novel for the first time,It's hard to avoid it for a newcomer.,Especially for people like the author who haven't been engaged in writing work and are not from a professional background.,Even more so.。
I think this reason can be praised, but is it going to go on like this? No way!
The author's temperament belongs to the kind of person who either doesn't do it, and makes up his mind to do his best, and it is precisely because of this that the author has been regarded as an alien by his colleagues in the workplace for many years.
However, it is the author's dream to write historical fiction, or for a Gemini writer with a split personality, historical fiction is the inevitable dream of writing and history, two of his favorite things.
For a whole day,The author re-read the text of the first volume.,Contradictions.、There are places where the words are not considered.,The time for revision is not allowed for the time being.,The second volume began to try to avoid it.,Strive to write as much as possible (there should be a cute expression here.)。
Finally, there is the rhythm, and when the author is studying on the Internet for those online writing guides, this word appears a lot. Rhythm, the author can feel when to write something, but if there is a contradiction with the story or purpose of writing, the author still chooses the latter, just like the battle of Siming Lake, the author's purpose in the first volume of writing is to read the history of the Nanming that the author saw in front of the eyes of the monarchs, not for the sake of coolness.
It's painful to do this, especially in the case of bad grades, at first the author told himself that the historical essay with high rationality should be slow to heat, and then the author told himself that he would pounce on it, just to accumulate experience, and finally, the author told himself that it was a big deal to be an alien again, it was no big deal.
Fortunately, after the battle of Siming Lake was written, readers were able to understand the author's intentions, and there was no loss of collection or spraying, and it seems that there are still a lot of aliens.
Thank you very much for your understanding, thank you.
Finally, let's talk about the plot.
The first volume is 400,000 words long, and the reason why it is named the traverser is actually more of a series of transformation processes of the protagonist Chen Wen's personality in the context of the Southern Ming Dynasty.
From the initial attempt to go to Fujian to seek refuge under the wing of Zheng Chenggong, to the choice to stay in Zhejiang under the influence of the ancients around him to rewrite the history of Siming Mountain's resistance to the Qing Dynasty, the protagonist has gradually become strong from relative weakness.
It's just that this is only part of the story. The author believes that experience affects character, and character determines fate. So, the key is, what kind of era is the era in which the protagonist lives, Nanming?
Some of the official statements are ethnic contradictions and the like. The author reads through the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty, and his eyes are full of the word infighting, and the countless counteroffensive and defensive battles of the Ming army have been lost to pig-like teammates.
The brutality of the Manchus, the strength of the fighting power of the Eight Banners Army and the Green Battalion, the stupidity of the civilian system of leading the troops, the bureaucrats fighting for the sake of the party, the mutual distrust between friendly armies, the clichés of corruption, the ill-intentioned illicit affair with the Qing army, and too many reasons, they directly completely submerged those heroes who had the heart to turn the tide.
If the protagonist wants to win, he must solve these problems, as well as other problems that have not yet been exposed, and if these problems are not solved, it is impossible for the protagonist to fight the Manchus in the interior with only one army, and this is what will be written about later in the book.
From the beginning of the decision to stay in Zhejiang, the protagonist struggled to move forward in order to rewrite this history, whether it was to govern the army and conduct military exercises, or to make plans, he tried his best to do everything well, even at the expense of defying the law or offending some villains. As a result, it is the actions of these villains that have completely pushed the history that has been rewritten back to its former orbit.
In addition to the Qing army, there were two villains in the first volume, one was Wang Sheng, and the other was Chu Suxian. Wang Sheng's behavior in history The author previously wrote in the text that Chu Suxian's record is relatively shorter - Chu Jiuru followed his younger brother Suxian, took advantage of Yi's small defeat, robbed the gold and went north, and the hearts of the people were shaken.
Wang Sheng's fate was completely changed, but Chu Suxian was still walking on the original trajectory, but he no longer had the good fortune of absconding with money to become a rich man, which can be regarded as a good way of heaven.
From the wind, to the grass, the protagonist began to completely integrate into this era, this experience of being excluded and leading to a big defeat, made the protagonist begin to have doubts about other anti-Qing forces, just like the one who saw his father betray the monarch who was kind to him, and finally could no longer trust other forces under the choice of loyalty and filial piety, and had to seek independent development of Zheng Chenggong, the protagonist will also embark on such a road, but he is even more terrifying to the Manchu Dynasty.
Of course, there will still be cooperation, at least there will be a deep intersection between the protagonist and Zheng Chenggong, Zhang Huangyan, Qian Qianyi and others, and other historical figures will also have some new influence on the protagonist, because it is their common goal to restore the Han family's clothing civilization.
In the second volume, the protagonist will gradually get rid of the identity of the military general, launch a series of offensives against the Qing army's occupied areas, and finally end in a big battle with both sides of the car, horse and artillery, and according to the deduction, the main attention of the Qing army in the southeast during this period is still in Zhoushan, after all, the appeal and strength of the Lu Jianguo are not covered, and the protagonist will use historical knowledge and improved system to confront the Manchus in the later stories.
The author said in the group that the subsequent development of this novel is far from being as simple as it is shown now, and the protagonist's opponent is the Manchu Qing Dynasty is a more cunning existence than the rough barbarians of history.
Even though many of the early Manchu generals had died in the fourth year of Yongli, the regime had already been established, and its ability to mobilize and learn was not weak at all. When the Manchus are beaten by the protagonist for a round or two, they will react, so the challenges faced by the protagonist are still amazing.
The first volume is finished, thanks to Bai Bai Po, Ancient Rhyme Weiyang, Eternal Seraph, Fuguang Haijiang Thousands of Mountains and Rivers, Fugudoku, Passing by You Bite Me, 0 This Love Doesn't Matter About Fengyue 0, o Aju, Big Pendulum Clock, HA1846, Lost in the Forest, Lonely Sail Encounter, Flower Full City 66, Long Jinfeng, Yuzhou Shanren Readers have a great reward, and at the same time thank you for looking for the evaluation votes and tips of the two immortals and szq618. As well as xchinese, pure rock candy 001, Qiu Ci and Qiu Fan, three readers signed in. There are also many readers who have posted book reviews or are silently supporting the author. It was you who let me know that I am not alone and moving forward.
Of course, there are also readers who have been promoting and evaluating the author and this novel on the forum these days.,Thank you very much.,The recent increase in the collection is bigger than when I got the recommendation (wry smile),The author will study the suggestions on those posts tonight.,Strive to write the back well.。
Thank you for your long-term support, "Volume II, Spark of the Stars", the prairie fire is imminent, so stay tuned.