After all the revisions are completed, let's send a single chapter

Let's talk about the difference between the revised manuscript first.

Difference 1: changed from swordsmanship to sword intent, and then changed from sword intent to sword moves, a set of swordsmanship has 1,460 sword moves, the more sword moves comprehended, the higher the completeness of this set of swordsmanship, and the higher the realm of swordsmanship, there must be logical problems, but at least it's okay, after all, you can't use other works to measure this work, and there must be problems with comparing the Honghuang system with the Journey to the West system.

Difference 2: Before the modification, the protagonist's talent has not been revealed, which makes it very difficult to promote the plot, and suppresses the cool point, and by the way, the water is a mess, after the modification, from the ninth chapter, the protagonist shows his talent, the senior brother is shocked, and the head also knows, and decides to carry out the fool to the end, but will give all the resources to the protagonist, and do his best.

Let's focus on this paragraph.,There are a few.,It's a few readers who left a message saying that they feel that the sect is pitting the protagonist.,There are two problems here.,The first is that I haven't shaped it well.,In fact, I want to write a kind of daily funny.,But it may be inappropriate to use the words to cause disgust.,But the second aspect is,There are also people who deliberately pick thorns.,Feel that the protagonist's future has been delayed.,But the problem is that the book is set.,The protagonist participated in fifty immortal ascension conferences.,It's a recruitment conference.,The result is that there is no sect to want.,So no matter what the talent of the protagonist is,What can you do? No one wants you, what can you do if you are a talent? You can't get stronger for no reason, right? Take the pen to you, you to write? This spray spot was unnecessary, so I deleted this post, thinking that I was deliberately looking for trouble.

Taihua Daoist and Su Changyu's attitude towards the protagonist,At first, I hoped that the protagonist would stay a little longer.,Don't think we're garbage and leave.,Later, after knowing that it's a genius.,Do your best to help the protagonist.,But some readers have a kind of hope.,I hope that the Taihua Taoist people will give the protagonist to other sects.,Don't delay the protagonist's practice.,I feel very puzzled.,As long as it's a protagonist with three views.,Even if you know it's a scam.,Won't leave, right? Or is that sentence, no one wants it, the sect chooses to help you when you are down, and you run away immediately if you are bullish? Isn't this villainy?

In addition, the sect didn't harm the protagonist at all, the main reason is that the sect is poor, and the head of the sect can't eat enough and don't have enough clothes and warmth, and it's not that the head of the sect has big fish and meat, and the protagonist suffers from the cold?

These are the two differences.

And a little bit more extraneous.

There are some readers of the big brother in the book review area, because the book on the night is not finished and double-opened, all kinds of complaints, which is ashamed of the night.

But the senior brother must finish the book next year, and the specific reason is inconvenient to disclose here, and there is only about 200,000 content in the follow-up, and there is no eunuch, because the idea is good, but when it is written, there is always an uncomfortable feeling, perhaps because of the later stage.

So everyone scolded and endured the night.

But there are some black fans, deliberately bringing rhythm, this is not necessary, right?

I'm not the first double author at the starting point?

1.5 million words, big brother, isn't much, but at least it's not too little, right?

If I want to be the first double-open author at the starting point, you spray, I'll shut up.

But the problem is that now there are many double-open authors, three-open ones, and even eunuchs who have to keep opening new books.

I have made a guarantee that the senior brother will finish the book at the right time next year, I don't know the details, it depends on the arrangement.

Immediately after that, another batch of NT rhythm dogs appeared.

I didn't even read the book, so I sprayed [It's a mentally handicapped little white text again], [It's the same routine again], [It's just a bad money again]

Fifty percent of them are fellow authors, and when you click on the opening picture, you can see the very eye-catching words 'China Literature Writer', most of whom are eunuchs who have not signed a contract or written 350,000 words.

Slander or something, I'm used to the last book.

New books are coming?

It's also really idle time.

Whether it's peers or not, or whether it's some black fans who deliberately have a rhythm.

Don't talk about the words of the mentally handicapped Xiaobaiwen when you open your mouth and close your mouth, there are few books at the starting point that dare to claim that it is not Xiaobaiwen, as long as it is Shuangwen, it is Xiaobaiwen.

Besides, don't have any sense of superiority, after reading a few books, I feel that I am superior, and I look down on Xiao Baiwen, which is like playing LOL, I went to Ionia, and I felt that other clothes were wild clothes, superior to others, what are you doing with this thing? Key to come?

Without Xiaobaiwen, can the online article be accepted by the majority of readers?

It's understandable that you don't like to read Xiaobaiwen, after all, their reading ideas are different, but don't forget what type of book you read when you read online texts.

The most disgusting thing is this, after reading a few books, I feel that I am superior, I look down on this and look down on that,

And spray me just rotten money.

I'm also a little confused, this hasn't been put on the shelves yet, even if it's just bad money? I feel like I'm going to pounce, and it's just bad money?

And.

Ask.

If you can just mess with money, who will stand up and say that I don't like bad money?

Again.

I wrote the book word by word, whose rotten money is it?

If it is not well written, no one will spend a penny.

If it is well written, someone will give money.

With a bit of logic spray.

In the future, when I saw this kind of illogical black fan in the book review area, I could only delete it, and I didn't want to keep it for the New Year.

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