Qin Qing sat in the snow pavilion in the back mountain, and students kept handing in their works, and then retreated outside the pavilion, waiting for Qin Qing's evaluation. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

With snow as the theme, a very common theme, the people here are talented, such a snow poem, there are still treasured sentences?

So within a few hours, almost everyone handed in the manuscript of the poem.

Obviously, at the end of the year, Master Qin didn't want to deliberately make things difficult for others.

Such a performance appraisal should be recorded on the transcript. Military strategy and arithmetic are just enough, and those official eunuchs pay special attention to scripture and poetics, and the struggle for fame and fortune is inevitable.

The students who got the results of their own poems were all smiling, and this Qin Master's criticism was almost the highest praise in history compared to them personally.

"I have a manuscript of poetry here, written by one of the great men. It's just that the old decay is shallow in learning, and after reading it several times, I can't understand the beauty of the verses, so please taste and appreciate it together. ”

The beings looked left and right to see if anyone had not yet received the manuscript of the poem.

"Nineteen, the manuscript of the poem in the master's hand must be yours!" Hou Haomiao took a first, and even if he went back to explain something, he was naturally very happy, and when he saw that Lin Lan had not yet had a poem manuscript, he asked in a low voice.

"Yes."

"It turned out to be a poem manuscript of the demon king of our academy. It is difficult for the master to evaluate, but he has to listen to it. Meng Zong said sourly.

Lin Lan glanced at this...... Meng Zong, who asked him to subvert the ancient view, was too lazy to argue with him.

Qin Qing glanced at Lin Lan and said slowly: "The moon black goose flies high, and it escapes at night. If you want to chase away the light horsemen, the snow is full of bows and knives. Reviews. ”

After listening to this, Zhang Cang pondered for a moment, saluted Qin Qing, and said, "The student is brave and wants to appreciate this poem by Senior Brother Lin." ”

"But it doesn't hurt to say it."

Zhang Cang said slowly: "This poem is written sharply. Listen to the last sentence, the snow is full of bows and knives, where is there such an exaggerated thing. Are all these soldiers with bows and swords dead? Immediately soldiers, how can you make the snow cover the bow and sword? It does have a bit of momentum when you read it, but when you think about it carefully, it's full of loopholes. ”

"That's right, after Senior Brother Zhang Cang said this, it's true." Someone chimed in.

Wang Zi'an continued to provoke: "There is also something wrong with the first sentence, the moon black geese fly high, this month the black wind is high, how do you know that there are flying geese?" Take another 10,000 steps back and say, what is written is a virtual scene, this night geese should return to their nests and perch, and it is not common sense to fly to a high place, which can be seen to be extremely absurd! Hehe, of course, this is just a superficial opinion, if there is something wrong, please correct Senior Brother Lin Lan. ”

Lin Lan said with a smile: "Who said that snow can't cover the bow and knife, have you ever been to the northwest?" Have you ever seen snow in the Northland? ”

"Hehe, I really haven't been there. But I won't make some ridiculous poems out of thin air. Wang Zi'an had something to say, and he still smiled.

Qin Qing brushed his beard and said, "Feibai, you go for a trip, please ask Master Chen to come over." In our academy, only Master Chen has been to the northwest, and this poem is related to the military, so it is good for him to make an evaluation. ”

"Yes, Master."

Hou Haomiao approached Lin Lan and asked: "Nineteen, you are really good enough, what is not good to write, with your poetic talent, you can just write a Yongxue poem casually, why write such a Yongxue poem?" ”

"I thought of it casually, and I wrote it." Lin Lan is not as simple as he says, yesterday's sand table drill, coupled with today's snow viewing, made him naturally think of Biansai's majestic and magnificent poems, so he wrote this stopper's song.

After waiting for a while, Chen Zhice walked slowly.

"What kind of poem stumped Master Qin, and let the old man make a judgment?"

"A poem about the army." Qin Qing handed the poem to Chen Zhice, "It is most appropriate for the old general to judge." ”

Chen Zhice slowly recited silently in his mouth, and the quatrain of just two crosses made Chen Zhice ponder for a long time, and his face was extremely solemn.

After a long time, he finally raised his head, glanced around, and asked, "Who wrote this poem?" ”

Seeing that Chen Zhice's face was so ugly, Meng Zong said a little downhill: "This poem is written by Mr.'s proud protégé, Lin Lan. I'm still discussing that this poem is really ridiculous, does Mr. think so? ”

Chen Zhice glanced at Lin Lan, and there was a slight smile on the corner of his mouth.

Zhang Cang on the side noticed this smile and couldn't help but raise his eyebrows.

Chen Zhice handed the manuscript of the poem to Qin Qing and said, "I think this poem ...... It's not too much to give a nail on the ground at all. ”

"Whew!"

"Huh?"

originally thought that Chen Zhice would scoff at this poem, but all of a sudden, there was such a high evaluation, which made everyone stunned.

Zhang Cang's eyes lit up, this Lin Lan Bingce took the first grade, although he said that he gave up the exam in arithmetic, but even the papers were produced by him, and it was not a problem to evaluate the first grade, if even poetry made him stand out, would this be worth it?

"Don't Master Chen think that the last line of the poem is extremely absurd?"

"What's wrong with the snowy bow knife? In the old man's opinion, this poetic conception is lofty, how can it be the handwriting of ordinary people? It is a thousand times better than those disease-free moaning cartilage poems that you have made. Chen Zhice spat and spat when he spoke, full of anger, "This poem is written in an artistic conception, how can you be so mediocre that you can see through it, and it is extremely absurd, I see that you are all wine bags and rice bags." ”

Chen Zhice didn't save face for Zhang Cang at all.

Meng Zong was not happy with Chen's approach yesterday, and Lin Lan also made an obstacle from it, causing him to get a humiliating result under C, and said with an unkind look: "Sir, don't deliberately cover up." Such poems. There are many loopholes, how can you evaluate the first? If you don't tell the reason, I'm afraid it will be difficult to convince the public! ”

"You know!" Chen Zhice's foul words directly made Meng Zong's face flush with shame.

"Alas, why should the old general be angry. I have never been to the northwest, so I invited the old general to taste one or two, why bother with it? Qin Qing obviously wanted to make a round.

"Since you all want to know, okay." Chen Zhice's nostrils let out of his nostrils, and he scraped Meng Zong, who had repeatedly spoken disrespectfully, snorted coldly, and said: "The moon black geese fly high, this is the movement in the forest, and the frightening geese are flying high, you say this is ridiculous?" This is the enemy army in the forest! With just five words, it not only explained the time, but also set off the tense atmosphere before the battle, and directly forced out the jaw joint. ”

Zhang Cang raised his eyebrows, he naturally had no military experience, and when he heard Chen Zhice's explanation, he said a little unwillingly: "What about Shan Yu of the Jaw Lian?" The students are only shallow in learning, but they also know that the title of this poem is "The Song of the Great Beijing Stopper", but this single was destroyed by the Northern Barbarians long before the founding of the Great Beijing. ”

"Excuse me, borrow finger, do you understand? With the leader of a destroyed country pointing to the enemy army, hinting at the belief that the war will be won, reading the poem so far, I suddenly feel a heroic feeling rushing to my face.

The enemy acted at night, not with his troops, but with the cover of night to flee in panic. The tone of the poem is affirmative, the judgment is clear, and it is full of contempt for the enemy and the belief in the victory of our army, which is enough to excite people, and in the mysterious atmosphere created by the previous sentence, it is amazing, how can it be absurd?

The enemy chieftain fled, and our army pursued and captured, which was a natural development. 'I want to chase away the light cavalry,' but the pursuers will send but do not send out.

The army only sent 'light cavalry', not only because it was fast, but also because it showed the high degree of self-confidence of our Northwest Army, as if the enemy was already a turtle in an urn, and only a small number of 'light cavalry' were needed to chase and suppress it, and it could be captured. ”

The more Chen Zhice spoke, the more excited he became, and he even danced with his hands.

"As for the tail couplet that has just been devalued by you, it is even more shocking, pushing the whole poetic conception to a climax.

Shuofang's cold winter snow, you really think it's just like this fine snow in the south of the Yangtze River, it is a goose feather snow that can freeze people and horses to death!

The snow is full of bows and knives, how amazing and ridiculous? Hehe, it's ridiculous that you people don't know gold and jade. ”

When Zhu Sheng heard Chen Zhice's analysis, his face suddenly turned pale, and he didn't know what to say......

Chen Zhice said with a smile: "The northwest is bitterly cold, and the literati of Dajing are reluctant to get involved, and it is really rare to get this good poem today." Gong Yan has arrived at the study, Lin Lan, you and I will go to see it. ”

Lin Lan's face was strange and said, "He'...... What are you here for? ”

"Naturally, tomorrow's performance appraisal will come to an end."

Lin Lan secretly breathed a sigh of relief, finally not coming at herself......

"Master Qin will also come over later, and we will eat together."

In the envious eyes of a group of people, Lin Lan followed Chen Zhice and left slowly.

Originally, I didn't want to pretend to be anything, but I found a trust to force me to pretend to be forced, Lin Lan was speechless in her heart......