This novel has been seen until now, and some words are not spit out or unpleasant.

Well, I'll suppress it first and then promote it, and first talk about some of my suggestions.

This is said to be quite slow, this must be admitted. Although this can better highlight the changes in the heroine's feelings, there is also a drawback that cannot be ignored, that is, many readers will be lost in the online article. In recent years, an important reason why Shuangwen can be so popular is that readers mostly read novels to pass the time. Under such a premise, novels that do not require much thought are naturally popular. Readers like the rapid development of the relationship between the hero and heroine, and the whole story can go in twists and turns, but it is better not to be complicated. And objectively evaluating the author's big novel, it is undoubtedly very different from Shuangwen. The overall trend belongs to the eloquent style, and the foreshadowing one after another also makes the novel more and more confusing. If there are some impatient readers, it is very likely that after reading the first few chapters, they will choose to abandon the text.

As for the second point, 100,000 words were written, and Nanzhu still has uncertainty, which is also very abusive~ From a certain point of view, Qianxue is quite successful, which shows that the characters created are very individual, and they are by no means the type of cannon fodder that can be seen at a glance. But could it be more abusive for readers? Easily stand in line, if you are not careful, you will be sad! So, I still hope that Qianxue will speed up the pace a little~

And this novel also has a lot of highlights.

Chiyuki is very good at setting up plots. But when a wave passes, it is often mixed with blandness. For example, after the tense atmosphere of the palace face saint, Qianxue wrote a few chapters, Ruoyun and Cheng Qinghe and Rong Ying, the three of them got along happily. It's still very warm here. Although it is quite difficult to make a few sincere friends among the princes and nobles, the simplicity of Rong Ying and Cheng Qinghe can be said to be quite healing! If you keep being bland like this, it will make people feel that it doesn't mean much. Qianxue has a big twist before the reader feels bored, and the rebellion in the capital is a big event for every character, and I have enough reason to believe that this is a small climax.

It is like this, with constant twists, that makes the reader interested in reading. The twists and turns of the plot are extremely important.

When it comes to writing, in general, Qianxue still pays attention to the description of details such as environment and psychology. The creation of the atmosphere has a good role in setting off. What impressed me was that Cheng Qingxuan and Ruoyun met in the pavilion at that time, the snow scene at that time was beautiful, and in the quiet, the relationship between the two seemed to be nothing, and the writing was very good!

The plot and environment have already been mentioned, so let's talk about the characters in the novel. Until now, there are not many characters in the book, but it is not easy to make each character remembered by readers. But now, even if it is Xiaohong, I know that she is a loyal and kind girl; And Chu Rulan is quite jealous and bullying. Even they are well written, not to mention the main characters. Therefore, Qianxue is very successful in creating characters.

If a perfect score is 10, then I would give this novel a score of 7, which is worth reading. Qianxue continues to work hard, optimistic about you~

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Qianxue language:,Thank you for the book review O(∩_∩)O~

Because of the setting, this article focuses on growth and cognition, so it is destined to be a little slower

However, Qianxue will try her best to write the essay to 8~9 points! The follow-up will be more exciting~