This is the author's first book.,In the words of a sharp spit master in the QQ group.,The poisonous point that newcomers can step on.,The author stepped on it all over.。。

From the beginning I wanted to write by myself, to now the enthusiastic book friends in the QQ group have put forward many sharp and useful suggestions.

So, the author chose to retake the syllabus.

The book has passed the last few chapters, and there are many problems that the author did not take into account when conceiving the book.

First, the system seriously affects the storyline.

The powerful system dominates, and the author, although barely in control, decides to downplay the existence of the system.

Here, I apologize to the book lovers who like the system. It's my lack of pen power that makes the reader's pleasure suffer.

Second, the reaction of the cut chapter is far beyond the author's imagination.

Because of the expansion of system attributes, the author tried to limit the growth of charisma by using the writing method of first suppressing and then rising, which led to serious dissatisfaction among book lovers.

This is due to my vague and unclear positioning of this book, and I do not take into account the emotional investment of many book friends, and I sincerely apologize again.

After that, I will gradually eliminate the negative effect of cutting faces, and abandon the restrictions on the charisma value of the system.

Maybe the protagonist's super high appearance will become a bug and poison point in the follow-up of this book.

But that was the fundamental flaw in my initial outline design, and I couldn't do anything about it, and I wasn't prepared to resist.

As the saying goes, whatever you have made an appointment, you have to finish it with tears.

Third, the shirt brother who will appear in the Echizen chapter will become the shirt sister, which is the most important reason for the outline overhaul.

QQ group book friends warned me that if I put JJ on my shirt sister, I might encounter a situation where I cut off a chapter.

I'll admit, I'm scared.

Sometimes it's quite touching to think about it.,Others write that Japan's Warring States are all men.,There's a shirt sister.。

I wrote that Japan's Warring States were all women, and there was a shirt brother.

I'm a little frustrated by this, but I'm even more afraid of the repetition of the criticism of the face-cutting chapter.

I'm a fragile kid who just wants to write a book that's fun for everyone to enjoy rather than scolded.

Finally, I would like to thank you for your enthusiasm, because with your participation, I can write so energetically.

Bow in thanks.