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First of all, update the question.,Thank you for your tolerance and understanding.,After dealing with this matter, you can save the manuscript.。
Secondly, let's talk about the plot problem, I've read all the comments, and I will probably reply to it, and also say what I want to say.
I think Ace's death is the best.,You can't let the protagonist kill it himself.,Isn't that character going to collapse?,The protagonist's strength is not strong.,Really,It's not a general yet.,In this kind of top-level battlefield,Of course, it's safety.。
He also did what he should do, ensuring that the casualties of the navy would not be too large, as for the frontal white beard or something, the protagonist's personality does not allow him to do this, fight a few captains, and don't let the straw hat save Ace, which is in line with others.
Also, someone always asks me to write about getting rid of the straw hat, killing the black beard or something, which doesn't fit the protagonist's personality.
Why did he take out the Straw Hat? He won't do such a troubled thing.
Blackbeard and the others are not weak, they are not so easy to fight, they are all repeat offenders of the sixth layer.
I've been pointing out a long time ago that the battle of One Piece is boiling, dragging each other, and whoever is careless and who is physically exhausted will lose.
Or maybe it's the magic of ability, which can gain the upper hand, but if you want to say that you can do it in seconds, it's not true.
Of course,I don't understand One Piece.,I really don't understand.,I'll write it as soon as I break it.,I know that you guys know better than me.,So,You go to the post bar and flip through it.,Discuss who's the strongest.,Who's the most dick.,That place is in line with the battlefield of the masters.,Or go out and turn right to a certain Lu.,There are guys who like to see.。
I have a small temple here, and I can't withstand the pressure of the old man.
There is also the kind of navy that is all on, the three major generals plus the Kapu plus the national plus the vice admiral plus the protagonist to unify their efforts, first solve the white regiment and then solve the black regiment and then solve the red regiment, there is really no way to write, my shallow retarded logic makes me feel that doing so will only make the navy suffer heavy losses, and then cheap those pirates who are about to surge.
And the protagonist's physique is peculiar, let Blackbeard bow down, kill Whitebeard and give him the shock fruit to eat, the protagonist Piao Piao adds shock, his mentality explodes, he breaks away from the navy, and accepts Blackbeard to create the Golden Cigar Pirates.
Beat Kaido today, subdue the three plagues, step on the aunt tomorrow, worship the second card, unify the new world, fight a decisive battle with the Draconians, and then become the new Yimu or something, yes, not with me, there are many good books, I have a bad book, only follow the original book.
All I can write about is that the protagonist and William next door open a chain service after retirement, selling fresh food in the bathhouse.
That's it, thank you guys for your support.
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