Yes, there are still a few chapters left in the first volume of the Chang'an Rebellion.

Personally, I am not very happy with the first volume.

First of all, it made the common mistake of new authors at the beginning, throwing a lot of unpleasant settings.

Then there is the problem of writing, some readers feel that there is too much nonsense in the text, too long-winded, which I admit, and I also reflect, and I am also trying to simplify the text.

In fact, this problem is because when I write an article, I always want to explain everything to everyone, for fear that the reader will have doubts, for example, every decision made by a character in the book, I want to explain why he did it, but in fact, in most cases, I don't need to explain, you know, even after I explain, it doesn't have that taste.

This is the biggest realization for me is that the author can't write everything when writing a book, in fact, whether for the reader or for the author, letting the reader imagine and ponder some plots by himself is more interesting than the author being thorough.

The last big problem is the problem of setting.

The settings were all done in advance, but in the case of encounters, some of the settings I expected should be fine, but after writing dozens of chapters, I suddenly found that they were not very suitable.

For example, the skill of Tianyan Technique, some people may notice that I basically don't write anymore in the future, not that I forgot, but that this skill is too buggy.

The first set of this skill was to keep a hand for himself, as long as this skill was there, it meant that the disguise of the monk of the underworld was nowhere to hide in front of Lu Qingshan, and there was no such thing as Kawen. (And the number of words in the information panel is quite a lot~)

Later, I wrote and wrote, and found that it was indeed easy to write like this, but the story became boring.

I still hope that Lu Qingshan can solve problems with his own brain, rather than relying on this brainless skill, so I can only use Spring and Autumn brushwork to silently dilute this skill later. (Let's just think that this skill was deleted by the designer because it was too strong...... ）

By the way, I would like to explain to you the more controversial points in the book.

First of all, Lu Qingshan's legendary talent [Innate Sword Species], many people feel that it is too weak to be called a legendary talent.

In fact, in my setting, this talent is really strong and strong, but it is more manifested in the hidden aspect than in the data, but at present, I can only explain this first, because it will be a spoiler if I continue to talk about it.

The power of the [Innate Sword Species] will begin to be reflected in the next second volume.

As for the main content of the second volume, careful readers should be able to guess what it is, after all, there are still quite a lot of hints, and even the Crying Soul Sword was killed by the plot because of this.

The other thing is the setting of attributes, in a word, attributes are not important, the meaning of attributes from the beginning is just to distinguish the six professions, so don't worry about why sword cultivation is a strength attribute.

Also, do some readers feel that there are too many female characters in the book? In fact, there is no need at all, these female characters are not heroines, but they are just plot characters with female gender, why should everyone care, and I don't see anyone complaining about too many male characters, why are there more female characters and they are complained.

After all, this is the first book I have written, and there are actually quite a lot of problems, so I won't repeat them all for the time being.

If I go back and read the previous chapters now, it will be obvious that there are many things that need to be corrected, from the small words used to the sentences, and the large plot settings.

But this is a good thing in my opinion, after all, I can find the previous shortcomings, at least it means that I am improving.

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The next thing is to put it on the shelves.,This book will be on the shelves on May Day.,That is, tomorrow's shelves.,According to the convention, thank you in charge of the editor-in-charge for being willing to sign my book.。

And then I hope that everyone who has the ability to support the subscription.,Or students or if you don't have enough money.,Can't fully subscribe and understand.,Try to support a first subscription.,After all, the first order of a chapter is a dime.。

Finally, let's talk about the update, I have been updating very little, in addition to my own laziness and procrastination, there are indeed objective difficulties.

One is that this is my first book, I have no previous writing experience, and I have not yet gotten used to the rhythm of writing online articles, I am too easily entangled when writing articles, and I often delete and revise back and forth in small places such as words and sentences, word order and tone for half a day, wasting a lot of time.

Second, because I am a graduate, I am facing trivial matters such as graduation thesis and employment, and it is really difficult to concentrate on writing the essay, and then I will face miscellaneous matters such as defense in May and June, so the update may not be fast for the time being, so I apologize to you first, and when this period passes, I will try to bring the update up!

Finally, although there are still many problems, I will continue to correct and improve, thank you for your tolerance and support, bow!