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Thirteen new books for a month,Thank you for the strong support and wonderful comments of new and old friends,Whether it is a positive comment or a negative comment,Thirteen have replied to the message one by one,The following is a few questions mentioned by friends,Make a concentrated summary,Show the attitude of thirteen。

1. Typos, other words, and sick sentences. Thirteen's attitude is: change, no matter how much time it takes, it must be changed, and when the document is issued in the future, it must be reviewed more carefully. However, Thirteen was born sloppy, and after correcting the text two or three times, he could still find typos. Sick sentences, sometimes, with their own ideas, can also be sloppy. Please bear with me. If I can point out the chapters, the mistakes, Thirteen is even more grateful. Thirteen of them were sloppy, and the "Yongle Canon" was sloppily written into the "Siku Quanshu", and two friends proposed it and found it after looking for it three times.

Second, the problem of the character of the protagonist. Maybe the protagonist of the crossing is not very good, and he is set up as a college student like a construction site, and the thirteen original intention is to elaborate: as long as there is an opportunity, everyone can succeed, regardless of background.

In such a premise, as soon as the protagonist crosses over, he immediately becomes ambitious, sleek and sophisticated, which does not match the identity of the protagonist. The attitude of the thirteenth is: people are changing with the change of the environment, and when you have more energy, you can have gradually greater ambition. Many people who started a rebellion, including Zhu Yuanzhang, did not think of becoming an emperor or being an emperor when they first rebelled, they may simply want to live a better life.

People grow up in the environment, and their own abilities are also exercised in the social environment. We often find that someone around us has changed, and has not become the person you knew at the beginning, and may not be the person you hoped to be, but in the circle of friends, the greatest achievement. Such a protagonist, if he wants to become famous, naturally has a lot of homework to do, and there will be many, many stories to write.

Thirteen has also read some information, maybe the setting of such a protagonist personality change is indeed very difficult, and this is also a bold attempt by Thirteen.

3. On the question of the title of the book. The story is set at the end of the Yuan Dynasty, and the origin of this name is because the protagonist gets two big cities, and the abbreviation of the name. It may be unintentional to collide with something that is conventioned in society, which is just an unintentional coincidence. The page of the book has been written with the words "This story is pure fiction, if there is any similarity, it is pure coincidence", please don't overdo it in reverie, let Thirteen be invited to tea, it is not good.

Fourth, on the issue of attitudes towards historical events. Thirteen doesn't know what books he read, it is estimated that the main channels for obtaining knowledge come from the Internet, wild history, and the official history is quite different, Thirteen thinks that he knows a little more about the history of the Republic of China, but Thirteen is not ready to write that history anymore. The history of the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty, is the thirteenth least understood paragraph, and it is also very difficult to consult the information, if it is different from what the reader understands, please bear with me, if you can give advice, 130,000 grateful.

Fifth, on the issue of a large number of non-Han Chinese settled in. On the one hand, it is determined by the specific historical environment at the end of the Yuan Dynasty, and because of the space that the protagonist cuts into, there are indeed too few historical celebrities, and I will elaborate on this issue in the next fifty-eighth chapter, representing the protagonist's point of view, which is a question of cultural self-confidence.

Finally, Thirteen said that Thirteen has consulted materials for a year, and this book sets up self-feeling, and the content will be very rich. If nothing else, this is a book of millions of words.

Thank you again for your opinions, support, and encouragement (including collections, recommendations, and tips)! Thirteen will come on!