The guest officers gave feedback on various questions, and the boy read them carefully one by one, and also reflected on and summarized the opinions of the guest officers.

It is undeniable that the recent plot advancement is indeed very problematic, which makes the guest officers complain very much, and last night I thought of it in the middle of the night, this is indeed the boy's problem.

For example, it is too wordy, such as too blunt, etc., which are the crux of the problem.

For example, Blackbeard is dead?

However, the root of death and immortality is not in Blackbeard's life, but in the fact that the kid did not pass the circle of literature and science, and did not advance the plot for granted, so that the content that the guest officials saw was that the author just did not let Blackbeard die.

In the final analysis, the plot control ability is not enough, and the plot can't be made naturally, so that it is too rough and unpleasant to watch.

This is the fault of the boy, ladies and gentlemen, sorry!!

In fact, there are still holes that have not been filled in the war at the top of the war, such as the true identity of the "firefighter regiment", is it really a reincarnation? No, at least not yet, this needs to be explained.

And the next thing is to lay the foundation for the founding of the country, and it is also a big event of "Melting all races, for one country" of "Melting All Races, for One Country" mentioned at the end of chapter 68 of the "Phantom Benji" Volume 2 - "The Lord of the Netherworld, the Monarch and the Minister's Meeting", and the first step is to make the beginning of the big event-Sea Dragon Palace.

Then, it's time to "go out".

There are many more stories to tell, but if there are no readers to watch them, it will become the author's self-congratulation, which is too boring.

There are cold IOO, steroids, the old years, do not blow no black sky, black cat rhapsody and other valuable opinions of the guests, carefully put forward, and did not say directly abandon the book, did not directly scold, in the end it is to leave a line, thanks, may spend a good moon, good beginning and finish, if there is disharmony in the future story, please continue to propose, as long as it is reasonable, will be considered.

The kid will try his best to improve, at least not for the sake of the future story, the current plot will be too blunt, which makes people unhappy to watch, after all, the kid is the author at the same time, but also the reader.

Thanks to the guest officials who have been chasing and voting for it, I am grateful, if one day, there is no one reader, it is better to let "Tracing the Origin" go with the wind and leave a lonely heart.

The results of this book are far less than expected, in the end, it makes the kid a little tired, and now because of the lack of time to go to work, the smell of tea at night is always strong.

But in the end, how can there be an easy word in the adult world, but as long as there are still people who listen to my story, only stick to one word, how can they end up without a problem?

As I said in this article, I want to be the person in the story, and I want to be the one who listens to the story, and I want to be the one who tells the story well.

Don't forget the original intention, I hope to be able to always encourage each other.

Sincerely

Boy, sass