Chapters 86-87 have been revised.

The first version, which is biased towards being funny and pretending to be a beep.

The second version, which is biased towards rationality and fluidity.

Funny and pretending to be funny, it will inevitably reduce the rationality, but increase the fun, but because of the hasty design, the rationality is very low, resulting in some readers being dissatisfied, and there are some difficult trade-offs in the dark night, and finally under the condition that the general plot remains unchanged, it has been adjusted and modified.

Reasonable and fluent, it will inevitably reduce the interest, plus the rewriting of two chapters, there must be some errors, but at least the circle has passed, plus it is smoother, for readers who have not read the first version, the second version will not be very problematic, but for readers who have read the first version, the second version must be a little unfriendly, so it will cause a lot of disputes.

After thinking about it for a day, I basically set the tone for myself, and at the same time I will explain a little bit to the majority of readers.

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This book is a funny immortal cultivation novel, at least the front must be like this, so as an author who is slightly good at writing funny immortal cultivation, the night knows very well that writing this kind of novel will inevitably reduce the 'rationality'.

It's like, a gust of wind blows, and the protagonist immediately understands that it must be outrageous if it is a traditional immortal cultivation novel, but it is very reasonable to put it on the channel of [Light Novel], which is like a cat and a mouse, in a hurry, the cat can fly, and suddenly finds himself in the sky, and immediately falls down a truth.

The focus is on creating "funny", not around "reasonable".

It's like, in yesterday's chapter, the night added a sentence 'Brother Changsheng, save me', this Changsheng is the protagonist of my last book, but this book is a separate book, there is no difference from the previous book, just to 'play with memes'.

The most difficult thing about the meme essay is that the reader doesn't know the stalk, so he may not feel the laughter, but there is no way, since it is a funny article, he has to write the stalk, and if he doesn't write the stalk, he will have no taste.

Secondly, after yesterday's episode, the night also realized that it paid too much attention to the feelings of some readers, so the article was changed back and forth.

Excellence is a good thing, but excellence is theoretically the development of the plot, not part of the rationality, and it is a funny article in itself, pretending to be the end, and it is impossible for every reader to accept it.

There are many readers in the book review area, who like the bar very much, and they have to make a 'reason why it is so', and they have to use 'traditional immortal cultivation' to benchmark 'funny immortal cultivation', and they always feel that this is unreasonable, that is unreasonable.

is like the role of Su Changyu, saying that the supporting role is bigger than the protagonist, and the protagonist has fewer roles, but on the contrary, why don't you feel that the role of 'Su Changyu' has been completely established?

In a novel of millions of words, the time for the protagonist to play is more than enough, and the whole text is only one protagonist, and after writing a book, I remember the protagonist alone, which is not interesting.

If you really want to see the invincible text of the protagonist dragging the cool bully, I believe that there is a lot of search.

One thing to say, the night was indeed somewhat affected, but after a day of thinking, the night set its own tone.

[Funny], [Character Design], [Interesting Plot] are the mainstays.

[Reasonable], [Logical], [Setting] are supplemented.

To put it bluntly, it's nonsensical and funny.

It's like some nonsensical movies, the actor Chow Yun-fat, looking at the supporting actor and saying: "You think you are Chow Yun-fat?" ”

But yesterday's draft, since it has been changed, it will not be changed again, and the tone behind it is currently determined.

If I have to regard this book as a 'traditional cultivation of immortals', then I can only say that you are not suitable for reading light novels, and I feel very uncomfortable, but I will not accept this opinion anymore.

You have to compare milk tea with black tea, even if I use the way of boiling tea to make milk tea, in the end, it must be different, and readers on both sides are not pleased.

The theme of this book is [light novel].

Then this book is in the direction of [light novel].

Funny, nonsensical, and occasionally pretending.

Finally, I would like to invite the elder brother to speak.

Su Changyu: "I see that you are destined, if you can vote for a recommendation, I will give you an opportunity." ”