First of all, the first question is.

The protagonist is a bit silly, and he didn't write the image I wanted to express, and at the same time, it may be a problem to write about the later stage of the big brother, and it is easy to write a lot of things that should not be written, resulting in poor plot coherence and weakened sense of expectation in the plot!

Chapter 9 The protagonist's talent is revealed, and in order to suppress the plot, the dark night deliberately drags on, causing the reader to be very unhappy with it, and the sense of expectation is instantly weakened, although some readers say that they can accept it, but writing a book is for the public, plus I asked many authors in the industry to help me read it, and asked the editor to help me stare at the manuscript carefully, and the opinions given were unanimous.

The second problem is that the supporting characters write more scenes than the main characters.

This may be because I wanted to set up a good character too much, but I entered a misunderstanding, and after realizing it, I decided to change these two problems.

The book has already been signed.

In addition, the current pen name is also a bit famous.

So there is no eunuch running away.

Please rest assured, readers.

It's nothing more than wanting to get better, after all, the second book is more important than the first.

As much as possible, it will be restored to 50,000 words within two days.

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Discussion thread,If you have something you want to say, you can say it here.,Let's talk about some shortcomings.。

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"No one really thinks it's difficult to cultivate immortals" to change two fatal problems! Change one chapter and one chapter, stay up late to change! I am hitting it in my hand, please wait a moment,

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