A summary of recent plot design and writing insights

In other words, it's been a long time since I've opened a single chapter to discuss my writing experience with all handsome book friends.

Taking advantage of the fact that the updates have been quite good in the past few days, Qiao decisively decided to open a single chapter to share with you the recent plot design summary.

Of course, before discussing the plot with your handsome readers......

Ladies and gentlemen, the appointment has arrived, and we welcome your monthly passes and recommended tickets to return to their places? (Nike laughs.jpg.) )

2333333, let's get down to business!

First of all, from chapters 251 to 338, in the content of 80 chapters, we explained how Su Feng and the Raptors in the 98/99 season went from building the team to winning the championship, and then to the plot of the national team, and the turning point of the 99/00 season, as well as paving the way for the brawl pattern of the next few years in the NBA.

So before talking about the follow-up plot, let's talk about why Qiao designed Su Feng to win the first championship of his career in the 98/99 season?

First, Qiao has said before that basketball is also a sports article, and the most difficult thing is that because basketball itself is a recreation of reality and the same person, no matter how the author controls it, as the number of seasons of the protagonist increases, the future story will be prone to lack of suspense and rhythm collapse.

Moreover, there is general aesthetic fatigue in sports literature.

That is, the reversal is too annoying, the record is too annoying, the protagonist is invincible for a long time, the protagonist is annoyed if he doesn't win, the protagonist is annoyed when he wins, and so on.

Therefore, Qiao arranged for Jordan to join the Raptors in a reasonable way, the purpose of which was to arrange for Su Feng to win the championship in the 98/99 season, and complete the inheritance with Jordan by the way.

In terms of writing, this is called "spoiler writing", that is, the author first explains the ending, and then foreshadows the process.

For those who use suspense to attract attention, the biggest drawback of this style of writing is that if your process can't catch the reader, it will easily cause follow-up loss.

I have to say, I'm really grateful to all of you here.

Because although the previous update is not powerful, even if it is a pretty "one more beast, two days and one more beast" period, the pretty chase has been stable around 5000 to 6000. (Oh, by the way, we're about to break 10,000 in a loss, and I beg all the big guys to come to the starting point to read and support A Quiet!) )

Therefore, if you look closely, readers who chase it all the way down will find that the purpose of Qiao is to adopt a "spoiler style......

It is not for the process of going to the water competition, on the premise that the ending has already been explained, and then a lot of pen and ink is spent to describe how Su Feng should win the championship.

Because in Qiao's original setting, Su Feng just had to win the first championship of his career in the 98/99 season.

So, in my layout, winning or not winning is not the most important thing.

As the saying goes, one ring is one ring.

Then now the problem arises again.

Why does Su Feng have to win the championship this season in the pretty setting?

Because according to Qiao's design, Qiao will have a lot of plot twists in the future, and I said that it is impossible for Su Feng to win more than ten consecutive championships in a book of 20 seasons, so in terms of writing, this is also called giving readers a candy first.

Giving readers a piece of candy first can give readers the courage and motivation to continue chasing books, and at the same time, it can also increase the trust between readers and authors.

In short, Shuangwen must be cool, but for the sake of reasonable coolness, we must also have twists and turns.

Therefore, judging from the timeline, winning the championship in the shrinking season not only has the least impact on my next layout, but also allows Su Feng to have the upper hand in the battle between him and O'Neal, Duncan and others.

After all, in this way, Su Feng was the first of the three to win the championship, and in terms of momentum, as long as he achieved more honors than Duncan and O'Neill in the future, then he would be able to suppress these two gods.

Therefore, in the case of telling you the ending in advance, throughout the 98/99 season, the focus of Qiao has always been on the so-called character description.

For example, Su Feng's daily life with Maddie and Carter, for example, I spent a lot of space explaining Su Feng's next opponents, such as I created a hard-mouthed Pierce, and for example, after the 98/99 season, in order to complete the improvement of Su Feng's strength, I spent a lot of pen and ink to describe Su Feng's strength in detail.

Including at the beginning of this season, what you said, in order to write Su Feng's toughness, I can even spend half a chapter.

In Qiao's opinion, an excellent book should not only have a fast pace and excellent characters, as well as a good plot, but also a portrayal of the characters and a side description.

After all, if I skip a lot of things, then when you come back to rewatch it later, you will find that the image of Su Feng's character can't stand up at all.

But until now, I believe many readers have also seen it, whether it is Su Feng, Iverson, or Kobe, I have been writing about the world in which Su Feng lives as a real parallel world.

So, in the midst of this, I will definitely intersperse some details, and even sometimes, a game will be explained in one sentence, but I can write a detail for a long time.

Because only details can increase the authenticity and reasonableness, and the increase of authenticity and rationality can cause resonance in the sense of substitution.

And you know, it's much easier to write about a contest than it is to write about such details.

So, that's why I say that I sometimes have to polish a chapter for five, six, seven, or eight hours, or even ten hours.

Some people say, "Pretty guys, you can write faster, and it doesn't matter if the quality is poor."

But here's the problem, maybe my catch-up will be higher, but my average subscription will never be as high as it is now.

Because it's simple.

In that way, many friends who choose to raise first and then slaughter, or those who chase all the way, will have an obvious psychological gap when chasing books and rereading.

As I said, I have to write iron to a quality that I can reread several times myself.

And this kind of quality is not as simple as fixing three or two typos.

What chapters, what time nodes, what kind of plot to write.

This chapter, what kind of writing style is used, and whose perspective is it written.

In the next chapter, how to carry out the transition and foreshadowing, and how to connect after the foreshadowing and overlaying, these are all things that take time to polish.

Therefore...... Since Qiao himself suffered a series of blows in reality, for the sake of quality, many times, I really want to communicate with you, but because of the lack of updates, I don't even dare to get on QQ.

Recently, though, the state has really recovered a lot.

So, thank you again for your support! Thank you for your patience and confidence.

Thanks again.

Okay, let's get down to business.

Next, let's talk about the latest foreshadowing.

Some people say, pretty guys, your history has become too big, right?

Alas......

Wake up, if I write for 20 seasons and all the players are the same, what's the difference between that and letting you go to the Little Break Station to find the NBA's commentary video to watch?

As I said before, the biggest problem with sports writing is that after a few seasons of writing, most of the old readers will be able to write it for you.

But at least for now, I don't think you can guess the future of this book.

As I said, there are some people I don't move the trajectory of my career, but there are some people I have to move.

For example, for some reason, based on my personal conjecture of reality, Duncan went to the Celtics.

For some reason, I took great pains to foreshadow Xiao Yao, and I had a chat with the eggplant next door before......

In fact, this Han Han actually planned to let Xiao Yao continue to go to Mosaic before, and I said to him directly at that time, Xiao Yao is here in your book, why do you want to go to Mosaic?

Won't the appearance of your protagonist bring about a change in history?

So the question is, if everything is set in stone, then why don't I just use the indigenous protagonist, but I have to use the protagonist of the crossing?

The reason is very simple, as early as when I was preparing to write about iron, I thought that I should follow my train of thought.

In my world, the main character is hanging, but I also have to respect the IQ of the other teams and the IQ of the players who are at the same time.

Just like Su Feng will improve, Kobe Bryant will improve, the Raptors have a luxury package, the Celtics also have a new version of the four-star team, and the Lakers also have a new Big Three.

There are a lot of stars in this era, so why not let them have a thrilling brawl?

Write a basketball essay that you are familiar with, but also unfamiliar with.

That's what I wanted to do when I started the book.

You're familiar with this player and this era, but what's unfamiliar is my layout and my unpredictability of the suspense that follows.

Only in this way can I guarantee that when I write about the last season, you still don't know if Su Feng really wants to retire, it is really the last season of his career.

And you don't know what kind of honor Su Feng will get, and at what point in time he will become the first person in the NBA.

Of course, Qiao's ability to come up with so many sassy operations is also related to the fact that you have provided me with a lot of ideas in the chapter review.

Well...... I'm an author who never copies chapter reviews, I'm just a porter of good chapter reviews.

In short, I hope that I can keep writing my thoughts to the end, because even if it is a small breakthrough, in Qiao's opinion, this step must be taken.

Otherwise, one for another...... I don't know if I'll ever want to write basketball after my passion for basketball has worn off.

So let's say it......

Water is not water, to be honest, this thing is benevolent and wise. Because I feel like a lot of people think differently about "water" now.

For example, some people just like to see the plump details, while some people just like to watch one game after another.

And just like when I look back at Saint Seiya now, I can't stand it at all.

Because don't you think that Saint Seiya has no daily life at all, and many plots and the characters that Che Tian wants to create can't stand up at all? (The main thing is that there are a lot of bugs.) )

On the contrary, in many daily episodes, although there are not so many punches, I feel the charm of the characters and the attraction of the author's character to me.

Anyway, it's still the same sentence......

When it's time to jump the plot, Qiao can finish a season in a few chapters, but when I need to lay the groundwork for my plot this season, Qiao will spend a lot of chapters to fill in the details, and when I need to be enthusiastic, Qiao will also spend 100,000 words to describe a series.

Each plot has its own focus.

And only by stringing together all these corresponding points will you not feel abrupt when I wrote about Jordan joining the Raptors......

Only reasonable foreshadowing and inference can make the plot go on smoothly.

Therefore, Qiao has always been a codeword tool that has no feelings.

I won't adjust this way of writing, because as I said, it's not like a few paragraphs can be done with an outline.

As an author of iron, it is even more impossible for me to give up this kind of thinking for the sake of a certain achievement.

Therefore......

Thank you very much for your support.

After all, without your support, I wouldn't have dared to try so many new ideas and routines in the iron strike so willfully.

Of course, it's still the same sentence......

As an author, pretty is also just right!

I can't afford to buy pork, and the recent days have been so bitter that I can only look at the yard of my hometown in the countryside, and there are still Pipi shrimp without heat stroke and Pipi chicken sauce purple in a depressed mood......

Cry chirp!

Crooked, this wave is not miserable!

It's asking for a monthly pass, it's asking for a recommendation ticket!

Those readers who typed "next time", you are pitiful and pitiful! Don't "next time"!