The latest two chapters have been deleted, but I didn't want to delete them.

I think that there is nothing wrong with the plot above, it's just that it wasn't written, and the scene switch is too fast, so the reading sense created is very poor, and I'm currently going to refine it.

So deliberately opening this single chapter, it's purely a personal complaint, and nothing else.

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First of all, the first problem point [there is no taste after going down the mountain]

I was a little confused, when I was in the mountains.

A lot of comments is, and in the nesting doll? The senior brother is finished, the second senior brother is finished, the second senior brother is finished with the third senior brother, the third senior brother is finished with the fourth senior brother, the first ten chapters are very good, and the back is constantly nesting dolls, disgusting to death.

I beg the author, it's enough to write a senior brother, a second senior brother, and a senior sister, don't repeat it, I really vomited.

When I wrote it, I saw a lot of comments like this, and I thought about it, so I wrote out the plot point of [Qingzhou Kendo] a little in advance, in fact, I originally planned to go to the Qingzhou Kendo Conference after the third senior brother appeared.

Now I run out again and say that I don't have any taste, and I want to see the protagonist shock the senior brother in the sect.

I understand this mentality, eating green vegetables at the beginning feels very refreshing and delicious! After eating for seven days, I vomited, and suddenly changed the plate of radish, although I don't necessarily like to eat radish, but compared to green vegetables, I can still accept radish.

It's just that I ate too many turnips, and I immediately missed the greens again.

But can you please stop posting some of these comments.

It's hard to reconcile, and I even saw two groups of readers spraying each other in the book review section, who should I help? Ask yourself? Two book friends with different opinions quarreled, who should I help? Or rather, who should I stand by?

Writing a book is like going to a restaurant for dinner, every once in a while there will be a different dish, occasionally interspersed with the same dish, some dishes are delicious, and some dishes may not be to the taste, which is normal.

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The second question [Su Changyu has too many scenes]

Su Changyu does have a lot of scenes.

Maybe he's a special person, and he's an important character for me.

It can be said that in the first million words, Su Changyu played an extremely big role, so I couldn't help but write more of his story, and some of it will be slightly cut later.

But there's one more thing.

Online novels, often two or three million words, three or four million words.

This is another funny Xiuxian text, and there are always people who use this book to benchmark the traditional Xiuxian text.

Since it's a funny article, what's the most important?

The character design and plot are the most important.

How did the character design come about?

Can you write out the character design in one sentence?

I don't have that ability, I can't do it, so I don't expect this book to be super invincible.

If you want to write a character with flesh and blood, a character, and a three-dimensional appearance in your mind, you can only describe it with words.

Then you can't save trouble.

Su Changyu's character is that he likes to pretend to beep, and he can skip the meal, but he can't pretend to beep.

said that pretending to be embarrassed, the main reasons are two, one is that the foreshadowing is insufficient, which leads to too abrupt cuts, and the second is that it has not been completely recognized, this book is a funny Xiuxian text.

It's a bit stingy.

In some Japanese comics, the protagonist pretends to be embarrassed, obviously his strength is not good, standing in front of the boss, forcibly hot-blooded, 'I want to protect this world', and then accompanied by background music.

Moment.

Audience: "6666666"

Audience: "It's so hot-blooded, I'm crying!" Woooooooooooooooo Riman is awesome! ”

Audience: "Look at the domestic ones, and then look at the people, this is flesh and blood, woo woo, I'm crying!" ”

No, double standard, no?

Besides, I'm not hot-blooded, it's purely funny, bizarre plot, plus a certain amount of rationality, to create a sense of contrast.

Outcome......

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Question 3 [Update Question]

This book is already 220,000 words!

I don't mean anything else, you can take a look at the books that hit the shelves on September 1st.

You can see the list of new books on the monthly ticket.

Most of the public chapters are basically 20~23W words on the shelves.

Some are even more ruthless, and 189,000 words will be put on the shelves.

The book is still 22 days away from being released, and it will be on the shelves on October 1st.

According to the daily update of 6,000 words, there are still 130,000 words to write.

Converted, 350,000 words on the shelves.

How do you let me explode?

Seeing the latest chapter, it's even more painful to wait every day, this dark night understands, but I can't help this thing.

In the case of uploading two updates every day, you have to write the story well, and you can't break the update, how to write it?

I knew this earlier, and I was forced to put it on the shelves on September 1st, and I have been planning to do it all night, and after it is put on the shelves, it will be updated with 15,000 words every day.

Slow update,I'm not comfortable either.,The update of the big brother in the last book exploded.,Old readers have also seen it.,There are no 20,000 words a day.,But 13,10,000 a day is still no problem.。

If you really don't have the patience to wait, you can wait until October 1st to see, the text is coherent, and it is comfortable to read, so as not to see a similar place, suddenly gone, uncomfortable.

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The fourth question [collapsed and collapsed]

When I woke up at eight o'clock in the morning and opened the book review area, there were a few readers who I didn't know what was going on, and where they were singing.

Collapsed, collapsed, the book collapsed.

I wondered.

The power system seems to be very stable.

The money system doesn't write anything at all.

There are only a few characters.

It's yesterday's plot, pretending to be forced in Qingzhou, causing the resonance of the flying sword in the ancient city of Qingzhou, which is also called collapse?

Then you haven't seen the collapse of the more, the beginning of the recitation of the Tao Te Ching, the sky is falling, the universe is collapsing, the earth is surging golden lotus, and the gods and Buddhas are illusory. (Ordinary Big Brother).

I have written 1.5 million words of this kind of book, how can anyone still like to sing about it?

I've deleted all of these posts.

If you read it, you can definitely not decide whether it will collapse or not, and it will take at least three plots to see whether this book has collapsed or not.

I'm not angry, I just made it clear, otherwise I would have deleted the post in a back, and there would be black fans who would have jumped out to say it.

Accusations? Delete a post? Hehe, dog author!

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The last question [foreshadowing question]

I'd love to explain this question.

I really like foreshadowing when writing books.

Lay the groundwork for things, and then go to pretend to beep, so that the plot is not too abrupt and the pretending to beep is too blunt.

So I spend a lot of time laying out the plot.

Venue description!

Character reaction!

Cause!

What just happened!

What is everyone's mental thoughts!

I will write it very clearly, and for the reader, it may be ten lines at a glance, and when I read it, I at least know it in my heart, and I probably know a little.

But well, whenever I lay the groundwork, there are always readers who stand up and say it.

"Wow! Water water! ”

"Nima, what are you writing in these two chapters? I don't know what you're writing, but I can summarize the above two sentences after writing for a long time, XXXX, XXXXX. ”

"Can you stop the water?"

"Abandoned, abandoned."

Foreshadowing and abandoning?

I just want to see the beep.

forcibly pretended to be beep, and felt embarrassed again.

At the end of the day, I don't think it's a problem for the reader.

Web novel, dish is the original sin.

To put it simply, it is that the night is not written well, which is a confession of punishment and a confession of mistakes.

But a large part of the factor is due to [update issues]

Well, everyone is waiting with anticipation for 12 o'clock, reading the latest chapter, just to see if there is any story happening.

As a result, I clicked on it and looked at it, both chapters were paving, and the pretending plot had to wait until tomorrow, and in an instant, the mood was extremely unbearable.

If there are more than a dozen chapters in the back, it's nothing, Meizizi, keep reading, it's good to have a cool point.

But if it's only two chapters, no matter how good the mood is, it's going to be melancholy.

On this issue, the only thing that Dark Night can do is to wait for the shelves to explode and make up for the shortness of the public period.

Of course, readers and gentlemen really can't accept it, just fatten up, wait until the National Day, and then come and take a look.

This book is on the shelves on October 1st!

It's time for the book to be at its most tormenting and embarrassing.

Encouragement outweighs blame.

I hope that all readers can give their opinions, rather than spraying it and finishing it.

Thank you!