Chapter 659: The Night Game Member Who Missed His Talent Point (Part II)
And then an hour,
Two hours
Three hours....
The sky in the magic capital outside was slowly dark, and Jota, who had been squatting on the chair and felt that his legs were a little numb, didn't know how many times he secretly glanced at Fang Ran's position, and found that he had turned over and changed sides,
I also reached out and pulled the potato chips that I didn't know why I hadn't finished eating.
After thinking about it for so long, Jota, who felt that he should say something, finally decided to ask, 'Fang Ran, are you hungry'...
"Hmm.... Ah~~~"
Seeing Fang Ran stretching his waist and sitting up, and then licking the potato chip residue at the corner of his mouth, he sighed with a thoughtful expression:
โemmm... How to say it, it's written quite immaturely, and what is written at the beginning is also a failure, the pace of plot development is slow, and it is full of a smell of literary and lyrical people, and there are too many descriptions in many places, and it is written by a very immature pure newcomer at a glance,"
"The most fatal reason why no one can read your book and sign the contract is that what you write is not a serious fantasy online article at all, there is no monster upgrade, pretending to be forced to slap your face, what you write is all the pictures and the world you imagine, which does not meet the market demand, so you will hit the street so badly."
Jota looked at him blankly, looking at Fang Ran's helpless sigh, his eyes reflecting the light and shadow of half of the screen he had written.
"I said, very few people read books like you pursue these, especially fantasy classification, most people just for cool, for relaxation, for entertainment, this is the market demand, I have a friend who also writes books, he told me to write that he wants to write a story at the same time, but also to have so that you don't hit the street so miserable, even a little achievement of the reader, it's a very lucky thing, but obviously your book does not have this kind of luck."
But when he said this, he paused when he looked at the icon that said 'You have seen the latest chapter' displayed on the tablet in his hand.
"But that's what I like."
Hearing Fang Ran's last words, Jota, who had been in a daze since just now, looked at him,
Suddenly, a clear liquid trickled down his face.
"Hey, hey, hey, what I said was so ruthless, you won't cry to me, will you?!"
"Ahh It's not, it's just... Head.. The first time someone told me how I felt after reading it, I was... So excited! โ
Seeing the tears falling silently, Fang Ran, who was in a panic in an instant, suddenly became in a hurry, but Jota came back to his senses and quickly wiped it and didn't care, his eyes welled up with unprecedented brilliance, and he looked at Fang Ran eagerly and even slurred his words.
"That! Can you say it again! You repeat what you just said... Let.. Let me record it! โ
Fang Ran(; ฬะด ฬ) uh...
Not only does your child have a communication disorder and like to press the switch of his own wounds, but he also likes to abuse himself?
So he patted Jota on the shoulder earnestly, and got goosebumps slightly at the thought that a boy still wanted to record his words, so an old man looked at him kindly and said:
"I said Yota, let's go home, but we can't have this strange fetish, and you see I've given you valuable advice, in return you should tell me where the other problem child in our bureau is?"
Jotta, who was stunned by Fang Ran's nonsense, subconsciously substituted himself into the ranks of problem children, looked at him stunned and replied:
"Are you going to Sister Orange? Then you can use the simple jump-space teleportation I put in the corner of the living room, Sister Yesheng, and you can get there by jumping through the main station of the night bureau. โ
When he heard this, Fang Ran complained expressionlessly.
"Anyway, with such a convenient means, why do you want me to fly over to find you."
"Uh... Because I'm afraid that everyone in the bureau will arrest me, I usually lock it up..."
Fang Ran: emmm....
Can you die a little more?
"Compared to that, you can re..."
"Okay, don't have to worry about the money to buy a plane ticket, thank God, then we're ready to go."
"Huh?"
Jota, who was originally eagerly mixed with joy and wanted Fang Ran to say it again so that he could record it, listened to Fang Ran's helpless interruption, and the whole person was stunned in the chair.
We...?
"Wait, I don't..."
At the moment when he reacted to the meaning of Fang Ran's words, he just wanted to hug the back of the seat, relying on this special seat belt that he had strengthened and fixed on the ground and could never be opened without a password to resist.
I felt light, and the whole body floated up without gravity, and the next second it was tied into a dumpling by a cloud of darkness and was resisted by Fang Ran on his shoulder.
Huh!?
When I looked down in a daze, I found that my special seat belt had been melted and broken.
"Yo Si! Catch it's done, Pipita, let's go! โ
"Don't! Wait a minute! Fang Ran! I'm not going! I haven't finished writing today's update yet! Put me down! โ
Jota, who was tied up by the [Shadow Card], suddenly struggled fiercely on Fang Ran's shoulder, but the body of the technologist.... You know.
Listening to his struggle, Fang Ran grinned indifferently, and said comfortingly:
"Heh, just the speed of your finger Zen, you can't finish writing today if I put you down, and anyway, I'm chasing it alone, and the pigeon is the pigeon, after all, the author is a creature that is independent of the zodiac, and it belongs to the pigeon."
"The most important thing is that you can write something good in a small dark room all day long, the most important thing in writing is enthusiasm and inspiration, and to get enthusiasm and inspiration, of course, you have to go out to fish!"
โ... True.. It's true...? โ
"I lied to you."
โ......โ
Kicking open the door of his small black room, Fang Ran found that he didn't know when the light in the living room had been turned on, and then when Jota struggled loudly to resist but did not egg, he looked like a bad guy and ran to the corner of the living room with Jota with a bad smile, and before a follow-up device occupied the ring of a room, he pressed the start switch.
"Emma Emma, can you hear me, I've got Jota, set me up to jump to another person."
The cold-toned and graceful leap rings lit up one by one with a faint blue light after Fang Ran activated, and then Emma's voice rang out.
"Identity confirmed, participant-Fang Ran, participant-Jota, in accordance with the space jump permit."
"The space jump has been set."
Hearing that Emma's voice had been confirmed, Jota suddenly shouted anxiously after being held on the shoulder!
"Wait! Cancel! Cancel! I'm not going out! I don't want to go out! โ
"Less nonsense, go you!"
Seeing that the little weak man on his shoulder still wanted to resist, Fang Ran threw him directly into the space dimension, and then found that the tablet was still in his hand.
At the moment when I wanted to put it down, I looked at the collection of '10' and seemed to understand something...
Scratching his head and sighing, he signed up with his usual account and selected 'Add to Bookshelf'.
Then at the moment when he was about to jump into the leap door of the leap-space hub, the door of the living room was suddenly opened, and a very gentle middle-aged man with glasses walked in with three cups of coffee, and was slightly stunned when he saw Fang Ran in the living room,
But then he showed a warm smile like an elder, and his voice matched the face of the Chinese character with a thick smile.
"Are you leaving?"
"Uh... That one... I...."
Fang Ran was suddenly a little dazed and at a loss, he looked at the jump device beside him, and Jota, who had been thrown into it by himself, probably guessed that this was his uncle's mouth twitched, and he didn't know how to explain the loss of his nephew.
"It's okay, it's okay, I know you're also from that department, I came once in the afternoon, and I didn't bother when I saw that you were all quiet."
"Ahh No, I'm just too embarrassed to bother. โ
Seeing that the other party waved his hand and smiled, being infected by the other party's easy understanding and gentleness, Fang Ran subconsciously became polite, and just when he didn't know what to say, the middle-aged man with the Chinese character face in front of him smiled, as if he had guessed Fang Ran's embarrassing smile.
"This child's parents are busy abroad, and since he was a child, because he is much better than his peers, no one has been friends with him, and after knowing his ability and talent, there are many people who want to use him, I have always been worried about what he will do now, and thank you for letting him have someone other than me to talk to."
Speaking of this, Fang Ran was slightly stunned as he watched the man in front of him put down the plate in his hand, and seriously spoke to him with gratitude leaning forward slightly, his voice mixed with relief and relief.
"Thank you for watching him."