The second volume, with a total of forty-five chapters, has a cumulative number of 15,000 words, and the outline is expected to be 150,000 words, with 35,000 words cut.

Originally, the content of the second volume was to set up the character of [Su Changyu], and at the same time it was biased towards the [pretending to beep]-[funny] style.

Maybe it's because I've been watching sand sculpture type anime when I'm thinking about the second volume, so it's a little offset.

Writing a book is writing a book, anime is an anime, an anime episode, twenty minutes, but this episode may have to write seven chapters and eight chapters, and the most important thing is that you have to be coherent, so it leads to misunderstandings.

For the second volume, the night gave himself a four. (10 points)

And I added an extra point for the first volume.

Mom sells batches, and if you really want to reflect that something is good, you have to find something worse than him.

I thought that the first volume was average, seven and a half points, but I didn't expect the second volume to be pulled directly, resulting in extra points in the first volume, and the air was cold and shivering.

Fortunately, however, there are no [fundamental errors] in the second volume.

The so-called fundamental mistake is that [the system collapsed] - [the sense of expectation collapsed], these two points are taboos in writing a book, the system collapses, it will affect the rhythm of the whole book, and the sense of expectation collapses, and the book is ruined.

The second volume, which belongs to [Tasteless Food, It's a Pity to Abandon It], there is nothing wrong with it, but it just isn't very good-looking, and this is clear in the night.

So the third volume [Jin State Academy], I plan to get all the feelings of the first volume back, it should be beep, the sect is funny and funny every day, but the protagonist will not join the Jin State Academy, the reason why it is called the Jin Kingdom Academy, is just a volume that opens the worldview.

Of course, the popularity of this book is indeed declining at the moment, partly because the second volume has no flavor, but there is also the biggest factor.

Drag!

As an author, I'm sorry.

Starting from the first one, the daily update is two chapters, although the word count is okay, but for a book that wants to write long, it is still a relaxed Xianxia text, and it has to open up the world pattern, and it has to write a good plot, and it has to have a sense of expectation, and it is cool, so you can only rely on [a large number of updates] to fill in the early plot push.

But during the public period, the current number of words has exceeded 300,000, and theoretically 200,000 words have been put on the shelves, and 100,000 words have been dragged out.

But there are still eight days left before the book is on the shelves.

10.1 on the shelves.

It is also lest readers, old men, read two chapters a day, and don't know what loneliness they read.

What can skyrocket in the dark is that after it is put on the shelves, it is about 5,000 words per chapter as much as possible, and three or four more per day as much as possible.

Ahem, meanwhile, the third volume of serialization begins tomorrow.

The third volume is for the trouble of readers, give me more opinions.

is close to the shelves, so the plot must be both rich and attentive.

But it's about to be put on the shelves, so everyone will speak more, leave this chapter to say, and leave a footprint.

If the third volume can't bring back everyone's sense of expectation, then the night can only cry and go back to inherit hundreds of billions of family property.

Butler: "Young master, the master said that he admitted his mistake, please go back to take charge of the group!" ”

Bodyguard: "Join the Night King!" ”

Villain Fu Second Generation: "What? You're the King of the Night? ”

Brother-in-law: "Aren't you the son-in-law of the Ye family?" How did you become the King of the Night? ”

The night crooked his mouth and smiled: "Just the Ye family, don't wait!" ”

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