"I remember someone said that the most taboo developments in serialized works are the change of the protagonist halfway, the time span is too long, and the dead heroine ......"

"Who said that?"

"Me!"

“…… Did you know that you put on a smug face and puffed up your chest at the same time, looking like you were showing off to me? ”

“Shut up！ I'm talking to you about comics! ”

"Your face is red."

“Shut up！”

“……”

Half an hour has passed since Rina Shirakawa cried, or was made to cry by Gu Xue, during which Gu Xue wanted to continue the comic topic just now, but the process was not very smooth.

Causes of unhappiness.

Mainly after Rina Shirakawa regained her calm.

Discover Gu Xue.

This woman she regarded as her lifelong enemy.

Super easy to deal with......

This made her happily start interrupting Gu Xue.

Rigidly turned the comic teaching scene into a special crosstalk pole raising session......

"Do you listen or not?"

However, after being interrupted several times, Gu Xue finally showed obvious impatience.

"Listen."

"Then you shut up for me!" Gu Xue glared at Rina Shirakawa, "I'll throw you out if you raise the bar again, if you have any questions, I'll mention them later, and I'm not allowed to say anything other than comics." ”

"You were showing it off......"

"Nope! That's your delusion! In addition to comics, sh. Moh. All. Other. To give. I. Raise! ”

"Okay, you can say it."

Rina Shirakawa flicked her ponytail, her face expressionless

But I don't know if it's Gu Xue's illusion.

She felt that Rina Shirakawa smiled brightly......

"......," Gu Xue took a deep breath, "Where did you just talk about...... The train of thought interrupted you.,Oh,The most taboo unfolding.,Changing the protagonist halfway.,The time span is too long and the dead heroine.。 ”

"Actually, these are quite easy to understand, change the protagonist halfway...... I've used an analogy, if our life is a big drama, you were originally the main character, and the original work was to show that you were happily creating comics, but suddenly, one day, the main character was changed to me, and the story changed from you happily drawing comics to my daily fishing...... It's hard for the audience to accept. ”

"As for the time span is too long, it's better to understand, or the metaphor just now, this is a big play, I'm the protagonist, and then in the last sentence I'm still happily playing with Miss Mihara, and the next word is that I and the old and decrepit Miss Mihara support each other, trembling to the bar, trembling raised his hand, after clinking glasses, tons and tons of tons of beer, the sunset red breath came to my face...... Who can stand this, right? ”

Rina Shirakawa: "......"

"As for the dead heroine, or to put it another way, dead main characters. Although a good character exit can advance the plot, connect the previous and the next, and even sublimate the whole work, but you obviously don't have such an ability now, in the early stage of the comics, Alice's exit is portrayed well, but please don't mess around too much, this is really a double-edged sword. ”

"Well, with that said, think about what you just showed me in the latest scroll? Suddenly, seven years later, the male protagonist and the second male disappeared, and Alice's father died...... Although he is not an important character, don't you hit the muzzle of the gun? ”

"It was originally a two-hero play.,Now I haven't seen one of the two heroes.,It's a character who is completely unfamiliar to comic book readers carrying the beam.,And it's not like a dragon set at all.,It's reminiscing about the past and getting to know the beautiful young lady.,The three words you brought.,He's completely the protagonist.,I read the outline after you.,This situation will continue for a long time.。 Let's be honest.,Who cares what kind of young lady he has in the past and what kind of young lady he meets.,Is it okay for you to let him die?,I want to see the male protagonist and the second male! ”

Rina Shirakawa: "......"

"Your comics have been going downhill since they finished telling Alice's chapter, and they need to be changed, yes, but it's not changed like this, at least it's not to hide the male protagonist and male children, and then make an inexplicable change seven years later."

Rina Shirakawa: "Then what do you say?" ”

"Am I Doraemon?" Gu Xue rolled her eyes, "I can only ...... from the perspective of ordinary comic book readers At the same time, mixed with the identity of the animation supervisor to give you an analysis of how you can't draw like this.,It's very unpleasant.,How to change it.,Or you have to think about it yourself.,After all, this is your work.,You need opinions.,But it doesn't mean you need to add multiple names to the author column.。 ”

Rina Shirakawa thought for a while and said, "You can add, thank you for that or something......"

Gu Xue said helplessly: "So I'm not Doraemon, I don't know how to draw, in fact, I've seen a lot of works...... More than you can imagine, many of the works almost touch the minefield I just mentioned, but they are still beautiful. It's not an iron law.,It's not so much an iron law.,It's more like a suggestion.,You can listen to it and think about it carefully.,Of course it's good to adjust the comics.,If you can't adjust it.,A road to the black will have a good result.。 When Alice left the first and second volumes, your editor-in-charge was also against it, right? When you first released a few words, you were also sprayed by comic book readers, right? But in the end, the feedback was not bad, and this is a vivid example. ”

"......" Shirakawa Rina glanced at Gu Xue, and then said softly: "You are really irresponsible, a second ago, you devalued the plot of the latest volume I conceived as worthless, and now you tell me that if you don't develop the plot according to your own ideas, there will be a good result......"

"That's what it is."

Gu Xue sighed and collapsed on the sofa: "It's not to solve math problems, there is no fixed answer, and I will never be able to figure out the tastes of the audience...... No one can guarantee that what they create will sell well, and no one can guarantee that what they create will be liked. ”

"However, your current plot development,According to my experience,It's really not going to satisfy most comic book readers.,My suggestion is,You can change your thinking.,Draw a few words to end the previous volume.,Don't be too detailed.,Too detailed I guess you can't tell.,After all, what did you draw in the last volume...... But it must make the audience feel that the story of the last volume is over, and then you can adjust the time spanning, a few months later, etc., so that the male protagonist returns to the misty forest for some reason, and revisits the old place, and then meets the man who crawled out of the dragon cave, and then unfolds the plot, which will be better. ”

“……”

Rina Shirakawa showed a thoughtful expression, and it seemed that she had listened.

"Of course, I'm just suggesting." Gu Xue added, "I can only give advice on things like plot development that have almost no answers and standards." ”

"What I want to teach you, or what I have the confidence to teach you, is something more specific, and relatively standard - composition and storyboarding."

"In short, it's the part of the painting."

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