The contents of the first volume come to an abrupt end here.

Yuzu took a deep breath.

After reading it, what do you say?

She felt that this time, the other party's style had really changed a lot.

It's not at all as profound as the previous two works.

Although the friendship entanglements of these adolescent girls are described in great detail, they are too ordinary compared to the deep feelings in "Violet Evergarden" or the forgotten fate in "Your Name".

Of course, this is not to say that Su Chen's level has dropped.

Plain is true, mediocrity is the root of all stories.

It's just that he suddenly changed his style, which made Yuzu quite uncomfortable.

If you want to talk about the good details in this work, as a discerning editor, she can list no less than ten.

The little ghost who is worthy of the title of "Blade God of War" undoubtedly makes the character more vivid and complex because of his casual actions and expressions, as well as his attitude portrayal of the characters in the work.

For example, after An Ming argued with Renta and left, he started to walk quickly to a slow stop, and then stared at his hands......

It's like Renta's slight tilt of gaze when he spoke ill of his face after encountering Axue's blow......

The psychological dynamics and character characteristics expressed by countless subtle portrayals can be clearly and intuitively accepted by the audience.

It is the intermingling of these details in the daily life that makes the story real and the characters full.

After reading all the texts in the first volume, Yuzu couldn't help but raise her head and stare at Su Chen.

"What do you always see me doing?"

Su Chen looked at him with disgust.

I don't review the manuscript well and always look up at me......

If you want to use beauty tricks, just say it.

But before that, even if you stick to me, I won't write you an outline (seriously).

"Your new work is really different from your previous work."

Yuzu sighed lightly, a little unsure of how to describe it.

Su Chen said half-jokingly: "What do you say? Isn't it going to be on fire? ”

"Fire should be able to ...... fire," Yuzu, "but, your work this time doesn't have a plot like stomach pain, which makes me feel so unreal." ”

A whole basket of blades is ready for nothing.

As she spoke, she pinched her face, this was the second time she had done this today.

"God has a stomach ache, when did I write that kind of plot?" Su Chen's face darkened.

These are such excellent emotional works, but you say it's a stomach ache?

It's just too much!

Then again.

The reason why the other party would tell him this, he can probably guess it.

After all, the first volume, that is, the plot of the first half of the animation, is really nothing to look at, and the ordinary daily life is slowly full of foreshadowing.

If it weren't for Su Chen's fame here, Yuzu would have thought that this was a street work.

With such a people-friendly plot of the work, Yuzu has nothing to point out and evaluate.

After taking some time to determine the layout order of the illustrations and some precautions, the publication is basically a certainty.

When Yuzu returns, I will contact the publisher, and then it will be officially released as soon as possible.

——This is exactly what the editor-in-chief and all the senior management mean, a super first-line light writer like Mr. Xiaogui, the sooner the better.

However, Yuzu has just come here today, and according to the pre-arrangement, she will stay here for a while, which is the so-called inspection work.

Authors who can enjoy this treatment are rare.

"You're pretty big in this shop, aren't you?"

After the audit work, Yuzu also stretched and observed the situation in the lounge.

Judging from the configuration, this lounge is actually more luxurious than the apartment she lives in the magic capital, which is really outrageous.

Especially the bed.

There is a European-style single bed for sleeping, and a day bed for daytime rest.

Not only that, but a brand-new LCD TV, a household refrigerator, a solid wood wardrobe, a coffee table, and a solid wood table......

Damn, is this heaven?

Feeling the soft touch of the day bed, the fatigue of her whole body made her want to lie down and sleep well now.

Running all the way, my neck and shoulders have long been sore from the seat card of the plane.

"This bed is really good, I think I'll sleep here at night."

Said tentatively to Su Chen, Yuzu was already eager to try, and planned to lie on the bed.

Su Chen's tone said without fluctuation: "Oh, that's my bed, I can't go home after working overtime, so I'll sleep there." ”

"Huh?"

Yuzu froze, then sat up slightly embarrassed, her cheeks slightly hot, and she couldn't stop coughing.

"Lie to you, how can this store have overtime at all? Basically everything in this lounge is new. Su Chen showed a happy evil smile, "If you want to live, I don't have a problem." ”

"Ahem, no need......" The grapefruit is as thin as a mosquito.

It's just a lounge, how could she really live here!

His eyes moved away with some embarrassment, and soon, a machine in the corner attracted Yuzu's attention.

It was a pure black foot massager.

This is a massage device used to relieve fatigue, about the size of a rice cooker, as soon as the power is turned on, the switch is pressed, and then you can enjoy the pleasure of foot massage when you put your feet inside.

The mechanical roller inside is constantly rotating, and the foot can be massaged naturally and comfortably.

For those social animals with too much work, it is a decompression artifact.

"Hey, do you still have this thing?"

Pointing to the foot massager, Yuzu was a little tempted.

She had used this machine once, and it was a rare and convenient machine for someone like her who didn't spend much money on massages.

Su Chen glanced in the direction that the other party was pointing, this thing is said to have been bought by Store Manager Xu in the early days, in preparation for the prosperity of the store in the future, and what to say to reward employees.

However, in fact, this store has never prospered at all, and no one has ever lived in such a luxurious lounge, let alone a foot massager.

Since the day after I bought it, the instrument has been sitting in the corner and eating ashes until now.

"Oh, you say this? You can use it if you want to, you're welcome, it's also new. ”

So he replied casually and took out the instrument disappreciatively.

His eyes flickered, and after a few polite gestures, Yuzu accepted it happily.

She has a lot of work these days, and she has to travel across the city, which is really tiring.

After taking off her slippers generously and sticking her foot into the instrument, she turned on the power.

Buzz Buzz –

A subtle vibrating sound is heard, indicating that the instrument is working.

"Hmm-"

The hot and comfortable touch instantly intoxicated the yuzu.

Comfortable, comfortable.

Su Chen opened another bottle of juice and chatted with each other without a match.

Meanwhile.

What he would never have imagined was......

Outside the door.

Attracted by the unusual vibrating sound, Tone Yarn and Wind Feather crouched by the door with concerned faces.

Like two spies infiltrating the enemy's interior.

"This ...... What is this sound? No, it can't be that, right? ”

Feng Yu lowered his voice and looked at Yin Sha with a frightened face.

The latter gave her a silent gesture with a serious expression, while his ears were pressed against the door panel, eavesdropping intently.

Seeing this, Feng Yu took a deep breath, followed the appearance of Yin Sha, and also leaned on the door panel with a resolute face.

At the same time, she was still silently chanting in her heart, "This is worried about the teacher", "This is worried about the teacher", "It is never eavesdropping", "It is never eavesdropping......

……