In the past two days, I have written so much that I can't stand it, and I think the second volume is the same as the first volume, I want to be people-oriented, but I think a lot, write a lot, and have little effect.

It's not attractive enough, everyone's feedback is not very good, and the plot has an independent setting, but it's a problem with my way of writing, and it's even a little watery, and it's a little boring.

It's a little taken for granted on the whole.,The first volume is built up little by little.,And in order to improve the strength.,Naturally, a world suddenly appeared in the second volume.,The purpose is to improve the protagonist's ideological realm is different.。

A book friend said well, the second volume can be taken out separately as a new book.

If you calculate it this way, there is no problem with the current way of writing, but this is a creation god novel, and the current way of writing is very problematic.

Now at 7:40 in the morning, I thought about half a night, and today I will take a day off, and I will change it.

Take a bow.

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