Chapter Seventy-Six: Shazhou Dong Ming

Zhu Zhenguo has been in this Shazhou City for a few days, and he went out with Ouyang Wenfeng two days ago, and Ouyang Wenfeng seems to have been grounded at home again for the past two days, Zhu Zhenguo has become bored, and he can only rummage through some books at home, but his mind is really not on reading. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

I thought about whether to visit Ouyang Zheng again, but I felt that it was inappropriate, if it was normal, it would be nothing to visit more diligently. At this time, I just asked the teacher for something, and I came to the door two days later, which couldn't help but give Ouyang Zheng a feeling of urging, which was really bad.

Just when Zhu Zhenguo was bored, Zhu Wencai came into the study and said, "Young master, a few scholars came outside to ask to see." ”

Zhu Zhenguo has encountered this kind of thing a few times, most of them are some new students who come to visit him, mostly to ask for advice or to pull some relationships, generally respectful, and also make Zhu Zhenguo feel a lot better.

"Let them in." Zhu Zhenguo is still not a big person, but his reputation has been getting bigger and bigger in the past two years, in the final analysis, he is still a showman, it is good to say that he is not at home, but if he refuses the literati who came to visit him at home, it is not a good reputation to spread it.

The four scholars were led directly into the study by Zhu Wencai, and there were also small servants serving tea and pouring water. Zhu Zhenguo felt that something was wrong, these four scholars were not as respectful as the students who came to visit before, but showed some pride.

"Why did you come to my place?" Zhu Zhenguo has already felt the arrogance of these people, and of course he will not be polite.

"I am Dong Ming, the head of the Shazhou Xiucai case last year, and I brought my friends to visit my brother today, because I want to discuss some literary poetry." The first person sitting at the front said. This Dong Ming calls himself Brother Zhu, but he is definitely older than Zhu Zhenguo.

"Oh, how?" Zhu Zhenguo knew in his heart that this Dong Ming wanted to step on his head, and he also brought friends to witness.

"Recently, I heard about Brother Zhu's new work "Fortune Operator" on the East Lake, which is worth discussing." Dong Ming obviously came prepared. said that there is no first martial arts in this article, and there are always people who are not convinced by the name of the first genius of Zhu Zhenguo Dajiang. This Dong Ming is the new top of the list, and he is obviously also a great figure.

Today, if this Dong Mingzhen trampled Zhu Zhenguo under his feet, it would obviously be one step to the sky, replacing Zhu Zhenguo's reputation as the first literary talent in the river. Zhu Zhenguo is really a shortcut to fame for Dong Ming.

"Tell me about it." Zhu Zhenguo is also a little impatient, this is to criticize the "General Operator" he just wrote a few days ago.

Although the song "Fortune Operator" is not bad, Zhu Zhenguo wrote it on a whim, and it really needs to be scrutinized, and there is always something inappropriate. This Dong Ming is calculating, why don't you come to discuss "Linjiang Immortal" or palindromic poems, if you really find a flaw, you have to be in the limelight.

"Brother Zhu's "Fortune Operator" was written in Xiawan, but it is very good, but there are some words and phrases in it that are worth discussing:

The light mist blows the white feathers

Emerald crowned goose

Go to the green peaks and mountains like gathering

Deep in the empty mountains

Smoke wave water mirror level

The grass goes with the flow

It is embellished with three or five cooks in the fairy world

The new rain is coming

Among them, a sentence in the depths of the empty mountain is really a failure, and the whole poem is written in this sentence, which breaks the artistic conception, and is not worthy of the artistic conception of the last "new rain Xiaoxiaoxiao", do you wish my brother to think so? ”

"What do you think it should be?" Zhu Zhenguo still thinks about it in his heart, otherwise he kicked the ball over at will, meaning that if you think it's not good, then you can tell me a good one.

"I want my meaning, change to "curling" is better, the empty mountain is curling, the meaning of curling is to describe the scene of smoke and rise, put it here, Ping Qian is also right, echoing before and after, the artistic conception is stronger, I wish my brother to think so? Dong Ming said that he seemed to have won a victory, and when he asked Brother Zhu if he thought so, his momentum was even more lofty.

The three people who came with them all felt justified and nodded their heads in support. They all felt that Brother Dong's words were reasonable, and they caught the sore spot of Zhu Zhenguo.

Zhu Zhenguo saw this Dong Ming and asked if he thought so, his head was really bigger, although it was normal for literati to be light, but this person was manipulated by fame and fortune, and he only wanted to be famous and brilliant, and he had no respect for people at all, which was really uncomfortable. Although it may be better to be curled than deep, I don't want to think that this poem was written by Zhu Zhenguo, and I wonder how much meaning one or two of these words have.

Zhu Zhenguo didn't answer positively, and said directly: "Brother Dong, you listen to my poem,

Idle living with few neighbors, grass paths into the deserted garden. The bird stays in the tree by the pool, and the monk pushes the moon down the door.

Cross the bridge to divide the wild colors, move the stones and move the cloud roots. Coming here for the time being, the tryst is worth it. There is a sentence in this that the monk pushes the moon to the door, but sometimes I feel that it is not good to push the word, maybe it is better to knock the word, and sometimes I think it is better to push the word, which word does Brother Dong think is better? ”

Where did Dong Ming think that Zhu Zhenguo completely ignored the "curling" that he had been pondering for a long time, but asked himself a question. Debating this kind of thing, Zhu Zhenguo and his two lives are human beings, and he is obviously better than Dong Ming in terms of skills. Dong Ming felt that Zhu Zhenguo's poem was really a masterpiece for a while, and immediately entered the question asked by Zhu Zhenguo.

After scrutinizing and scrutinizing, this Dong Ming fell into deep thought, and even the other three people who came with him were also thinking. This poem was very famous in Zhu Zhenguo's previous life, and few people don't know this allusion. It was this Tang Dynasty Jia Dao's "Title Li Ning's Secluded Residence", Han Yu and him deliberated, and Jia Dao finally used the word "knock". This is also the source of the use of the word "scrutiny" as a metaphor for repeated pondering of the meaning in later generations.

But to insist that "knocking" is better than pushing, it is not necessarily true, each has its own artistic conception. The word "knock" highlights the quietness of the environment, but it also shows that this person is just a passerby, not a familiar person, and he has to knock on the door to enter, which is a little less lonely. And the word "push" is also in line with the tranquility of the environment, and it also shows this person's familiarity with idleness.

This Dong Ming is obviously also a talented person, and after an in-depth analysis, he still doesn't understand the pros and cons, and he is in a dilemma for a while.

Zhu Zhenguo waited for a moment, and when he saw that Dong Ming had not answered, he went out on his own, leaving only Dong Ming and the four of them to scrutinize in the study. It's really Zhu Zhenguo who doesn't want to be entangled with it anymore.

When Zhu Zhenguo came to the courtyard, he was also bored, and he was still a little bored by this Dong Ming, so he picked up the long knife and danced, and for a while the courtyard was full of knife shadows, and it also attracted an idle iron bull sitting at the door.

"Young master, I'm going to you with Tie Niu?" Tie Niu was bored, and when he saw Zhu Zhenguo dancing with a knife, his hands were itching.

"Good!" Zhu Zhenguo didn't say much, stopped his body, and stood still and just waited for the iron bull.

The two of them instantly hummed and fought as a group, you attacked me and defended countless times, but most of them didn't fight with all their might, just practiced their hands and feet, and relieved their worries.

The two went back and forth for dozens of rounds, until the iron bull fell on the ground and lay on his stomach. Zhu Zhenguo also saw that Dong Ming and the four of them were already standing in the courtyard, Zhu Zhenguo also ignored it, just wiped the fine sweat on his forehead, and took a few sips of the tea handed by Wen Cai.

Dong Ming's face was a little ashamed at this time, and he stepped forward and said: "Brother Zhu, this deliberation is really in a dilemma, and it is difficult to decide, wait for the students to go back and ask the teacher to reply again." ”

At this time, Dong Ming was not arrogant and called himself "I" in front of Zhu Zhenguo, but he was humbly called "below". Zhu Zhenguo also felt Dong Ming's modesty at this time, and after some exercise just now, he was also a lot more relieved.

"Well, you go and ask for advice." Although Zhu Zhenguo is a lot more relaxed, it does not mean that he will greet him with a smile, and his tone is still a little cold.

"Brother Zhu, I will say goodbye next, and I will visit again next time I have a decision." After saying that, Dong Ming was embarrassed to stay any longer, the master was so cold, the meaning was already obvious. After saying that, he went out with three friends.

Who is this Dong Ming's master? It is this Dajiang County Fusun Sichao Sun, otherwise ordinary students would not be so arrogant and awe-inspiring to come to visit Zhu Zhenguo, but Zhu Zhenguo didn't know it at this time.

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