Today is February 14 of the Gregorian calendar, the fifteenth day of the first lunar month, Valentine's Day in the West, and the traditional Chinese Lantern Festival.

I remember the last time I wrote a testimonial was Chinese New Year's Eve, Shanhe's birthday, this time to catch up with Valentine's Day and Lantern Festival, really coincidental, Shanhe coded another 100,000 words in half a month, two changes a day, fully fulfilled the original promise.

However, the results are too poor, and the reasons are both objective and subjective.

First of all, the subject matter written by Shanhe is the theme of hitting the street, and there are almost no people who write about the Jin Dynasty who do not hit the street, after all, this era is the era of humiliation of the Han people, and there are not many people who are interested, and it is normal for no one to click.

Second, it was the first time for Shanhe to write a book, and although he had made a lot of preparations, there were still many deficiencies, such as the writing needed to be improved, and the knowledge of history was not enough.

Third, there is relatively little life experience, insufficient background, the unique sense of heaviness and vicissitudes of life in historical literature, which is not well expressed, and I looked at several gods who have better results in history at the starting point, Yueguan, Gengxin, Xiaohe, are all old men around forty years old, compared with them, Shanhe is obviously much younger, and the depth of the problem is obviously not enough, and the plot written may be relatively naïve and unreasonable in the eyes of many people.

Fourth, the ability to grasp the plot is not enough, and the inconsequential plot can often write several chapters, and the protagonist actually wrote 38 chapters when he was a child, and the mountains and rivers themselves were surprised, and they have written 300,000 words so far, and they haven't entered the theme yet, in short, it's too watery.

Fifth, the plot twists and turns, not in line with the spirit of YY, not the protagonist is cool to the end, especially, when it was written that the heroine Wang Ling was going to marry someone else, the collection immediately dropped more than 30, even if it was not married, but many readers may be very uncomfortable in their hearts, especially, the heroine was robbed by thieves halfway.

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Other reasons, Shanhe will not list them one by one, only 300,000 words were written, Shanhe summed up so many flaws in the work, I believe that if you keep writing, Shanhe will definitely find more problems.

Although there are many flaws in the work, there are still some enthusiastic book lovers who vote for Shanhe every day, which makes Shanhe extremely moved, really moved, which can be regarded as adding a lot of motivation to Shanhe.

Shanhe believes that as long as this book is written to the end, many valuable experiences will be summed up, and the results of the next book will definitely make great progress.

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It is written that it is late at night, and the sky outside is floating from time to time with sparkling Kong Ming lanterns, and these small Kong Ming lanterns carry the wishes of a couple of young couples.

Thinking of couples, Shanhe suddenly became extremely sad, after all, he is almost 30 years old, and it has been five or six years since he graduated from college.

Unemployed poor ** silk, destined to be despised, do you still expect to find a girlfriend, every time you see a pair of loving little couples on the street, mountains and rivers are always very yearning, if one day, mountains and rivers can also hug a beautiful girl, what a happy thing it should be!

Hehe, before I knew it, I got up again, it's not early, let's wash and sleep! I wish I could dream of a beautiful lady in my dreams.

Finally, once again, I wish you all a happy Lantern Festival and a happy Valentine's Day, ahem! Be sure to pay attention to your body!