102. Beginning to show a talent for writing
Jiashu loves literature, when he was in middle school, he wrote essays that won many awards in the city's essay competitions, and also published dozens of articles in newspapers and magazines, three months of recruit training, every day in addition to training or training, there is no time to write, do you think: write a letter or lie on the bed to write, does he still have time to write articles? As soon as the recruits were platooned, they were relatively free, and when he was idle, he wrote a little poem:
soldier
Say goodbye to the colorful world/
Melt into this piece of national defense green/
Hold on to the cold steel gun/
Pick up the burden of defending the country /
Military songs instead of pop songs /
The love of children is buried deep in the bottom of my heart/
Finding Happiness in One-Two-One/
Let your dreams fly in straight lines and squares/
Prohibition / Discipline /
The blazing sun is a good time to train troops/
Eating and sleeping in the open is just to hone the will/
A call from the motherland/
We are at the forefront of the charge/
The Flood Devil Surge/
Sighing silently under the body of steel/
Facing the gangsters with knives/
We stand up /
Some people say /
The value of a pawn should be on the battlefield/
But the soldier said/
May the motherland be peaceful, prosperous and strong, and the people live happily and securely/
Even if heroes are never useful /
After writing it, he sent the poem to the editorial department of the "Brothers-in-Arms", in fact, he didn't report much hope at all, just doing what he liked, but he didn't expect that a few weeks later, he actually received a registered letter, and when he saw that it was sent by the editorial department of the "Brothers-in-Arms", he opened the envelope, and there were two "Comrades-in-Arms" and a letter, which said that his work "Bing" had been adopted by the "Brothers-in-Arms", followed by some content that encouraged him to continue writing, and at the same time received a remittance slip, In the beneficiary column, the name of his grandson is prominently written. Sun Jiashu looked at the letter silently, and a sense of joy arose.
Xiao Guangdong saw that Sun Jiashu was reading the letter intently, thinking that it was a love letter sent to him by a girl, so he snatched it and said, "Who wrote it?" Let buddy take a look. Oops, I've sent the money, you're really good! ”
Sun Jiashu smiled and said, "What? It was issued by the editorial department of "Brothers-in-Arms", just read it. ”
"How could the editorial office send you a letter? Who's blind? ”
"Really, the poem I wrote was published, don't believe it."
"Really?" Xiao Guangdong said in surprise.
"Is that fake?" Sun Jiashu said proudly.
"Let me see, oops, it's really published! You can do it! Xiao Guangdong Yang shouted excitedly with the letter in his hand: "Sun Jiashu has published an article!" Sun Jiashu published an article! ”
The news of the report of the poem written by Sun Jiashu became explosive news in the company, and the comrades-in-arms rushed to circulate the newspaper and remittance slips, as if they had published their works. Only the great poet Wang Gui's face was gloomy, he felt so faceless, he wrote for a few months and got nothing, he couldn't help but have a faint sense of guilt in his heart, he went to the dormitory alone to write his "Flying Dream", this poem did not know how much energy he wasted, only wrote a large manuscript for poetry, and submitted several drafts to a local publication were returned, and the most recent rejection was accompanied by a letter, asking him to change it again and work hard from the creative. In this way, he let the comrades-in-arms of the whole company read it, "I will publish it if I change it again", he said when he met people, but he didn't expect Sun Jiashu to take the lead.
Li Xiwa looked at this kind of remittance slip enviously, and said to Sun Jiashu complimentingly: "It seems that a learned person is different!" Just a few words are worth a month's allowance. ”
"Where, where." Sun Jiashu said modestly. In his eyes, this remittance slip has the same weight as the published poem, this is the first manuscript fee he earned in the army, he doesn't plan to take it, he wants to keep this remittance slip as a souvenir. A few comrades-in-arms shouted for him to have a treat, he was willing to pay out of his own pocket, and he placed four small dishes in the small restaurant opposite the army, and originally promised to drink a bottle of beer per person, but he didn't expect the wine to be unbearable, and after drinking a bunch of beer, Sun Jiashu was crying with a sad face, and the hotel owner over there was so happy that he couldn't close his mouth, and finally settled the account, more than 70 yuan, Sun Jiashu touched his pocket, only more than 50 yuan, so he had to borrow more than 20 yuan from Xiao Guangdong to pay the bill, made Sun Jiashu feel so distressed that he was still mentioning this matter a few months later.
After publishing an article, Sun Jiashu climbed the end of the lattice more sufficiently, he searched hard for materials, there are many things that happen in the army, but most of them have no value to write, he remembered the matter of planting vegetables in the company, there is no other chores after the company's training, that is, planting vegetables, a company is one acre and three points of land, there are more people and less land, so don't you put the standard up? Each class is to do better, to see whose land is planted well, the ground is digging three feet, the soil is loose and soft, the ridge does put a lot of effort, the standard is not high, it depends on the unevenness, the ridge is not straight, a class training first, work the same first, Li Xiwa ingenuity, the ground is scraped out with a straight plate, the ridge is even more skilled, he found a mud trowel, pull the line, like a plastering wall to wipe the ridge smooth and flat, other classes do not do backward, have to follow suit, other companies have seen, all come to learn experience, soWhen I went to the vegetable field, I saw that the angular ridges were really beautiful, but Sun Jiashu was puzzled by this practice, is it beneficial to grow crops in this way? After conceiving, he wrote an article entitled "Formalism in the Vegetable Field", which led to the theme from growing vegetables, looked at the essence through the phenomenon, and summarized this practice as formalism, which was extended to the daily life and training of the troops, and pointed out its harmfulness. In the long run, the troops will purely pursue the perfection of the situation, engage in showmanship, and be flashy......
After this article was sent, it was like a stone sinking into the sea, Sun Jiashu didn't think much about it, probably he was "shot" by the editor, for the person who wrote the article, this is a normal thing, besides, the training has overwhelmed him, and he can't take care of it.
How did he know that it was this article that caused an uproar.