“…… I dare not raise my voice, for fear of frightening the people in heaven. ”

As Zhu Yuanshi finished his thoughts, some people's faces showed amazement and joy, while others frowned.

An excellent five-word and four-sentence poem that conforms to the norms of poetry.

There is the heroism of ordinary people in the poem.

But there is a sense of awe in the poem.

For everyone, if this poem is hung in the stargazing tower, it means that the attitude is sincere and fearful.

The stargazing tower can measure the heaven and the earth, measure the land, how can there be a reason not to speak loudly.

Datang is not afraid of the heavenly people, otherwise he would not have killed the Dragon King of Jinghe ruthlessly.

This is the human realm, not the immortal court, even if the immortals descend to earth, they need to abide by the rules of the Tang Dynasty.

With such confidence, it has become a joke to be afraid of the heavenly people.

Poetry is good poetry, but the poet's class is lower, it is difficult to see the whole picture, and the poetry is biased.

A rare masterpiece, but also as uncomfortable as chewing wax.

"Li Taibai?"

Zhu Yuanshi finished reading.

He looked at the signature and looked at Li Hongru, whose face was covered with black ink.

The contrast between the other party's name and face is too great, which makes him unforgettable.

The other party was wearing a four-door hall student uniform.

Looking at the roughness of the hands and feet, this is obviously not caused by martial arts training.

Although he was mixed with Wei Chi Baolin, Rong Caijun and others, the other party's birth class was obviously low, and it was most likely only at the level of petty officials and civilians, and he needed to be busy with labor.

The Four Doors Pavilion recruits outstanding civilians all year round, and this is probably an outstanding one.

These civilians will continue to be replenished to the official level below the seventh rank, acting as the underlying support force of the imperial dynasty.

But this group of people has limited contact, and it is difficult to understand what is going on at the top.

From the other party's point of view, this is a good five-character poem, which is rare.

But from their point of view, no matter how good the poem is, it can only be abandoned.

Zhu Yuanshi had a trace of reluctance in his heart, and casually took the initiative to read it out, he wanted to hear other people's opinions.

"It's good, but it's hard to do."

The long-bearded and long-faced official who had previously reminded Yu Chi Baolin's identity sighed with regret.

"It's a pity that this literary style" Another person frowned, "This is the best poem we have seen since the competition." ”

"Simple but not simple, catchy, it's a pity, I am personally willing to publish ten taels of silver to include this poem, which can be regarded as living up to this talent."

"Brother Deyan, it's just that this poem is passed on among the people, I'm afraid there is something wrong with us."

"It's a pity!"

Several auditors looked at each other left and right, and couldn't help but sigh when they whispered.

"Lord Presiding Judge, is this poem worthless?"

Hearing Zhu Yuanshi call himself, and looking at the faces of several reviewers, Li Hongru's face gradually moved from joy to trough.

He had already copied a pretty good poem about a tall building.

This is the work of the great poet Li Bai.

Li Hongru is not sure whether the other party is in this world, but he has not read this kind of poetry when he was studying, and Li Bai's masterpiece can obviously be used for the competition.

It's just that Li Hongru never thought that Li Bai's poems would fall off the list.

He also wanted to get some money for Li Baoguo.

"This poem is good," Zhu Yuanshi shook his head and said, "But this poem is not suitable for the Stargazing Tower." ”

"Do you think I'm saying it's a dangerous building?" Li Hongru asked, "Can I replace the dangerous building with other words?" ”

Li Hongru thought about his 'Yongji', which was the first time he imitated, and he modified it a lot, almost making Luo Bingwang's song of the goose unrecognizable.

He is not a person who follows the rules and pursues the perfection of the original poem, and the change of poetry is not a big problem.

"The problem of a dangerous building or not is not a dangerous building," Zhu Yuanshi said: "It's just that the last two sentences don't match." ”

"Don't dare to speak loudly, for fear of frightening the heavenly people, Brother Hongru, let's ......"

Rong Caijun on the side listened to it for a while, and finally realized that something was wrong.

He pointed to the sky, and then to the stargazing tower and the two of them.

It is normal for normal people to be afraid, and it is okay to be afraid of people in the sky, but there is no need to be afraid of the stargazing tower, and the emperor does not need to be frightened.

No matter how good this poem is, the stargazing tower can't be used.

If it weren't for Yu Chi Baolin by his side, Li Hongru was afraid that this poem would be thrown into the straw basket after reading it several times.

"Then I'll change it!"

Knowing the key issue, Li Hongru immediately picked up the pen.

He made a mistake in direction.

If the opponent caught such a trick in the era of the literary prison, it would be dead.

Li Hongru couldn't help but feel a little apprehensive in his heart.

The environment and context are different, and even the poems have different meanings.

He felt that he needed to be very careful when 'borrowing' to avoid suffering.

His mention of the pen made several censors interested.

When Li Hongru replaced the word 'heaven' with 'palace', everyone's faces suddenly became weird.

"A heroic poem of ordinary people has become a great poem that you and I need in a blink of an eye."

"The dangerous building is 100 feet high, you can pick the stars with your hands, you don't dare to speak loudly, you are afraid of the people in the palace, and my king is afraid that he will scold people when he hears it."

"It's also a good thing to be reasonable."

When the immortal court was replaced by the imperial dynasty, the idea of this poem changed greatly.

Li Hongru smiled awkwardly, but he couldn't care about it.

Sycophant poetry is sycophant poetry, it is better than worthless.

He came here to exchange some money to subsidize the family, where to care so much.

As long as the stargazing tower gives money, he can still change it.

Carefully painted the word 'heavenly' into a black circle, and Li Hongru suddenly felt that the evidence of his misdirection had been destroyed.

He stood quietly at this time, waiting for a few adults to speak, and when they saw it, he could send a few taels of silver.

When the examiners laughed and talked, Li Chunfeng also came over.

This Qin Tianjian Taizheng's face was very bad.

If only he could break his wealth and avoid disaster, he is now not only ruined, but also suffered.

Last night, it was raided by the old dragon of Jinghe, and the loss of the stargazing tower was great.

But compared to the Jinghe Dragon King running into the palace to spread wild, the trouble falling on the stargazing tower has a bit of value.

The disaster of the stargazing tower is not limited to the current one, since the construction of this high-rise building, it has inevitably encountered some disasters.

Some people say that this is because the stargazing tower is too high, covering the palace, and it will inevitably be damaged under the hustle and bustle.

Some people also mentioned that the Imperial City was suppressed by the luck of the Son of Heaven, and the Stargazing Tower inherited the heaven and earth, and Li Chunfeng was difficult to suppress.

But the stargazing tower is not high.

A lot of research has to be done on this tall building, and it needs to be of sufficient height.

The Stargazing Tower is also responsible for scouting and supervising parts of Chang'an.

Li Chunfeng's melancholy face was almost wrinkled into a withered chrysanthemum.

Seeing that everyone was discussing it easily, and sweeping away the previous dullness, he couldn't help but feel a little interested.

"Can you still change this poem of whiskers?"

When Li Chunfeng inserted, he was listening to Zhu Yuanshi's question.

"If you're not satisfied, I'll change it."

For a reasonable income, Li Hongru also racked his brains.

It is not easy for a scholar to make some extra reasonable money, and this kind of scene that requires poetry is rare, and he must go home today with some tattoo silver.

"Cheng, you change the last two sentences, let's see the effect" Zhu Yuanshi said with a smile.

Immediately, he saw Li Hongru lift the brush and make a small poem on the rice paper.

It is still the beginning of 'the dangerous building is 100 feet high, and you can pick the stars with your hands'.

But the last two couplets have become 'Destitute Thousand Miles, and go to the next level.' ’

This is to encourage the dilapidated building to build an additional floor.

Everyone read a few sentences and couldn't help laughing at each other.

This poem has the meaning of double superposition, but it is not the confession of ordinary people's mentality like before.

But the last two sentences are also rare good words.

It's just a little weird, and it seems to be patchwork.

The poems can be used, and they are a little awkward, but in general, they can be put into the library for screening.

"I think this one is good."

Li Chunfeng pointed to the poems of 'frightened palace people', he just needed such a pair of flattering poems.

The stargazing tower is too tall.

Li Chunfeng looked at it with his eyes and saw that the luck of the imperial city was as fierce as cooking oil on fire.

This is a scene that only exists in the prosperous imperial dynasty.

And on the edge of the imperial city, the stargazing tower is a pillar of optimus, which is unique and independent.

It is inevitable to prevent disasters in case of trouble, and it is natural to be robbed by disasters.

If this poetic practice is hung, the stargazing tower will be lower than the palace, and it may be more peaceful in the future.