This volume is summarized
In fact, there is nothing to summarize, and the testimonials on the shelves are almost summarized.
This is also evidenced by the data after it hit the shelves.
On the whole, the first two copies are fast-moving, so the third copy also pursues a fast pace according to the past writing habits, paying attention to one event after another, and striving to have at least one highlight in each chapter.
The result is a lack of foreshadowing, which leads to a disconnect between what the reader sees and what I want to say.
This is my problem, and I need to summarize and learn.
In the first two chapters, I started to remedy it.
So I sped up the pace, deleted a lot of stinky and long farming plots, and focused on fighting with girls and hardcore blood splashing tearing.
What do you say about the effect... It can only be said that it is very good.
So I also determined what people like to watch.
In fact, the way this copy is written should be after Wang Quan crossed, holding the chivalrous dream of watching martial arts.
Then, through specific events, he shows the serious disconnect between the real world and his ideas.
It is to write the chapters of the little beggar, that is, to tell the reader what happened around Wang Quan through specific events.
Originally, I wrote it here in one stroke, and I plan to write it later when I reminisce.
It didn't work very well, but I learned a lot.
Vicarious inheritance or something, it can be regarded as having a little understanding.
Appropriate pressure is due, but it needs to be written concretely, which is the so-called pulling hatred.
This doesn't have to be done by doing something to the protagonist to pull hatred, such as looking down on the protagonist or something.
Through the behavior of ordinary people subconsciously that does not conform to the three views of the protagonist, it can also be pulled to hatred, and it is not so white.
I'll pay attention to that later.
And then what everyone likes more, I probably understand.
The protagonist is handsome and the girl appears to beat the audience, as well as the tearing between the monster girls and the interaction with the protagonist.
Even the protagonist is not as handsome as the girl who appears to be handsome (pretending to be handsome).
This is clearly reflected in the background data.
But sometimes I have to write at my own pace, and of course, I try to learn and improve.
For example, the story will continue to be told, but after that I will be careful not to fake the big air.
Increase the proportion of the plot and interaction about the girl in the overall copy, don't write crookedly.
It's all good feedback that allows me to summarize my progress.
A lot of the plots that were deleted in the middle, I think it's a remedy, although it will affect the overall sense of the copy, and it seems to be more rushed, but it does outweigh the disadvantages, so I did it.
There are some places that I really don't want to delete, such as the plot of Wu Guren in the first half of this chapter.
Actually, this is exactly what I originally thought.
This world belongs to them, they are the protagonists, and they are the protagonists who change this world.
The main character is just a passerby and changes something, but he is not the core.
As mentioned at the beginning of the copy, Wang Quan is just a wanderer who passes by the rivers and lakes, duckweed, and has no roots.
The world doesn't need to remember him.
Of course, there will still be people who will remember (the little princess).
Do Luo Xiao and Wang Quan like each other at the moment? It's a little, but it's not as deep as Miss An's relationship with Ah Jiu.
It's not that I'm in a hurry, but I plan to slowly cultivate feelings in the daily plot and subsequent dungeons in the future.
There is love at first sight, there are childhood sweethearts, there are heroes who save beauty, and of course there will be long-term love.
This copy will come later, and everyone can see the tail left.
However, it is estimated that it will be several quests later, and when this quest is returned, this quest may have become a cyberpunk world or some other type of quest world.
Of course, the little princess will appear again, but that will be for a later date.
Overall, this copy has allowed me to summarize and learn a lot.
It's all in exchange for achievements, but the passion is still there, maybe this is the benefit of the original infinite stream?
The next dungeon is Hell Smash Bros., which is located in Luoyang, the main world of Wang Quan.
The girls will have a lot of scenes, and I hope it will be interesting to write.
I also hope that everyone can give me a chance, don't give up on me, hehe~~
At the end of the last dungeon, a lot of pits have also been dug, and the follow-up will be slowly unfolded, and it's still too early.
The blind date is still talking, and there is no small single chapter for the time being.
Thank you for the reward, I remember.,At the end of the month, a separate chapter will be opened to thank all the readers who have rewarded the whole month.,Thank you~~.
Finally, a teaser of the next dungeon.
[Volume 4: The Old Stories of Luoyang]
[This is my hometown, but it seems to have become a little different.
At the very least, the old electric cars didn't run around on their own in the middle of the night, there were no cars that could run around on their own, Buddha statues couldn't speak, and there weren't so many strange things after midnight.
And that strangely dressed group of strangers who weren't supposed to be here.
This is my hometown, this group of strangers, who need to be evicted. 】