Chapter 42: The Three Gods
decided what to write, Yan Buwen began to think about the plot, these two novels, whether it is a book or a TV series, Yan Buwen has read it more than once, especially the "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch" movie, TV series, since he was a child, he has been bombarded indiscriminately on TV, and Yan Buwen can't even think about it if he doesn't know the plot. Pen~Fun~Pavilion www.biquge.info Although there are differences in the plot of the film and the novel, it can help strengthen memory. So Yan Buwen was thinking about the plot frantically, and he had read the two novels no less than ten times, so he roughly remembered all the plots, and handed over the rest of the descriptions to Lin Fangping and Hua Shurong, I don't want them to have all the standards of Jin Yong and Liang Yusheng, and it is almost the same to write a seven- or eight-point portrait, which is much better than the plot of the novel they have written so far.
As for Lu Yan, let him write "Seven Swords Under the Heavenly Mountain", forget it, I have read this novel many times, the plot is still very familiar, and it is also related to "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch".
"You abandoned the book and rewrote it, I have two excellent plots that I need you to write." Yan Buwen said, this time it was a battle with a rainbow of momentum, and losing to Bu Xiaosheng was not a shame for Yan Buwen, but the consequences after that spread to the newspaper, and Yan Buwen could not escape the blame. Besides, since he dared to challenge, Yan Buwen had to at least peel off a layer of his skin, and even peel off the flesh and bones for him.
This is also a theorem upheld by Yan Buwen.
If anyone does not offend me, I will not offend, but if anyone offends me, I will offend!
Lin Fangping was shocked: "Mr. Yan, what did you say?" ”
Hua Shurong seemed to understand what Yan Buwen meant: "Mr. Yan, are you saying that let's give up the novel we are writing now and create a new one according to your ideas?" ”
"That's right." Yan Buwen nodded, "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch", "Book of Swords and Enmity", "Seven Swords Under the Heavenly Mountain" These novels can still have a far-reaching impact in modern times after a few decades, which shows the glory of God.
Lu Yan saw Lin Hehua's somewhat surprised expression and said, "The plot of "Snow Mountain Flying Fox" last time was provided by Mr. Yan, you can rest assured that you can create it." ”
Lin Fangping thought for a moment, and finally nodded: "Please also ask Mr. Yan for advice." ”
Hua Shurong said: "Please Mr. Yan for advice." ”
There have been masterpieces such as "Heaven and Dragon Slayer" and "Flying Fox in Snow Mountain", so they don't believe that Yan Buwen is powerful, so they hurriedly agreed, this is also the best time to learn Mr. Yan's creative ideas, if you learn a little bit, it will be of great benefit to the creation of novels in the future.
Yan Buwen paused for a moment and said, "Mr. Lin Fangpinglin, you like to write some characters who are both civil and military, and the protagonist's demeanor and temperament are good, so I thought about it just now, there is a plot of "Book of Swords and Enmity" that you can write." ”
Lin Fangping was stunned, the book of swords and enmity?
As soon as Yan Buwen finished speaking, Lin Fangping felt that this story was not simple, and hurriedly took a pen and paper and began to remember, book sword and enmity, good name! The first book is a noun, the other is a verb, the book sword symbolizes the scholar, the swordsman, and also symbolizes the meaning of writing the swordsman's grievances, good! Lin Fangping couldn't help but admire.
Hua Shurong also patiently listened to the story about the book sword enmity and enmity, Lu Yan also smiled when he saw the expressions of the two, once upon a time, he also had this expression, but after not hearing Yan for a long time, it was not strange.
After Yan Buwen finished speaking, he took a sip of tea, Lin Fangping and Hua Shurong in front of him were completely stunned, just listening to this story from Yan Buwen's mouth, I felt interesting, Chen Jialuo and Qianlong turned out to be brothers, the two brothers met for the first time, to the rebellion, and finally to the temporary alliance to overthrow the Qing Dynasty, and finally Qianlong turned against the water, resulting in the defeat of Chen Jialuo Honghuahui. A classic, an absolute classic!
When Lin Fangping took notes just now, his hands trembled a little, he had never heard such a wonderful story before, it was really thrilling, but then came panic, such a wonderful story, can he really write it well? Yan Buwen saw that Lin Fangping was so nervous, so he relaxed his mind: "After writing a chapter, show it to me." "I don't want to be good, but I don't want to be bad, Jin Yong's pen power is not a day of practice.
After that, Hua Shurong was a little looking forward to the plot that Yan Buwen gave her, and after Lin Fangping confirmed a few points, Hua Shurong hurriedly said: "Mr. Yan, I don't know what the story you gave me is?" ”
Yan Buwen took a sip of tea and said with a smile: "Listen to me tell you slowly, this has to start from the autumn of the forty-third year of Wanli in the Ming Dynasty, when Zhuo Zhonglian, the governor of Yunnan and Guizhou, stepped down and returned to his hometown of northern Shaanxi......" Yan Buwen said slowly, when he encountered a little stuck, he stopped and thought about it, and then compared it back and forth, trying not to leave mistakes, until the Jade Rakshasa left Zhuo Yihang, leaving Zhuo Yihang to guard Youtan Xianhua to the end.
Hua Shurong looked shocked, his lips trembled even more bloodless because of nervousness and surprise, after listening to the story, Hua Shurong was also attracted by this plot, a little unfinished, but it was actually over, what does it matter if Zhuo Yihang and Jade Rakshasa are not together? What can you do together, and what can you do when you don't be together? Jade Rakshasa doesn't matter anymore, then it doesn't matter. Hua Shurong only now feels how ridiculous the heroine he wrote about before is, like a ruthless and hateless doll, just blindly fighting and being uneven. Now she feels that Yan Buwen has opened the door to a new world for her, providing a more complete writing technique for women as the protagonists.
Hua Shurong said: "Mr. Yan, I don't know if this novel has a name, I think it's not bad to call it "Jade Rakshasa". ”
Yan Buwen saw Hua Shurong take out the name without thinking, and shook his head: "Vulgar, too vulgar, I have already thought about what the name of this novel is." ”
"What?" The three people in front of him asked in unison.
"The Legend of the White-Haired Witch." Yan didn't hear it.
Legend of the White-Haired Witch!
Like a bell ringing, waking up the three people in front of him, Hua Shurong said: "Okay, good name, my class has an axe, I want to say sorry to Mr. Yan." ”
"It's okay, just listening to the story, it's really easy to think of the name." Yan didn't hear it.
Hua Shurong said: "The story is wonderful, but I'm afraid that my pen power is insufficient, so I hate to ask Mr. Yan for advice when the time comes." ”
"Yes, if you write it, you can come to the newspaper to find me." Yan Buwen nodded.
Lu Yan also said: "I also felt a little touched when I heard Mr. Yan talk about two novel outlines today, and now I think about my novels are indeed a bit unbearable." I'll go back tonight and think about it, and I'll give Mr. Yan another edition tomorrow. ”
Yan Buwen said: "No need, I have also thought of your novel for you." ”
Just come together, Lu Yan's skills are good.
Lu Yan was pleasantly surprised, he didn't expect Mr. Yan to think of three stories in a row in such a short period of time, and the first two stories were very exciting. This made Lin Fangping and Hua Shurong also look forward to Yan Buwen's next story.
Yan Buwen said: "Seven swords go down to the Tianshan Mountain!" ”