Summary at the end of the volume.
In my own opinion, this volume is a little less exciting than the first volume, but it is also within my expectations.
Because this volume was originally the first copy of the book.
It's just that in a discussion with the editor, he said that this first volume is a small mountain village, and it is an original copy, so it is not so eye-catching at the beginning.
An ordinary young author like me, if the first volume is not bright enough, the data of the new book period will not be too good, and many recommendations will not be ranked, so he hopes that I will start with a bright enough start.
In the case of light novels, it is recommended that I start with a Japanese copy.
But I put that copy in the back.,So I asked how about using the Republic of China Demon Capital.。
Later, after discussion, the Republic of China was put in the first volume.
Along with this, the outline was revised.
This is also normal, writing, it is a process of continuous compromise, ordinary authors do not have the capital to pave too much in the early stage, this is also a helpless thing.
You say that I look good in the back, but if the early stage is not exciting enough, readers will not have the patience to wait until the back, because I am like that.
Unless it's a great god or a platinum writer, I have the patience to wait, because I know that they will probably be more exciting in the future, so I am willing to endure the slow heating in the early stage.
So you can see that the first two copies are actually short copies.
One has more than twenty chapters, one has more than thirty chapters.
The dungeon map is one mansion and the other is a small mountain village.
But I think it's okay, at least the pits that should be dug have been dug, in fact, "hell" is not so simple, and the protagonist's problems and the like, why Miss An and Dafeng can see the protagonist's life trajectory and so on, as well as the problem of the blind date APP.
Then I think both copies are quite smooth, at least there is no hydrological nonsense, but the plot has been developing, and the protagonist has been doing things.
Including the transformation of the protagonist's personality is also a process of development.
After all, the driving force behind his blind date was that he was mentally polluted.
The careful protagonist of the first volume slowly becomes crazy but still normal, why is the first volume more tense? Because in the first volume, he dealt with weird things as an ordinary person.
So it belongs to being whipped away.
The second volume is written in a different way, and this change comes from the change in the character of the main character.
He abused Miss An's power of reliance, and the spiritual pollution was further deepened, and the enemy in this volume was actually quite strong, but unfortunately he met Wang Quan.
This volume is invincible.,It's to encounter something and then Wang Quan solves it.,It's basically a flat push.,The theme of this volume is to save the poor white-haired little girl.,How can you be her sun if you're not invincible.,And the protagonist slashes people and the like are also more polluted.。
In addition to the style of writing, the first volume and the second volume can actually be regarded as two different protagonists.
These two volumes together are actually the prologue.
One is to talk about how the protagonist goldfinger came about, and this goldfinger has great side effects.
The other is to talk about the effects and side effects of the protagonist after getting the golden finger, and then find a way to hedge the side effects, although it is not very useful.
The infinite stream of the system that is not written is like this.,You always have to find all kinds of reasons to give the circle back.,You can't just throw it to the system and it's over, right?。
originally wrote a bunch of stories about Cheng Weihua and them, but when I looked at them like that, some of them were stinky and long, which affected the fluency of the copy, so they were all deleted as scraps.
Of course, they will appear in the future, in other dungeons, and some dungeons Wang Quan may not only go once.
The third copy begins with the text.
Because the protagonist's personality will change again in the third dungeon.
One is less crazy and more like a character who finds some balance between the first and second volumes.
The second is that this dungeon will directly expand the scope, from a mansion to a village, directly to the entire world, and the protagonist will not be invincible.
But it's still going to be quite fierce.,Compared to what I said in the group before I wrote it.,I've written two consecutive articles and entertainment very aggrieved.,So this time I'm going to write a cool book.,At least let me be cool first.。
So when my protagonist faces the girl, except for Miss An, he doesn't have that kind of look of contempt or resignation, he has already shown the coping style and attitude of a twenty-seven-year-old mature man.
Think about it, a sixteen or seventeen-year-old girl should be a heroine in a normal novel, but in the eyes of the protagonist, she is actually a little girl.
In some books, the protagonist is a student, and a girl in her early twenties is a senior sister.
But for the protagonist, twenty-six years old is a girl younger than him......
Ahem.
In short, the third copy will probably be a medium-length copy.
But it won't be the smelly and long kind, but it's a series of small story events that take place in the same world, and there is a dungeon theme at the end.
Well, the third copy is written about the rivers and lakes, which belongs to the martial arts world from Zhongwu to Gaowu, and I want to write the kind of forced style and feeling of martial arts in my heart.
I can't do it all, but I want to work hard.
How can people do it without trying new things?
There will be new girls too.,I don't know if it's a bird.,Maybe it's still a bird?
But the girl is not the point, although it is also very important, but it is not the only focus, the important thing is how to transform this river and lake, and the girl will also be transformed in the process.
I want to write something obscure, I don't know if this counts as smuggling haha.
Well, and maybe there will be Shura Field?
The highlight is probably to transform the rivers and lakes and the saint evil X?
Anyway, I hope everyone will enjoy it then.
So, here's a teaser:
Sects, courts, green forests, gate valves, and families, they are rivers and lakes, but they are not my rivers and lakes. I'm just a passing wanderer, duckweed, and I have no roots. Seeing the injustice, I pulled out a knife to help, this is my rivers and lakes.
Volume 3: Injustices in the Rivers and Lakes
Stay tuned.