The first volume was written, accumulating 17.5W words.

In the control, even more than a part, originally the first volume was intended to write 150,000 words, an extra 25,000 words, which is a normal length.

Because there is a big brother in the previous book as a negative teaching material, the new book has done a lot of work.

The first volume of 'Ye Ping Xiuxian' is actually the opening story and introduction, I hope you can give it a score.

Ten points, where there are problems, you can also leave a message in the score column below.

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【Scoring Column】

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Let's give the first volume an 8 for myself in the night.

Originally, I wanted to give myself a score of 7, but the main thing was that 'everything is difficult at the beginning', and I scrapped twelve beginnings, so I added an extra point to myself.

The three points deducted are the three points deducted on [Details], [Rhythm], and [Character Design].

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Looking back, there are many problems in the first volume, the simplest is the 'information' problem, which has not been revealed, and most of the chapters are used to shape the character and write the beginning, and there is not much foreshadowing, which may have something to do with the writing style.

I rarely write in the first volume, I like to set up a [core point] when writing books, and everything is done around this core point.

I know very well what the core of my first volume is, and it is difficult to develop other foreshadowing, and it is precisely like this, 175,000 words, the protagonist is still in a sect, and he does not have any understanding of the outside world.

But all the stories in the first volume are for the second volume.

The second volume is about fighting with people, and it's a lot of fun, all kinds of people will appear, funny characters, pretending characters, and the second volume is also the one I used to spread out the follow-up worldview.

Basically, whether this book can be written long or not depends on the reaction of the second volume.

I won't say much about the specifics, so as not to spoil them.

So thank you to all the readers who are still supporting this book so far, thank you!

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[2] This book has been revised again and again, and the practice of qi has been changed from 365 times to 36 times to be completed, looking back, 365 times is indeed very cool, but the problem is that it is estimated to collapse! So it was revised to 36 times, which is still strong, but not so scary.

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[3] This book will be on the shelves in the early morning of the National Day on October 1st, so there is still a month of free public period, so you must remember to subscribe and support when you are busy! On the National Day, the readers are responsible for enjoying the holiday, and the night is responsible for making the readers have a happy holiday.

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【Silence Mode】

Because this book has come to a group of book friends with very low quality.

Most of the posts are, I'm super unhappy to watch, Nima ******! That's probably the kind of rhetoric.

Book review area,Naturally, there are good and bad,This is clear in the night.,But rational discussion,So-and-so character is disgusting.,So-and-so character is not good.,There's no need for a certain plot to appear.,This kind of comment appears.,Even if it's a spray night.,I won't delete the post.。

Truth be told, it's naturally good to have opinions.

But this kind, I don't like to read this book, this book is too cerebral palsy, this book XXXX, this kind of thing will be banned in the future.

Radish and cabbage have their own loves, if you don't like it, you don't want to watch it, it's like if you ask a macho man like me to watch Duomi, I definitely can't accept it, but sit down, Duomi's TV series is not for adults.

You can't say that people are bad, because people are not for adults at all.

The book of cultivating immortals itself is for the public to read, a little white, a little relaxed, and I feel very sweet in the dark night.

I don't like to click a fork, change the book to read, and I don't have more than one book, so I have to spray a sentence to make me seem superior?

The key road is as eternal as the long night?

I like to spray so much, go and be a fountain!

Therefore, this kind of remarks, when you see it in the future, you can only cry and silence.

Rational discussion, unhappy spray two sentences fully accepted.

Just because it's not suitable for people who don't like to watch, spray it, isn't this just people who don't like to eat tofu brains, spraying tofu brains for a reason?

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Here's a list of last week's tips and thanks

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I flipped through 78 pages, with 10 names on each page, and it would have taken me more than three hours to type them all by hand.

The most terrifying thing is that when you see this chapter, you have to turn at least 30 pages or more.

So I sincerely thank every reader who has given a tip.

I'm crying, there are too many people, in order to apologize, there will be one more chapter tomorrow, which will be counted as compensation!

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New week!

Kneel and beg for a recommendation ticket!

Kneel and beg for a small tip!

Don't tell me that you will be next time, because you may not be next time!

Crying baby in the night!

Say goodbye!