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The beautiful woman didn't really want to punish Li Dayou, at most she was a warning. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

So after Li Dayou begged her grandfather to tell her grandmother, she snorted coldly: "Li Dayou, please always remember that you are an editor!" ”

"Yes, yes, I must remember it, I must keep it in my heart." Li Dayou nodded and did not fall.

When Li Dayou drove away in a gray car, the beautiful woman walked up to Su Qin and said with a smile: "Su Qin, hello, I am Bai Jie, the literary editor of "May". ”

White?

The young woman is white?

For some reason, Su Qin's mind suddenly jumped out of a once famous novel on the earth-"Young Woman Baijie"-and he suddenly missed it a little.

He couldn't help but look at the other party.

At the age of twenty-four or five, it seems that she has been married, and she has the charm of a mature woman, and she is really a young woman

Goose egg face, willow eyebrows, bright eyes, like a pool of autumn water, good-looking nose, sexy lips, white teeth, slender neck.

Although it was early winter, she was still wearing a white skirt and a slim sweater on her upper body.

It's very beautiful!

The temperament on the body is also very elegant, not only the unique charm of a mature woman, but also the vitality and breath of a twenty-four or five-year-old woman's youth.

Of course, it was rude for Su Qin to look at the other party so unscrupulously, but Bai Jie didn't seem to be angry.

On the contrary, she was still a little curious!

Su Qin is only eighteen years old this year, and when a boy of this age sees a woman of her magnitude, he is generally at a loss, and he wants to look at it but doesn't dare to look at it!

But the person in front of him obviously didn't behave like this, he was like an old man who had read all the beauties in the world, and he patrolled her up and down with a pure scrutinizing gaze.

The curvature of his lips was a little playful, as if he had remembered some of her previous troubles.

"What's going on? How could this Su Qin give me a weird feeling? Bai Jie felt a little strange in her heart.

"Teacher Bai Jie, hello, it's a pleasure to meet you."

At this moment, Su Qin stretched out his hand and shook her seriously.

Bai Jie found that when Su Qin shook hands with her, the time was neither long nor short, and the strength was neither light nor heavy, neither the panic and anxiety of young boys, nor the thoughts of those lustful people who wanted to take the opportunity to rub oil, and they were very mature.

As a result, the curiosity in Bai Jie's heart became stronger and stronger!

What kind of person is this Su Qin!

"Soldier Assault" is so well written, and it also gives people the feeling of a mature gentleman, not at all like an eighteen-year-old person!

"Su Qin, first of all, I want to say sorry to you, I actually saw your manuscript a long time ago, and I also decided to come down to talk to you in person, but something suddenly happened in the past few days, which made me so busy, so I couldn't take care of you, and you didn't have a mobile phone to contact, so ...... Sorry, I'm really sorry! If I had contacted you earlier, this might not have happened today. ”

Bai Jie apologized very sincerely.

Su Qin smiled: "It's okay, Teacher Bai Jie, it's really okay." ”

The news that a big beauty had come to the new barracks in Niulanshan somehow spread, so soon, almost all the people came, but they didn't dare to come forward, just sneaking around not far from the door.

Only Company Commander Zhang Hua came up to greet him.

Bai Jie didn't come empty-handed, she had already obtained the relevant procedures, so it was logical for her to enter the Niulanshan Recruit Company.

She came in an off-road vehicle, but it was not a luxury car, very ordinary domestic car.

After some greetings, Su Qin and Bai Jie came to the reception room and began to get to the point.

"Su Qin, we want to serialize your novel "Soldier Assault" in "May", I discussed it with other editors, and decided to publish two issues for you with a manuscript fee of 1000 words first, if the response is good, we will raise the price again, what do you think?"

Bai Jie gets straight to the point.

A hundred words in a thousand?

This price is actually not high, of course, it can't be said to be very low, it is a normal price!

But one of the more sincere things about "May" is that they can raise the price!

So Su Qin nodded without thinking much: "Okay Teacher Bai Jie, I'll listen to you." ”

Agreed so quickly?

Bai Jie was stunned.

She originally thought that a talented author like Su Qin must be extremely arrogant and arrogant, and he would ask for a sky-high price when he opened his mouth, where did she think of it......

Therefore, at this moment, her perception of Su Qin became better and better!

Handsome in appearance and elegant in temperament, although he is a soldier, he does not have the domineering atmosphere of ordinary soldiers, but is like a scholar, which makes people want to get close.

He is tall and fit, and the smell of the man on his body is very strong, giving people a strong sense of security!

Every word and deed, every move, has both the taste of a gentleman, the chic of a mature man and the uninhibited of a young man!

Bai Jie couldn't help but quietly glance at Su Qin a few more times.

"Su Qin, can you tell me more about the story of "Soldier Assault"? I want to know the general direction of the plot. ”

"Of course." Su Qin nodded, organized his language a little, and said:

"The story of the Soldier Assault is a story that I felt after I joined the army.

Before joining the army, my own conditions were not good, I failed the college entrance examination, I didn't go to university, after entering the army, the psychological gap was even greater, the physical training could not keep up, and the discipline training was also very difficult, and every aspect was not easy.

But I know that there are actually many recruits like me, and some recruits are graduates from prestigious universities, but they still can't adapt after entering the barracks.

Nothing else, the army is a naked, survival of the fittest, such a place where the strong are respected, and all camouflage and glamour have been stripped away, leaving only the bloody truth......

This is not a paradise for the weak!

Here's hell for the weak!

So I thought, can a weak person like me, a useless person like me, survive in such a cruel place?

That's when I came up with the idea to write Soldier Assault......"

Su Qin talked eloquently, Bai Jie listened carefully, and asked a question from time to time.

At the beginning, although she had some confidence in Su Qin's literary cultivation, to tell the truth, she didn't care much!

After all, it's only eighteen years old!

After all, I only graduated from high school!

But after some conversation, she suddenly had a feeling: "Oh, my God! How does he know so much! How can his background be deeper than mine! His literary attainments are higher than mine! ”

Yiye Zhiqiu, as the most famous chief editor of "May", Bai Jie's ability to see and recognize people is not ordinarily strong!

Therefore, she secretly made up her mind: "No matter what method you use, you must leave Su Qin in "May"!" ”

She even regretted the act of blowing up the manuscript fee just now, otherwise, now she could quietly raise the price a little, at least mention two hundred thousand words! She has that right!

The price of a thousand words and a hundred words is just afraid that I can't keep this talented guy!

"Oh, by the way, Su Qin, how many words do you probably want to write about this "Soldier Assault"?" Bai Jie asked.

She suddenly thought of a way to raise the price.

"How many words?" Su Qin was a little distracted just now, and he didn't react at once, so he casually asked, "Which version are you asking?" I wrote two versions of "Soldier Assault", one is shorter, five or six hundred thousand words, and the other is much longer, at least one million! ”

Miscellaneous......

What the?

Bai Jie was stunned!

Two versions of "Soldier Assault" were written?

Writing two versions of a novel?

Really fake!

Bai Jie's eyes widened in disbelief!

She's been an editor for so many years, she's been in the literary industry for a longer time, but I've never heard of a writer who writes two editions?

Su Qin didn't speak, just took out two notebooks and handed them to Bai Jie and said, "The one I voted for you is this version, and there is another one, it's this, you can take a look." ”

Bai Jie flipped through the two ordinary notebooks.

At the first glance of the dense font above, Bai Jie's eyes lit up, and even his heart was about to melt, and he couldn't help but exclaim: "Wow, what a beautiful word!" ”

Su Qin smiled and didn't speak!

Isn't skinny gold pretty?

Bai Jie seriously appreciated those calligraphy, and then she read it carefully, she only read more than ten pages, and then raised her head to look at Su Qin!

She didn't speak!

She was blown away!

There are actually two versions of "Soldier Assault"!

One is the version she received, and the other is the one in her hand!

The two versions have almost nothing in common except for the core of the story, and the feeling of reading is completely different!

"Oh my God! This...... Is this Su Qin human! Eighteen years old! I've only graduated from high school, but my writing level is ......."

In Bai Jie's heart, it is like turning over the river and the sea.